- There is no conflict of interest. I'm not getting paid by Bunasawa. In order to get leads on sources and information, we do have a working relationship (as a reporter would on their subject) where I could reach out and obtain information. I do have drafts of other judokas in the works but am working on securing their contact information in order to get additional leads to sources and information.
- There are multiple sources online in various languages (English, Japanese, Russian, etc.) which indicates notability.
- Bunasawa's involvement as a leader of judo in the USA
- https://www.arkansasonline.com/news/2016/may/12/ichiban-sports-complex-shares-strange-s/
- https://books.google.com.au/books?id=qNUDAAAAMBAJ&q=bunasawa&pg=PA38&redir_esc=y#v=snippet&q=bunasawa&f=false
- Bunasawa as a co-novelist
- https://www.abebooks.com/9780964898424/Toughest-Man-Who-Lived-Nori-096489842X/plp#:~:text=A%20book%20about%20Conde%20Koma,force%20in%20the%20martial%20arts.
- Bunasawa's involvement in "Dead or Alive"
- https://www.judoinside.com/judoka/90786/Noriaki_Bunasawa/judo-career
- Bunasawa and José Padilha
- https://www.instagram.com/p/Crg9KAmBek5/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==
- José Padilha as the director on the BJJ-Judo movie project
- https://www.imdb.com/news/ni62362469/
- https://about.netflix.com/en/news/jos%C3%A9-padilha-attached-to-write-and-direct-feature-film-dead-or-alive-with-greg-silvermans-stampede-for-netflix
- https://www.hollywoodreporter.com/movies/movie-news/narcos-director-jose-padilha-tackling-netflix-jiu-jitsu-movie-dead-alive-1181926/
- Nori Bunasawa's involvement in the movie industry
- https://www.imdb.com/name/nm12094236/
- Russian sources on Bunasawa's movies
- https://www.kinopoisk.ru/film/4294861/?utm_referrer=www.google.com
- https://en.kinorium.com/2680888/cast/
- Japanese sources on Bunasawa's accomplishment and career
- Shindo, Kenichi (October 3, 2020). "青春スクロール 市立浦和高校". Asahi Shimbun.
- Kudo, Raisuke (September 10, 1969). "日本代表決まる". The Judo Shimbun.
- https://www.judo-ch.jp/result/ajsc/men1970.shtml
- Russian news media company reporting on Bunasawa's comments and opinions
- https://sputniknews.jp/20190902/6634165.html
- Bunasawa is notable for his involvement in the sport of judo and for his involvement in the movie industry.
- There are no COI issues and I sent him a draft on the article as a courtesy, in order to have a working relationship with him for leads on additional sources and for information regarding judo sports figures of which there will be wiki articles published in the future. DN27ND (talk) 05:03, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- I also advised Bunasawa and his newspaper/magazine publishing team to create a wikipedia account in order for them to release some of the photos that they own to wikimedia commons. DN27ND (talk) 05:57, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- I received information that Nori Bunasawa and his newspaper/magazine publishing company owns the photos that he uploaded and that were deleted off of wikimedia commons. DN27ND (talk) 06:00, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- And that he is in the process of consulting with his lawyers based in the USA. DN27ND (talk) 06:02, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Being paid is not the only criterion for conflict of interest. See WP:EXTERNALREL. I think the fact that you have a working relationship with this person and especially that you showed the subject of the article a draft itself (presumably for feedback, considering you asked for leads on missing info) is concerning.
- The tone in the article has issues with WP:WTW; "dream team", "talented group", "further his education" are unencyclopedic and lean towards WP:PUFFERY.
- Whether or not there actually is a COI is debatable, but even the scent of one can ruin your credibility on Misplaced Pages. You really should be more cautious in future. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 09:33, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- "dream team" is a common phrase that was originally used to describe the 1992 Basketball Olympic team which swept the competition, and then has been adapted by culture to apply to various sports and teams to mean a team that has won by a large margin over opponents. Given the context and the results of the 1969 World Judo Championships in Mexico city, (this only happed twice in the history of the sport) this is an appropriate phrase to use to describe the events.
- The phrase is also used in other wikipedia articles
- https://en.wikipedia.org/1992_United_States_men%27s_Olympic_basketball_team
- https://en.wikipedia.org/United_States_men%27s_national_basketball_team#Dream_Team_II
- https://en.wikipedia.org/1996_United_States_men%27s_Olympic_basketball_team
- https://en.wikipedia.org/FIFA_World_Cup_Dream_Team
- https://en.wikipedia.org/Iran_men%27s_national_sitting_volleyball_team
- and the list goes on:
- https://en.wikipedia.org/Dream_Team
- Would it be puffery to describe the 1992 US Olympic dream team as "talented"? Or would it be appropriate to describe any other sports team as talented on wikipedia?
- https://en.wikipedia.org/1992_United_States_men%27s_Olympic_basketball_team
- "Opposing teams were nonetheless overwhelmed by the talent of the American roster, losing by an average of 43.8 points per game"
- https://en.wikipedia.org/United_States_men%27s_national_basketball_team#Dream_Team_II
- "The team assembled by USA Basketball for the tournament in Barcelona in 1992 was one of the most illustrious collections of talent assembled in the history of international sport"
- https://en.wikipedia.org/1996_United_States_men%27s_Olympic_basketball_team
- "USA Basketball officials sought to construct the team dubbed Dream Team III (Dream Team II was the moniker of the lesser-known 1994 FIBA World Championship team) with a winning combination of veteran players from the 1992 Dream Team that won the gold medal in Barcelona and some of the league's best young talent."
- "When the first ten players of the 1996 United States Men's national basketball team roster were announced in the summer of 1995, that young talent, and first-time Olympians, included the likes of Penny Hardaway, Grant Hill, Shaquille O'Neal, and Gary Payton"
- Regarding the phrase "further his education", there are sources that Bunasawa attended these universities after receiving a bachelors degree. If that isn't further one's education, then what is?
- Are you saying that journalists never show their subjects a draft to ensure the correct sequence of events?
- Please advise. DN27ND (talk) 11:33, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- We're not journalists. Misplaced Pages is WP:NOTNEWSPAPER. We're actually allowed to describe people as talented, but not in Misplaced Pages's voice per WP:NPOV. You have to attribute those kinds of opinions to notable people, like "journalist x described y as talented". 104.232.119.107 (talk) 13:25, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Also "Dream Team" I can concede on, but other flowery wordings I'm relatively confident in. When you're already bordering on having a COI, you should be paranoid about writing stuff that borders on excessively flattering or flowery, but you're not doing adequate due diligence. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 13:29, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- The selection of the word "talent" in that context was to summarize the accomplishments of those selected to be on the 1969 Japan World Judo team and in that particular year. How else would you summarize a collection of people that had multiple world titles, and had multiple Olympic gold medals? In retrospect, even most of the alternatives selected as backups went on to win world titles in subsequent championships. To choose the "talented" word, is this not appropriate considering the results that these players had?
- Considering the results of sporting competitions, is it "flowery" to describe Lebron James, Michael Jordan, Tom Brady, Cristiano Ronaldo, Lionel Messi, Muhammad Ali, Mike Tyson, etc., as talented without having to say "journalist x described y as talented".?These sporting figures have won multiple world and Olympic titles in their respective sport.
- At the end of the day, we are not journalist but the human aspect still applies. Courtesy and respect towards one's subject goes a long way. Just because a writer chooses to show courtesy and respect towards the subject he is writing about, it doesn't mean there is a COI.
- If a person chooses to take more college courses after achieving a Bachelor's degree, how would you describe that if not "furthering his education" ? There is newspaper evidence that Bunasawa was taking more university level courses while simultaneously coaching the varsity judo team.
- Could you give other examples of "flowery" wording from the article? DN27ND (talk) 18:21, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- There is also no "personal, religious, political, academic, legal, or financial" COI. It is common in journalism to keep good relationships (ie protection of anonymity of whistleblowers) with one's subjects/sources in order to further obtain information from them. There is precedence (especially in sports) of subjects denying access of information to journalists who may be rude, disrespectful, etc. Some of the information taken from newspaper sources, sports media sources (ie ESPN) require journalists to be able to contact sports figures for information. DN27ND (talk) 11:44, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Per above, we're not journalists 104.232.119.107 (talk) 13:30, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- We are not journalists. The info on wikipedia articles are not primary sources (birth certificates, actual signed contracts, actual college diplomas, identity cards, actual competition brackets etc). These are citations to newspapers and magazines, which are written by sports journalists or reporters. These are secondary and tertiary sources.
- If wikipedia contributors are able to use primary sources, it would make writing these articles easier and actually more accurate (since I could just upload the proof)
- Even though we are not journalist, having courtesy and respect towards one's subject could yield leads to information which would make summarizing events easier and more accurate. DN27ND (talk) 18:38, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Since wikipedia contributors aren't allowed to upload primary sources, in essence we are using journalist's opinions (ie journalist from the NY times, OC register, People magazine, Asahi Shimbun, Wall Street Journal, etc) as sources of evidence. Do you think the vetting process to obtain a journalist / reporter pass from these companies is strenuous?
- In essence, it would be way easier, "neutral", and encyclopedic if wikipedia contributers were able to use primary sources as evidence rather than secondary, or tertiary sources written by "experts" hired by these media companies. DN27ND (talk) 18:53, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Check out the results of the 1969 Judo World Championships
- https://en.wikipedia.org/1969_World_Judo_Championships
- Is that not a podium sweep where one team had a decisive victory over the other teams? That is the time of only 2 times this has happened in the sports history. If the phrases "dream team" or "talented group" is not appropriate to describe the sporting results. Perhaps those words need to be censored from all other wikipedia articles about sports where these words have been used to describe competition results. DN27ND (talk) 12:42, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- That 1969 World Judo team had multiple World and Olympic champions on them. In the sport of judo, the World Championships are regarded as a more difficult achievement than the Olympics due to their respective qualification processes. DN27ND (talk) 12:49, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- You have been updating many articles on wikipedia regarding Korean poltics. Everyone knows about the history of the Japanese-Korean rivalry. This is not the thread to hold a grudge.
- This is the article is for the sport of judo. You are biased and you have a political agenda. DN27ND (talk) 22:30, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- There are also many other newspaper and magazine articles that show Bunasawa's notability on the wikipedia article.
- Rezell, John (March 3, 1988). "Top Judo Instructor comes to the defense of self-defense". Orange County Register.
- "Judo". Orange Network. 385: 7. April 2023.
- New Judo Instructor at 'Y' Here". Indiana Evening Gazette. February 21, 1975
- "Instructor on Show". Rogers Daily News. April 1975.
- I could scan these newspaper articles and send them to you. Or you can go into the library archives and look them up yourself. DN27ND (talk) 12:17, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Notice: I didn't question the person's notability. I'm questioning COI and your understanding of Misplaced Pages's editing style. These walls of text and excessive bolding are not necessary; I can read. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 13:26, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but the original poster (Marchjuly) did question notability and it is part of this page's discussion
- "I wasn't sure about the subject's Misplaced Pages notablity per WP:BIO and asked about the article at Misplaced Pages talk:WikiProject Martial arts#Nori Bunasawa. DN27ND was pinged into the discussion but never responded"
- People have occupations, other obligations, and commenting on wikipedia doesn't pay the bills. I'm not sure if Marchjuly was expecting an immediate response or what? DN27ND (talk) 18:26, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- You're doubling down on the walls of text and bolding. I can read. I'm still confident in what I said, will not engage anymore. Good luck. 104.232.119.107 (talk) 23:36, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Whether the "working relationship" described by DN27ND consitutes a conflict (at least in regard to Misplaced Pages editing) per WP:COI is porbably something that needs to be further discussed at WP:COIN. I will start a discusison about it sometime within the next few days. -- Marchjuly (talk) 04:42, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Please don't scan any newspaper articles and then upload them to either Misplaced Pages or Wikimedia Commons because doing so is likely going to be considered a copyright violation. Please also don't reproduce verbatim any of these sources are any Misplaced Pages page, except perhaps as short and properly attributed quotes in accordance with MOS:QUOTE because that too will almost certainly be considered a copyright violation. If you can find these sources online somewhere (perhaps a site like Newspapers.com), you can perhaps posts links them as long as there are no WP:COPYLINK issues. You can also summarize these sources in your own words at Misplaced Pages talk:Articles for deletion/Nori Bunasawa (the link is WP:RED because the page doesn't exist yet). I will ask at Misplaced Pages:WikiProject Resource Exchange/Resource Request to see whether anyone might be able to find the Orange County Register, Indiana Evening Gazette, Orange Network and Rogers Daily News articles and provide either a link or an assessment of them. -- Marchjuly (talk) 04:55, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- For the sources that are online, I've already linked them to the page.
- '''Orange County Register, Indiana Evening Gazette, Orange Network and Rogers Daily News'''
- These sources are not online and some of the Japanese sources are not online either. I received them as newspaper clippings. The dates and issues are included. You could try to call the local libraries in those counties and can talk to the librarian about sending you those papers.
- Orange County Register has a webpage. Perhaps they might have online achieves. I have photographs of the newspaper clippings.
- The Indiana Evening Gazette has online achieves. I have not looked at it because I have access to the scanned newspaper clippings.
- The Orange Network is associated with the Orange County Japanese American Association. You can give them a call or search their website to see if they keep their old issues on pdf.
- Rogers Daily News is the local paper from Rogers, Ark. that was published from 1927-1981. You can try to call the local library in that city, perhaps they have archives
- I have them as clippings, scans, and photos taken by a camera phone.
- There are actually much more newspaper articles that were written about Bunasawa in the newspapers, such as a time one of his teen students used judo in self defense against an assault, and many much more. Just because some of the sources are from 25 to 35 years ago, and before the time of the internet, doesn't make Bunasawa a less "notable" sport and martial arts figure.
- The information is all there if you want to do the research and look hard enough. Also finding people (through connections) who have saved these newspaper clippings, especially for people who existed before the internet does wonders when writing up a biography.
- Have fun on your search DN27ND (talk) 18:18, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- There are also a few other english language papers in California stating that Bunasawa was a pre-medical student while coaching Judo. I haven't included all the sources and kept it general via "furthering his education" as some papers cited stated that he was a uni student in the USA.
- If its THAT important to you, you can call Bunsawa's assistants to see if you can obtain his university diploma at Waseda University, then cross reference the dates of the newspaper sources that stated that he was a student in the USA, then voilà, you have inferred that he "furthered his education"
- You can look in the biographical section of his book as well
- Bunasawa, Nori; Murray, John (2007). The Toughest Man Who Ever Lived. Nevada: Innovations, Inc. and Judo Journal. p. 299. ISBN 978-0-9648984-1-7. DN27ND (talk) 18:27, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- DN27ND, to be blunt, no one is going to read through all of this confusing content you posted, it's overwhelming. You need to be concise. There are a lot of AFDs to look through and this is just one. Editors are much likely to rely on the source analysis table below, which concisely presents information in a way everyone can understand. Liz 05:29, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- No problem
- Just added a new source that reinstates all the info already cited in the article
- Fears, Randy (October 1975). "U.S. Judo team". Rogers Daily News DN27ND (talk) 18:59, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- I'll enjoy following the source analysis table DN27ND (talk) 19:00, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
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