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Women in Red | December 2021, Volume 7, Issue 12, Numbers 184, 188, 210, 214, 215, 216
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--Innisfree987 (talk) 00:12, 27 November 2021 (UTC) via MassMessaging
- Hello MrsSnoozyTurtle Nice to meet you. I have been busy and not able to respond to your messages regarding the Eric Booth entry. I will be working on it to address the issues. I will first review in full your suggestions, and if I have questions I will return here. Thank you. Kdylla (talk) 00:55, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Kdylla, nice to meet you too. Thanks for the message, and all the best for your work on the article. MrsSnoozyTurtle 07:33, 16 December 2021 (UTC)
illimity
Hi @MrsSnoozyTurtle: thank you very much for your kindness and valuable advice regarding the draft: illimity. I fully understand how the phrases you highlighted could be seen as potentially promotional or difficult to understand for a non-expert user. I have therefore tried to edit the draft as per your instructions, in particular removing jargon terms where possible and replacing them with alternative expressions. As far as the paragraph about "digital bank illimity" is concerned, I have slightly revised the text and added a source in English to show that it is still relevant today, as it is still a central business area for the company.
If there are no other critical issues in your opinion that need to be fixed, I would proceed with putting the draft through the AfC process. To this end, while I find absolutely legitimate the warning "A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject", I think the one about the fact that the article contains wording that promotes the subject in a subjective manner can be removed at this point, based on the latest changes that I've make to the draft and which I mentioned above. What do you think?
Thanks again for your help :) --Giulia Comandini (talk) 09:40, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Giulia Comandini. Thank you for your politeness and honesty. I agree that the tag about subjective wording can be removed. Regards, MrsSnoozyTurtle 00:31, 25 December 2021 (UTC)
Merry Christmas
Merry Christmas, MrsSnoozyTurtle! Or Season's Greetings or Happy Winter Solstice! As the year winds to a close, I would like to take a moment to recognize your hard work and offer heartfelt gratitude for all you do for Misplaced Pages. May this Holiday Season bring you nothing but joy, health and prosperity. Onel5969 20:32, 23 December 2021 (UTC) |
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Hello MrsSnoozyTurtle, warm wishes to you and your family throughout the holiday season. May your heart and home be filled with all of the joys the festive season brings. Here is a toast to a Merry Christmas and prosperous New Year!. scope_creep 00:33, 24 December 2021 (UTC) |