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Digital Personal Data Protection Act, 2023 is currently a Law good article nominee. Nominated by Thewikizoomer (talk) at 14:15, 17 January 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: Act of the Parliament of India |
 | Digital Personal Data Protection Act, 2023 was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (January 8, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: https://news.civilserviceindia.com/parliament-passes-digital-personal-data-protection-bill taxguru.in/corporate-law/digital-personal-data-protection-bill-2023.html https://deepstrat.in/2023/08/03/indias-privacy-bill-dpdp-2023-a-detailed-analysis/. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.)
For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, and, if allowed under fair use, may copy sentences and phrases, provided they are included in quotation marks and referenced properly. The material may also be rewritten, provided it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Therefore, such paraphrased portions must provide their source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Misplaced Pages takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. Tails Wx (they/them) 02:42, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
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The following are the exemptions under the Act, they are not a copyright violation and are mere mentions from the Act, specify reasons for removal for the following content:
Exemptions
The Act has made exemptions from the regulations related to the Act, they are:
- The processing of personal data is necessary for enforcing any legal right or claim
- The processing of personal data by any court or tribunal or any other body in India which is entrusted by law with the performance of any judicial or quasi-judicial or regulatory or supervisory function, where such processing is necessary for the performance of such function
- Personal data is processed in the interest of prevention, detection, investigation or prosecution of any offence or contravention of any law for the time being in force in India
- Personal data of Data Principals not within the territory of India is processed pursuant to any contract entered into with any person outside the territory of India by any person based in India
- The processing is necessary for a scheme of compromise or arrangement or merger or amalgamation of two or more companies or a reconstruction by way of demerger or otherwise of a company, or transfer of undertaking of one or more company to another company, or involving division of one or more companies, approved by a court or tribunal or other authority competent to do so by any law for the time being in force
- The processing is for the purpose of ascertaining the financial information and assets and liabilities of any person who has defaulted in payment due on account of a loan or advance taken from a financial institution, subject to such processing being in accordance with the provisions regarding disclosure of information or data in any other law for the time being in force
Thewikizoomer (talk) 07:22, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
- Doesn't that contain copyright violations? Because otherwise... Tails Wx (they/them) 10:31, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Status: Not in force?
I don't understand this. How is it not in force? Hcobb (talk) 17:14, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
- It comes into force on such date as notified by the Central Government of India. Thewikizoomer (talk) 04:16, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
Timeline and Background being seperate
It's better to keep the background timeline seperate because the timeline explicitly implies only to The Digital Personal Data Protection Act, 2023 while the background (origins and developments) to the Data Protection Framework is clearly putup in the background which lead to the formation of this Act.
Also this wholly improves the understanding
Editors can give their inputs on this Thewikizoomer (talk) 07:43, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Digital Personal Data Protection Act, 2023/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: David Eppstein (talk · contribs) 08:04, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
This was not ready for a Good Article nomination.
- The background, overview, rights and provisions, and exemptions sections are all bulleted outlines rather than actual text (WP:GACR 1a)
- The rights and provisions section is entirely unsourced, the exemptions section has only a single primary source (inadequate for any analysis), the non-applicability to offline personal data section is entirely unsourced, the exemptions to government section has an unsourced paragraph, and the Obligation with Convention on the Rights of the Child section has an unsourced sentence. It is not clear that thelogicalindian is a reliable source. (WP:GACR 2b)
- It is not obvious what the Data Protection Board of India section has to do with the topic of the article (WP:GACR 3b)
- There seems to have been significant recent disagreement in the edit history of the article over how much opinion to include (WP:GACR 4)
- Earwig finds large amounts of text directly copied from the bill and not marked as a direct quote (WP:GACR 2d). This also marks a failure to evaluate and describe the bill (GACR 3a); copying the text of the bill does not serve that purpose. If people want to look up the text they can do that; that is not what a Misplaced Pages article on a bill should be for.
As such, I think it is a quick fail (WP:GAFAIL). —David Eppstein (talk) 08:04, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, I think I fixed the second, third and fifth concerns that were raised. Could you please have a look at the article now and if possible, can help in improving this article to be a good one? Thewikizoomer (talk) 09:31, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- Regarding the first point, that's the background of the bill, right from the Supreme Court's judgement to the creation of data protection framework and the activities that took place till the passage of Act. Could you be more specific on what can be improved in background as it has all the events that took place including the withdrawn PDP bill, 2019. Thewikizoomer (talk) 09:33, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- The Data Protection Board of India was established as per the provisions in this Act, hence mentioned. Now I have improved it. Thewikizoomer (talk) 09:35, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- The rights and provisions; exemptions part appear self-explanatory, don't they?
- If not, could you please suggest on its improvement? Thewikizoomer (talk) 09:38, 8 January 2024 (UTC)