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GA Review
Not listed unfortunately no one at the wikiprojects seemed interested in helping, and the nom has moved on to greener pastures. Still wonderful work, and I hope other editors will work to fix these issues and renominate. Wugapodes (talk) 04:35, 21 January 2016 (UTC)The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Wugapodes (talk · contribs) 04:24, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Wugapodes (talk) 04:24, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
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Comments
If the comment is numbered, it must be addressed for the article to pass, if it is bulleted, it's an optional suggestion or comment that you don't need to act on right now.
When I quote things, you can use ctrl+f to search the page for the specific line I quoted.
Minor comments:
"Politicians in the three island groups have referred to the Scottish referendum as the most important event in their political history "since the inception of the island councils in 1975"." This needs a citation as it's a direct quote."Analysis of the campaigns' Twitter accounts showed the gap between the campaigns increased from approximately 8,000 in August 2013 to 13,804 in February 2014, in favour of Yes Scotland." What are the units here?"the video features 32 "well known faces from across the independence movement", including David Hayman, Martin Compston and Stuart Braithwaite." this direct quote needs a citation.- The debates section does not adequately summarize the main articles. There is almost no discussion of the actual debates that took place, and no discussion as to the content of them. (See WP:Summary style)
"The Independent reported that the protesters accused Robinson of "conniving with the Treasury to spread lies about the dangers to business and financial services of an independent Scotland."" This quote needs a citation.The international reaction section should be organized as prose, not as a list. Further, though not a part of the GA criteria, WP:NOICONS says not to use flag icons in general prose.
Major Comments: I have two major comments that need to be addressed and will likely entail significant work.
- The article seems to lack focus. The biggest problem is the Issues section which takes up a large portion of this article. These topics would be better covered in another article, perhaps Issues of the Scottish independence referendum, 2014 or something similar that could cover these topics in detail, and be summarized here. While detail is good (indeed, this article is very detailed and comprehensive!), what every bank thought about the economic issues of independence is unimportant for a general overview of the referendum. I feel WP:GANOT gives a good explanation: "The inclusion of details and minor aspects can contribute to good writing, but such details should not overwhelm the article. ...he level of detail of each aspect of the topic should be appropriate to the article and kept in balance: where an aspect of the topic involves information which is or could be covered in more detail by another article, the article itself should summarize this information...". Additionally, the article is about 90kb of readble prose which is remarkably close to the "Should almost certainly be divided" category recomended at WP:LENGTH.
- The article at times feels like it give undue weight to one side at times in terms of coverage. While I know due coverage does not mean the same length of coverage, there are places like the Economy subsection where 5 paragraphs are devoted to opposition opinions and one to supporters. I would recommend looking through and making sure you have given due coverage to both sides in accordance with sources. It is very possible you have, but I want to make sure of that.
Results
On Hold for 14 days pending revisions. This is a very well written article and I really enjoyed reading it. Though a relatively short list of issues, they are much larger in scope than other reviews and so this is reflected in the hold period. I would be happy to extend the hold period at the end of that time if there seems to be significant work being done. Feel free to post comments and questions on anything here as I'm watching the page. Wugapodes (talk) 21:34, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
- @1990'sguy: It's been a week with no response. If you aren't willing to help with the review, let me know. Wugapodes (talk) 18:21, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, I have been focusing on other things lately. I will try to help where I can, but I do not have much time. I apologize for the lack of response! --1990'sguy (talk) 20:25, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
- I fixed all of the "minor comments" on this article. I do not think I will be able to fix the "major comments" on my own though.--1990'sguy (talk) 21:57, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
- That's fine, you don't have to participate if you don't want to so don't feel obliged. I posted to some relevant wikiprojects to see if some of the editors would be willing to help. Thank you for your work! Wugapodes (talk) 22:01, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
Videos
There were some videos circulating at the time, alleged to be evidence of government fraud in the election. YouTube link -Inowen (nlfte) 03:32, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
- See section 8.3.
Jmorrison230582 (talk) 06:03, 30 August 2018 (UTC)In response, the Chief Counting Officer, Mary Pitcaithly, declared that the referendum had been "properly conducted". An official spokesperson reiterated this point, saying that they were "satisfied that all counts throughout Scotland were properly conducted" and that incidents in the footage could be "easily explained" and were being presented as a "'conspiracy' theory".
- Except some were NEVER explained, such as the woman swapping "yes" and "no" ballots back and forth between piles, issues related to barcode missing from ballots, workers under Highland Council being specifically told NOT to note security tag numbers, bags of ballots apparently going missing or being dumped. Issues regarding the seeming accidental admission of Ruth Davidson to trying to ascertain the postal count and announcing this on tv. (This was never dismissed, simply dropped)2.101.149.140 (talk) 20:57, 11 June 2019 (UTC) Lance Tyrell
"Once in a generation"
User:Baloopa33 has repeatedly added the following edit: "Both sides agreed that the result would be binding for a generation, and so there will be no second referendum in the immediate future."
I have reverted it for the following reasons (reposted from the user's talk page): the edit says "Both sides agreed that the result would be binding for a generation". They did no such thing. All that was said was that the referendum could be a once in a generation opportunity, because the political circumstances necessitating the first referendum may not recur.
The other part of the edit says "so there will be no second referendum in the immediate future", which violates WP:CRYSTAL. That's a prediction, not based on any established fact. Jmorrison230582 (talk) 19:29, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
"All that was said was that the referendum could be a once in a generation opportunity, because the political circumstances necessitating the first referendum may not recur."
- No it does not. The sources quite clearly say that the referendum WOULD be a once in a generation opportunity, not that it COULD be. I quote directly from the sources:
- From the Guardian: "Scottish referendum: yes and no agree it's a once-in-a-lifetime vote ... Both sides of the campaign have made it clear they will abide by the result, as political fallout from reneging would be significant... Both sides of the Scottish referendum debate are agreed on one thing: it is a once-in-a-lifetime issue. David Cameron underlined this message on Tuesday when he told people in Scotland independence would be a "painful divorce". Alex Salmond pledged there would be no second referendum for "a generation", even if he lost by one vote."
- From the BBC: "Salmond: 'Referendum is once in a generation opportunity' SNP leader Alex Salmond has said the Scottish referendum is a "once in a generation opportunity". Speaking to Andrew Marr he said that a simple majority, however close, would be accepted by both sides in the campaign and there would be a "generational" gap before another independence referendum."
- Those statements could not be more unambiguous. What both sides agreed was that the result would be binding for a generation, not that they could be. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baloopa33 (talk • contribs) 19:33, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- 1. You're over-interpreting a political opinion, which was that it was unlikely that the circumstances in which a referendum was needed would recur any time soon (WP:NPOV). 2. You're violating WP:CRYSTAL by firmly stating that "there will be no second referendum in the immediate future". Jmorrison230582 (talk) 19:37, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
"You're over-interpreting a political opinion, which was that it was unlikely that the circumstances in which a referendum was needed would recur any time soon"
That's not what the sources say. The sources say that both sides agreed that the referendum would be binding for a generation. Your interpretation above is not supported by the sources and can be found nowhere in them.
"You're violating WP:CRYSTAL by firmly stating that "there will be no second referendum in the immediate future""
- You're twisting my words out of context. My text says that both sides agreed that there would be no referendum in the immediate future. It says that because that is what both sides in fact did agree. As supported by the sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baloopa33 (talk • contribs) 19:42, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- Your text says there WILL be no referendum. That is a prediction. WP:CRYSTAL. Look, I will try to write this into the text, but it does not belong in the lead (WP:UNDUE) and it needs to be heavily edited. Jmorrison230582 (talk) 19:50, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- No it doesn't. It seems you are no better at interpreting my text than you are at interpreting the sources. Let's look at my text shall we:
- "Both sides agreed that the result would be binding for a generation, and so there will be no second referendum in the immediate future". The entire sentence is governed by the phrase "both sides agreed...". The second clause gives additional details of what both sides agreed, and is most certainly not a free-standing 'prediction'.
- No it doesn't. It seems you are no better at interpreting my text than you are at interpreting the sources. Let's look at my text shall we:
- "but it does not belong in the lead". Why not? I would say that the basic rules of the referendum are so fundamentally important that it's difficult to see what else should be in the lede, if not them.
- "Look, I will try to write this into the text...it needs to be heavily edited." Why are you talking as if you're some sort of gatekeeper, who controls what this page does and does not say. You do realise you aren't that, don't you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baloopa33 (talk • contribs) 20:02, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
I have used your sources and included the "once in a generation" quote in the body of the article with this edit. Jmorrison230582 (talk) 20:00, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
- I agree with "once in a generation" being included in the main body of text. This phrase has certainly been cited following the referendum. The sources that report these comments clearly aren't describing any formal agreement, so they cannot indicate that result would actually be binding for a "generation"; rather they are open to interpretation, perhaps reflecting that these two leaders were expected to make statements ahead of the vote, and which may have been intended towards encouraging voter turnout and to indicate that both sides would respect the result. Drchriswilliams (talk) 14:28, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
Wrong. I quote again from the source, which really couldn't be clearer about this:
"Scottish referendum: yes and no agree it's a once-in-a-lifetime vote ... Both sides of the campaign have made it clear they will abide by the result, as political fallout from reneging would be significant... Both sides of the Scottish referendum debate are agreed on one thing: it is a once-in-a-lifetime issue."
The interpretative gloss that you seek to put on this can't be found anywhere in the sources themselves. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baloopa33 (talk • contribs) 14:40, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
- They did abide by the result - the majority voted no, and Scotland didn't become independent. Whether or not there is a second referendum is a political matter, and is not legally enforceable (as the Guardian report explains). Jmorrison230582 (talk) 15:05, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
References
- https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/av/uk-scotland-29196661/salmond-referendum-is-once-in-a-generation-opportunity
- https://www.theguardian.com/politics/2014/sep/17/scottish-independence-referendum-yes-no-agree-once-in-lifetime-vote
Russian Interference in 2014 Indy Ref
I can’t seem to find any reference to the findings of the 2019 ISC report, seems odd that something so crucial has been left from the article.Roland Of Yew (talk) 21:19, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
- That's because there was hardly anything in the ISC report about Scotland. There was a passing mention that Russian media had cast aspersions on the counting process, which is already mentioned in this article (see below). Jmorrison230582 (talk) 08:16, 25 August 2020 (UTC)
“ | According to official Russian observers, the conditions under which the votes were counted were not up to international standards and that the procedure used made it impossible to check on irregularities. Russia's criticism came just months after the international community had rejected the results of a Kremlin-backed referendum held in the Russian-occupied Ukrainian territory of Crimea. Russian officials said that the strong performance of the Scottish National Party (SNP) at the 2015 UK general election confirmed their suspicions about the Scottish independence referendum. | ” |
Dispute
Section created and mostly edited by blocked sock. Discussion from other users was replying to the sock. Dreamy Jazz 11:10, 2 December 2020 (UTC) |
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I have tried to insert the following text into the article: Both sides agreed prior to the referendum that the result would be binding for a generation. However, the SNP now seek a second independence referendum during the next Scottish Parliament term. Jmorrison230582 has removed this text with the bare assertion that it is 'nonsensical'. I disagree. The text reflects the provided sources faithfully and accurately. I would therefore invite Jmorrison230582 to explain his or her contention that this is 'nonsensical'.Xylophus (talk) 10:36, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
You're synthesising different comments and making an interpretation of it that is not warranted. Before the referendum, the politicians were saying they would accept the result. That has happened - the majority voted No to independence, and Scotland has not become independent. They also expressed an opinion that it was likely that the referendum would be an once in a generation opportunity, because they believed that the political circumstances would not develop in such a way that would allow another referendum to happen in a shorter timeframe. That remains to be seen - it could still be proven correct. What you're doing is to combine those two statements into a single pledge that was never made. Jmorrison230582 (talk) 22:03, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for this. I have looked at those sources. I think the Ferret is entirely in line with my stance. That source criticises (and purports to debunk) the specific claim that an agreement had been signed. That is consistent with the previous sources (and my suggested text). I do not say there existed a signed agreement committing the country to one vote. However, the Ferret goes on to say that various leading figures nevertheless said that the referendum result would be adhered to for a generation (completely in line with what I am attempting to say). I quote the relevant text that I rely on in full:
My difficulty with the National is that it is an openly partisan source. It is expressly the Newspaper that supports an independent Scotland after all. Thus, it is always going to advocate for the view that people did not say at the time that there would only be one vote this generation, regardless of whether that stance is actually right. Now, if the National is right in its analysis, then there ought to be better more neutral sources (such as, for instance, the BBC, the Herald, the Guardian, the Times, the Independent, the Telegraph etc) that say the same. Thus, I consider that the suggested claim - Both sides made clear prior to the referendum that they would abide by the result for at least a generation - is further supported by the Ferret and not materially undermined by the National. Xylophus (talk) 21:52, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
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Is there any particular reason why this article is in that category? If not I'll remove it. Llewee (talk) 16:13, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
Change of map
There's been a new map added (right) which has flat colours for a binary yes/no for each region. Personally I think I prefer the older one (left) which has varying intensity, and might help better illustrate that it was a relatively close result and that some areas were quite marginal It also keeps the red No / green Yes that's used in the results section, rather than switching to red/blue. On the other hand, the council labels are a little distracting on the old one, so swings and roundabouts.
I don't think the map's been discussed much before since it was put in, so flagging it up here for discussion. @Scottishmapfixer: who produced the new map. Andrew Gray (talk) 19:05, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- I have added a new map which I believe is the best compromise between the two
- If there is a consensus that the original (not mine) is better then it should be changed back. Scottishmapfixer (talk) 01:32, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
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