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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Timtrent (talk | contribs) at 20:58, 21 January 2007 (Griffin, David Ray in The Hidden History (will fix ref).). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Here are some tasks awaiting attention: Cleanup : *The citations have got out of hand. The various variations of the {{cite}} template need to be used, but there seem to be a great number which are imperfectly cited. Please pick up any that simply show as a url and visit (eg) cite web to determine the most appropriate template to put inside the ref. This is reinforced by the most recent Peer Review comment about consistency. The full set of templates are at Misplaced Pages:Citation templates The ref for In response to concerns about the destruction of evidence, W. Gene Corley, head of the Building Performance Assessment Team on the site, stated, that "The team has had full access to the scrap yards and to the site and has been able to obtain numerous samples." at http://www.house.gov/science/hearings/full02/mar06/corley.htm does not lead to the expected story Copyedit : * From Peer Review One thing I would note is that grammar and phrasing are very important for "Featured Articles." I noticed a few phrases in the introduction that were awkward at best. Example: "The collapse of 7 World Trade Center (not hit by any plane)..." In this case, the interjection would flow much better if it was "which was not hit by a plane", or perhaps it should be removed entirely. The whole article should be examined for tone by a seasoned editor. Expand : *Fix this reference: Griffin, David Ray in The Hidden History (will fix ref). Other : *Continually monitor the Peer Review feedback, discuss it and incorporate the agreed items, making sure feedback is left on the Peer Review page Examine these references and determine whether they fit and where they fit. and add them if appropriate, giving feedback on completion