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I removed this:
Other than taking a significant role in the fight against apartheid in South Africa, Dellums produced little original legislation or memorable work in nearly 30 years of service.
Pretty blantant POV language and characterization. --NightMonkey 07:12, 8 October 2005 (UTC)
This was put back but it should be removed and POV, as should the reference to him being on the "fringe of his party" and the odd statement about the seniority system, which is, of course, true of all congressional leadership.
- It has been removed, at least at last reading. Can all the anonymous IPs who care about this article please register before editing further? It really helps to monitor the article for vandalism. Thanks. --NightMonkey 00:12, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
What vandalism are you talking about? There are some POV disputes, but there has been no vandalism.
As far as his accomplishments, what did Dellums *ever* do? --71.112.11.220 15:12, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
- The article lists many accomplishments. Ron Dellums certainly would remember his own work, as would many of the voters and supporters in his district, in Berkeley, and in Congress. The problem with this statement, which keeps getting re-added in slightly modified forms, is that it is a person's personal opinon, but not labeled as such. It purports to state that, in the neutral opinion of Misplaced Pages, Ron Dellums produced litle memorable work. And that has to have sources to make such a strong statement about a noteable public figure and former Congressman. How can an encyclopedic article flatly state with any credibility that a person's work was not "memorable"? Now, one could have a statement like "In the editorial of May 20, 1998, XYZ Magazine stated that 'Ron Dellumm's tenure in Congress was a complete waste of time and resources.'" But, even then, the magazine must be noteabe and reputable (i.e. not a blog). Do you see what I mean? --NightMonkey 22:34, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
- it took me a while to track down a reference to dellums doing little (and it is on an anti-dellums site). more revealing was that in all the reading i've done in the past few days i couldn't find anything that he DID do (beyond apartheid and limiting weapons procurement). just when i thought the vietnam hearings were his own making, i uncovered more info that made it seem like more of a me-too show trial than novel work. i'm buying his book to see what he has to say for himself. btw, you can use the cover of his book for a photo -- its considered "fair use" --71.112.11.220 17:03, 11 October 2005 (UTC)
- Sorry, removed it again, though the language was a bit better. Now it is not speaking as Misplaced Pages, but as Misplaced Pages describing others' characterization. As I said above, a blog (an "anti-Dellums blog" at that) is not a noteable enough reference to back up such a strong blanket statement about Dellums entire career. But, the rest of your contributions have been great! :) --NightMonkey 19:24, 11 October 2005 (UTC)
- Hey NightMonkey, thanks for the kind words. I must have read fifty pieces about Dellums and I can't find any other legistlative accomplishments. I also lived in his district for quite a while and don't remember his doing much at all (hence "little memorable work"). That website is not a blog, though clearly the author doesn't think much of Dellums. I wouldn't say its a blanket statement, as it says the major accomplishments (one POV of Dellums) and then says he didn't do much else (another POV about dellums) the bad stuff via a quotation and citation. We are dealing with one Congressperson out of nearly 500, so we won't necessarily find reams of historical analysis on the guy. If you're located in the Bay Area ask around a bit, I think you'll see the website is correct in its description --155.91.28.231 19:51, 11 October 2005 (UTC)
- Well, I removed this again, after checking out the site. It is so right-wing that it is attempting to defend the legacy of Joseph McCarthy. Blog, or personal site, it doesn't matter - it is not noteable, and doesn't represent a wide enough slice of the public to be a source for such a blanket statement. Please do not add this again, unless there are more noteable and verifiable sources for this opinion. Here's the removed text:
Public Domain picture?
Any chance of someone open sourcing a quality photo of Dellums for inclusion here? --NightMonkey 00:12, 10 October 2005 (UTC)
- I just bought his memoirs. Not the best reading but it should help with the article. Also I'll photograph the cover so we can use it as fair use in a section about his book. -155.91.28.231 01:02, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
Oakland mayoral race
Oaklanders: Can it really be said that Nadel has the “same base” as Dellums? Even though she’s always struck me as sort of your typical white peace-and-love hippie, when I stayed in West Oakland, she seemed to have reasonable support from her constituents—still, it doesn’t seem like her base of support is the “same” as Dellums’, even though they do support many of the same issues (just maybe not in the same order).
—Wiki Wikardo 22:37, 14 January 2006 (UTC)
- Nancy Nadel is the widow of Chappel Hayes, a well-known black community leader. That's why she's actually able to win elections in West Oakland, despite the appearance of being the sort of white Greenie who'd go over better in the hills and Grand-Lake area. user: Argyriou 17:32, 11 May 2006
-We need more peace and love leaders here Wiki, maybe even Nancy Nadel, dig? I have also admired Dellums as a peace and love leader in a great way, as Bernie Sanders of Vermont was. Dellums was on the board of NORML and was the only Socialist members of Congress for a while. My hats off to him for his testicular fortitude. This election is a refreshing contrast to the nauseastingly centrist statewide and national elections we see. We'll see how things get down here in the coming weeks and months -Downtown Clown
- I think its in the sfgate article cited there. Might be off. No two really have exactly the same base. If the issue is war/defense spending, maybe they are interchangeable, but maybe on other issues one or the other is stronger. I don't think you'd see a revert war erupt if you weakened it to "somewhat the same base" or some similar language. Justforasecond 01:24, 15 January 2006 (UTC)
The references to Afro-Americans being the "predominant" group in Oakland were not in the Chron article but they are a significant issue in this election, worthy of discussion, absolutely. Some argue Af.-Am. are in the seat of political power in this city, others disagree. In factual census numbers Af.-Am. is the largest single identified cultural group. While most of us chose to label ourselves in the census, some of of did not on philosophical grounds. Fact is Af.-Am. will lose that "largest" "predominant," (whatever you want to call it), title in Oakland, at the very least from a population standpoint, sometime in the next 10 years. That is demographic fact. On a different tempo, does it really matter here, Cornell my brother? Fact is, the air is crisp enough here that most us see a rainbow in the sky. -Downtown Clown
As a point of fact I have restored vandalized FACTUAL sentences stating that Dellums has no campaign website as of this writing 3/3/06. What is to dispute about that? it is relevant, accurate information which speaks to the mechanics of his campaign, and conceiveably, from a political science standpoint, his campaign strategy. -Downtown Clown, 3/3/06
- I've restored this information. Justforasecond 21:24, 3 March 2006 (UTC)
- This section has devolved into a very lengthy and lightly veiled attack on Dellums for not having a website "in the Internet age", having fundraising dinners" that many cannot afford" and not being true to his "1970s socialism". This is not in accordance with our NPOV policy. Please do not restore the section again -- it needs to be balanced and much, much shorter, considering the length of Dellums's career his work. BCorr|Брайен 12:18, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
wikistyle
hey guys
while i won't say i disagree with some of the recent edits, we need to keep this article a little cleaner.
- please don't add subject headings if there isn't yet any content to put there.
- similarly, don't add parenthetical requests for content in the article. the talk page (this page) is a good place to do that.
- keep things in a more removed tone (don't say "our city").
-Since many sentimental Dellums fans are summarily remove large blocks of factual info that might cast him in a bad light, until we have more Oaklanders contributing to the aticle, I've taken the temporary liberty of using a subjective, defensive tone ("here in Oakland") to tell you how things are down on the ground, here in the flatlands of Oakland. You can sit thousands of miles away in your elite liberal ivy league tower and wax philosophic on your former congressional hero (he used to be mine also until he started his mercinary lobbying), but I'm telling you a very real perspective from poor and lower middle class Oaklanders. We feel the city government is bloated and mildly corrupt here, we have a shortage of police officers relative to the number of residents, 673 officers for 411,000 residents, a nationally low ratio for the number of people. In comparison, Frisco has over 1,900 sworn officers for 775,000 residents. Do the math brother. Violent crime is running rampant. I got mugged here in December. We are on track to have 150 murders this year. It could be worse, but its far from Greenwich, CT. Our school system has among the lowest test scores in the state, and is currently under state takeover for several reasons. We literally have a crumbling infastructure with an expensive inafrequent bus system. We have potholes you can ride a mule down into. We have homelessness and panhandling most places you go. We have one of the highest rates of child and adult hunger. Yes, literally a statistically significant percentage of children who do not get adequate nutrition and go to bed hungry. Things are bad here pal and we need true progressive leadership in Sacramento, not Dellums shadow of his former self catering pork to re-developers and permit pimps. I have yet to see his CURRENT progressive credentials. People change in this life. -Don't let the nice weather forecasts fool you. Why don't you come visit. If you are serious I will take you on walk or cab ride and show you the poverty, urban despair, and ill health of the real Oakland. Leave a note here, and I will make arangements so you can call or e-mail me to set this up. I'm dead fucking sincere about my offer.
- Okay, so I am an Oakland native & resident for 30 years, and I disagree with very little of the above. However, I will say that using a "subjective, defensive tone" is not appropriate in any way for an encyclopedia article. For either side. I agree that things in the Town are bad (although they are far better than any other time in the past 25 years), but quite honestly very little is riding on the next election, no matter who is chosen. The pot-holes, transit system, and crime have been problems in Oakland since Samuel Merritt was mayor, and are far more a function of our disfunctional beaurocracy than any mayoral leadership. All that being said, the next election is a very important part of OUR civic history (in spite of the fact that it is practically pre-determined), but will by no means be the defining moment in Ron Dellums' life—if it were, the election would be a close one! We need to remember that this is an article about RON DELLUMS, not a current civic election affecting 411,000 people, nor about the incredibly wonderful city that spawned him. Those items have their own pages, and have plenty of room for more information. Also, you may wish to be very careful about the tone of your invitation... it comes across as quite threatening (I think the "dead F****** sincere" part does it), in spite of the fact that I personally know that a vacation to Oakland would be ideal for anyone living outside our city limits. Further, if you wish to leave such a caring invitation, you should probably sign it. Otherwise your guest will have no idea what name to put on the wine they bring their host!Reggaedelgado 04:47, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
the census info is a good point of reference for how much $125 is to many oaklanders, but try to keep it breif. for instance, you could say something like "to the average oaklander who makes $21,000 per year, the cost of this dinner was exorbidant"
try as hard as possible to find citations for information and include them in the article. dellums will have to release his campaign donor list, this should have names and addresses of all donors. until then it might be a little premature to say many are from out of oakland, though many probably are.
lastly, try to be fair. wiki has a "neutral point of view" (see WP:NPOV) policy which can be taken to lame extremes by some users. for instance, some articles begin every sentence with "according to so-and-so..." and have numerous "however, according to other-so-and-so" that really cloud what the article is about. i don't think we want to go there (ever!), but we need to give dellums a bit of a break to for this article to be taken seriously. he isn't who he pretended to be for many years, but he also isn't Jack Abramoff or Willie Brown either. $125 a plate is a lot for an average oaklander, but in politics its actually a fairly small donation. many of dellums' old school fans are now middle-aged and flush with cash (hint: they bought bay area real estate in the 70s and 80s and their kids are through college) these folks are happy to spare benjamins on such youthful indulgences as lobster dinners with ron or overpriced stones tix.
- Many in Oakland are young, and old, and NOT wealthy. A good slice of us are poor, most of us are lower middle class, we are renters who cannot, and never have been able to afford Bay Area real estate in 2006, 1986, or 1976. We cannot afford Stones tickets, and we can barely afford to donate $25 dollars to these sickening political campaign styles with their outdoor billboards and TV commercials. That amount may not be alot a for a Statewide candidate or for Mike Bloomberg but THIS IS OAKLAND, not New York, not Frisco. Answer this, if I wanted to hear Dellums speak and could only give a smaller donation would they turn me away for lack of funds, would Ron's hero Fidel do that? How about a $25 dinner, less fancy food, and a larger turnout of the workaday citizens of Oakland. I live here and see the nit and grit on the streets, do you?
- Heyyyyy don't take me the wrong way. $125 is a lot for a LOT of people, but there are thousands of people in Oakland who can put up that sort of money. There are a fair number of poor people but there are also *many* middle class homeowners. It's no excuse to leave out the bottom X% but $125 isn't usually enough to pull off a bribe. $25 a plate wouldn't raise much, it sounds like a lot but when you rent out a space and have food (even mediocre food) brought it it ends up costing over $10 a head. Inexpensive restaraunts do the same thing day-in and day-out so can get the price lower. You are absolutely right about Ron being out of tune with socialism -- I think its a result of a couple of things 1) times and people change 2) campains need money and 3) he may have been a bit of a poser even in the early days. I'd tell you were I live but there are wikistalkers out there -- feel free to email me though ;). btw, after you type a comment it's best to "sign" it. Just type four tildes in a row (~~~~) Justforasecond 18:07, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
-Hey Justforaecond, just a second here bro, aren't you the original author of the "pay-for-access-dinners" segment? Anyways, you make some good points here. Campaigns have become way more expensive with the advent of soundbite media buys, but isn't it fucking outrageous?....... What ever happened to a campaign appearance to enegize the base? Sadly, it's 90% fundraising these days. Well with all that cash on hand, how about hiring someone to design a website at least Ronald? Or is it mostly going toward paying a high priced "campaign consultant" shyster attorney(s) as payback for something else that happened in favor session over the years? And then, did that guy previously appoint one of Vernie's penuckle pals to some blue-ribbon bullshit state commission with a six figure salary and a room at Hyatt when they have to trek it up to Sac. for 8 meetings a year? You know they guy with the green visor laughing while he counts the money in a smoke filled room..........Oh wait a minute, that's Ferrari owning Willie "term limit" Brown. -By the way are you voting for De La Fuente? Should we unleash the hounds on Nacho? -Broadway Joe
- Haha. Yeah that was me :) I actually wrote most of this article (as user 71.... and user 155...). I even bought Dellums' book to get more info on the man -- what a waste of $10. I should have realized how self-congratulatory the book was going to be before the purchase. And his referring to himself in the third person gets old fast. And...there isn't a negative word about him in the book. The one good thing about it is now I can cite page #s.
- I was going to flesh out the section about his lobbying, but got sidetracked and then when the Abramoff stuff came out Ron's indiscretions all seemed miniscule in comparison. (There's an article in the East Bay Express with a tremendous amount of content). I do think the dinners are out of line and we shouldn't let Ron slide on these. Give him an inch and he'll take a mile -- Willie Brown probably started with dinners and moved his way up to corrupt access to .com IPOs and questionable real estate deals. Of course Ron is 71 years old, I don't think he has time to come anywhere near Willie's slime.
- You are dead on about the attitudes of some folks here. Almost every article you put some muck in you'll find a user that comes and removes it with some lame justification. Try editting a congresperson page, their staffers come and clean it up right away. But I think Reggae is correct too -- the tone needs to be a little less ranting sometimes. People will take it more seriously. And when people take it seriously, maybe Ron will get off his butt and get a website up and tell us what his platform is.
- I don't have enough information on Ignacio to get an article together, but if you do, by all means get it started! Justforasecond 17:00, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
if we can get things together i wouldn't be all that surprised it a local journalist picks up this page and the content we're assembling gets noticed. more info about nadel and de la fuente is sorely needed.
oh yeah, i almost forgot, any of you mostly anonymous apologists that keep removing any negative info about dellums -- your contributions would be more appreciated if you added things like what dellums is running on (though he has no website so who knows what *that* is).
-Justforasecond 05:32, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
Since this is an online encyclopedia and not a running current events blog, the emphasis in this article should weigh more towards Dellums' congressional career, positive and otherwise. A lot of stuff seems added quite recently in light of the new political campaign, the more POV-ish statements and quotes from geocities and frontpagemag that casual readers see, the less credible will be our collective effort, on this and other entries.
There's no way I can see to rewrite the $125-a-plate fundraiser spiel - it seems to me in CA that ANY serious candidate for an office representing hundreds of thousands would have require such an event. Are we going to write them into every candidate's bio?
I've read about some of the wiki-controversies y'all have involved yourselves in, and that also goes to credibility as well.
- I agree. This section has devolved into a very lengthy and lightly veiled attack on Dellums for not having a website "in the Internet age", having fundraising dinners" that many cannot afford" and not being true to his "1970s socialism". This is not in accordance with our NPOV policy. Please do not restore the section again -- it needs to be balanced and much, much shorter, considering the length of Dellums's career his work. BCorr|Брайен 12:18, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
Son Michael Dellums, convicted murderer section
I removed this as it really seems not too relevant to Dellums's history and life and is another veiled attack on his character:
- Dellum's son from his first marriage, Michael, was convicted of murdering a man in 1979 over a twenty-dollar bag of marjiuana. He is still in prison. Michael was born during divorce proceedings between Dellums and his first wife, and Dellums has stated that he did not raise Michael. In his memoirs Lying Down With the Lions: A Public Life from the Streets of Oakland to the Halls of Power, Dellums acknowledged all his children except Michael. Referring to himself in the third person, Dellums wrote:
"I know, in ways publicly apparent and in ways that can never be discussed outside of a secure room, that the world is a better and more humane place for my children -- Joshua, Alexander and Kimiko -- than it would have been without the steadfast engagement of Ron Dellums.
- Lying Down With the Lions, page 207
- On the dedication page, Dellums acknowledged his and his wife's children from a previous marriage: Pam, Brandy, Erik, Piper, Joshua, Alexander, and Kimiko; here too skipping Michael.
BCorr|Брайен 12:27, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
- I've restored this. Why is it not relevant? It is a revealing look at the man's character the extent to which he distances himself from his own son (unlike Ignacio De La Fuente) -- even disincluding him from the dedication in his book. It's a very unclassy/ugly thing to do. Justforasecond 15:14, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
Some editors want a biographical, hindsight, looking-out-towards-the-sunset type article on a man who's not even dead, let alone out of politics. Others are critical of the way we have contributed to this article's sections about Dellums current campaign finance. They want a simple brief article on 71 year old Dellums, a complex man with a lengthy and significant political career marked by a Congressional Chairmanship, among many other things. They appear to want the "reader's digest" version so to speak. If they are political scientists, professional or amatuer, they are, sadly, in many ways similar to the increasing trend of one-dimensional political campaigns and their 5 to 7 word sound bites, conveniently packaged for the short attention spans of television addicts. Accordingly it is no wonder they are apologists for Dellums current campaign finance dinners. But hey, BCorr, you don't even have a intelligent defense of the dinners, i.e. that they are at least accountable hard money contributions. Or maybe you have no problem with Soft Money anyways. I'll stop giving you bullets here and flip a quarter in the air, (do they still manufacture quarters in the US anymore), and wager that you probably have a secret disdain of Russ Feingold. Go twist that one up Cappy. 70.198.250.111 08:24, 7 March 2006 (UTC)Broadway Joe
- I visited this page briefly and was immediately put off by the above-referenced section, which apparently had been restored. It's in appallingly bad taste and completely over-the-top. I've deleted it. There should be a section on Dellums' family and even mention of this son -- but certainly not in this fashion, and not with a huge, honking headline. Just incredibly tacky. And I wonder why there's no mention of Erik Todd Dellums, Ron's (extremly gracious and) talented actor son? Deeceevoice 13:25, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree that this section is way over the top. Family does seem pertinent, but the in depth analysis of his family relationships does not appear appropriate, and the headline is not only innappropriate but in poor taste. As broadway joe points out, here's a 71 year old man with a long career... his son's issues are of less general and historical interest than his work during vietnam, yet is given a larger headline and more detail. I don't think that that makes any sense. Let's come to a CONSENSUS here and improve the article!Reggaedelgado 18:30, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
- I've added info about two other children and shortened the section on Michael. Don't know if any of you have lived in the Bay Area for long, but Dellums relationship with Michael does come up from time to time in the local press. Justforasecond 19:14, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
- Nice work. And yes, Michael & his relationship with his father has been receiving a fair amount of press, but still I'm not sure how much interest/importance there is there. With this edit, it seems much more balanced and provides a context for the information about Michael. Again, nice work......Reggaedelgado 02:14, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks :) Justforasecond 02:41, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
A $20 bag of pot in '79 was maybe, oh a 1/2 an ounce of mexicali brick brown-schwag, what a waste. Somebody was hot tempered loser. Well, Dellums' son Michael has particular salience during the current mayoral election in Oakland as Delllums' leading opponent in the election, De La Fuente, also has a son who committed heinous crimes. Many are looking at this strange angle of the candidates, and their positions on crime and punishment. 70.198.20.149Broadway Joe
- As an outsider who came here via an alert on the admins' noticeboard, my opinion is that as it stands it's relevant and NPOV: "Michael, the product of Dellum's first marriage, was born when the couple was undergoing a divorce and was raised by his mother. He is currently serving a prison term for a drug-related murder.". The diatribe previously deleted, however, was totally and utterly over the top and was simply character-assassination-by-association. --kingboyk 12:52, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
- I agree. I rewrote the section to read as it currently does. (I returned and inserted the rewrite. I don't know if the editor who removed it BCorr (or somethig) meant to. He left me a note thanking me for my input and apologizing for a hasty edit that reverted some of my stuff.) I respect Dellums enormously, but I, too, believe that the info is relevant -- even poignant. It's a reminder that no family is immune from misfortune/tragedy. Deeceevoice 13:00, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
User Bcorr
Watch out for User:Bcorr, he went around removing my edits on unrelated articles (such as Gummy Bears) tagging them "obnoxious vandalism" because of the work on the Dellums page. He used an anonymous IP when doing so, but has been unmasked User_talk:65.96.160.248 Justforasecond 16:41, 7 March 2006 (UTC)
He also engaged in minor counter-insurgency editing of my overhaul of the Oakland City Center article. He did, however, make only a minor change, but nonetheless, the point is, he is demonstrating his anti-social propensities to be a "Wikisurveillance" operative. 70.198.166.63 06:31, 10 March 2006 (UTC)Broadway Joe
Article is no longer written from a NPOV
I have tried to remove unbalanced and overly attacking material from this article and have been repeatedly reverted by Justforasecond and other anon IP editors. The discussions with me have devolved into attacks of my character and mycommitment to campaign finance reform, rather than the points I've made. BCorr|Брайен 23:50, 13 March 2006 (UTC)
- Hey Bcorr, you logged in anonymously, reverted my edits on articles like "Gummy Bears", and described them as "obnoxious vandalism". If you've got some NPOV issues please describe them in a civil fashion. We're trying to right an honest article here about Ron that covers him completely, not in the way an obituary or promotional piece would. There are so many wikipedians that are shocked to see less then glowing material in an encyclopedia, but facts are facts and all of this is cited. BTW, I wrote most of this article ("Broadway Joe" has added quite a bit recently). It was a rather drab stub when I arrived. Justforasecond 01:46, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
- I haven't read this article through. I was directed here by another editor, but I don't have time to read it. I'll have to come back later. But one thing that jumped out at me immediately was the section on Ron's son who was convicted of murder. In incredibly poor taste and completely uncalled for. I deleted it. Yes, information on the Dellums' family should be included, but certainly not in this fashion, with this bitchy, carping tone. If the rest of the article is in this vein, then, IMO, it needs serious attention. Deeceevoice 13:29, 14 March 2006 (UTC)
Hey Bcorr or BCorr, you have been rightfully criticized for engaging in your counter-insurgency surveillance and editing of other articles I and justforasecond have edited, elsewhere on Misplaced Pages, and I don't believe you stumbled across those by accident. Who are your other targets? How ethical of you. In regards to "anon IP editors" maybe I'm mistaken here, but don't the Misplaced Pages guidlines, namely the "editing basics" section direct us to "not sign edits you make to regular articles?" I'm done with this guy. 70.198.20.149Broadway Joe
- Broadway Joe -- create an account for yourself, it makes things work better. I'm curious how deeceevoice ended up on this page. This is outside the scope of her usual interest (Ancient Egypt, Anthropology, Jazz, and Kwanzaa). I did a little wikisurveillance of my own and found a very mysterious user, User:BTR seems to have invited her here, but that user hasn't edited any other articles. Justforasecond 18:17, 15 March 2006 (UTC)
- You could have saved yourself the trouble, JFAS. I already stated above how I arrived here. And, no. This isn't "outside the scope of usual interest." I've edited pieces on all kinds of subject matter, but particularly black subject matter. Dellums is a brother I've watched from time to time and mostly admired since I met on the Hill back in 1970. So, hey, I'm right at home here. :p Deeceevoice 09:09, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
A request for intervention
I agree. I deleted the entire fundraising section. It's absurd. $125/plate for a dinner is actually reasonable in this day and age, when candidates routinely host $1,000-a-plate and up affairs. This sort of fundraising is necessary and commonplace. I've also all but completely deleted the section on the mayoral campaign. I put the lead para in the section up near the top. But until all the crap can be sorted out -- much of it very clearly POV and crafted w/an eye toward affecting public/voter sentiment -- it shouldn't be in the article. Further a lot of the material seems more suited to a newspaper article; it's simply current events.
I've asked for admin intervention in the matter of JustforaSecond's insistence on an incredibly tacky and vicious treatment of Dellum's family life, reasonable changes to which he continues to revert. This is incredibly unseemly, vicious and, IMO, immature. Misplaced Pages should not be used as a rag to smear candidates running for office. One would think that, after the Seigenthaler episode, this sort of thing would be more closely watched. I smell, if not a lawsuit, certainly more really nasty public criticism/scrutiny for Misplaced Pages if editors like JFAS and the anonymous hack who libeled Seigenthaler are allowed to continue in this manner.
Disgusting.
I advise those of you who are similarly concerned about the tone and content of this piece to do likewise. Perhaps this matter belongs before the Misplaced Pages:Administrators' noticeboard? I don't have the time (I've got deadlines) to pursue this appropriately, but I encourage others to do so. I think User JFAS needs to be very sternly warned about such conduct, as it is potentially extremely detrimental to the project. Deeceevoice 08:51, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not aware of the "request for intervention" method of dispute resolution. I wrote a consensus version of the family life section (see previous messages on talk page), which some seem not to like. Is it "incredibly tacky" to have very small subjects devoted to relatively well known children? The man's family is at least as important and notable as the other topics on the page. Justforasecond 16:14, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
Angola and Cuba
Dellums supports Castro -- that much is cited. The analysis of why -- that Cuba supported poopular uprisings in Africa needs to be cited. As it is smacks of original research. I'd guess he supports Cuba/Castro because they're both socialist.
Justforasecond 16:14, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
sloppy reorgs
After a recent reorganization:
- 4 Foreign policy controversies
* 4.1 Cuba and Angola * 4.2 Grenada * 4.3 Criticisms of post-Congressional work * 4.4 Legacy * 4.5 Congressional tribute
A "congressional tribute" is not a foreign policy controversy -- please be less careless when reorganizing. Justforasecond 16:18, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
please explain
Calton,
Please explain the removal of information about Ron Dellums' lobbying activities. These are verifiable, notable facts.
BTW, unlike others, you've added precisely zero content to the article.
Justforasecond 04:41, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
- Justforasecond:
- Your version of this section has devolved into a very lengthy and lightly veiled attack on Dellums for what is -- in your opinion -- his not being true to his "1970s socialism". This is not in accordance with our NPOV policy. Please do not restore the section again -- it needs to be balanced and much, much shorter, considering the length of Dellums's career his work.
- Hey Bcorr, good to see you aren't sockpuppeteering today.
- Please explain how including facts is an NPOV violation. Remember, wiki is not paper. If you've got something to "balance" it out, please add it...but it might be a challenge. I've included most of his high-profile lobbying activities: Peralta colleges, A/C transit, Haiti, LBNL, and those that some keep reverting. Justforasecond 15:59, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
- There's been no discussion on this so I re-added the information about Dellums' lobbying. Justforasecond 16:05, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
- There's still no discussion here. It is POV to remove only lobbying items you don't like. I've placed both questionable and more-benign lobbying activities there. Remember to act in good faith and utilize wiki talk pages. Justforasecond 01:39, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
- As a general rule, I don't discuss disingenuous and/or transparently bogus edit summaries, since them what make them are usually fully aware of what they're doing, and discussion is normally pointless. Nevertheless, to deprive you of your excuses du jour:
- 1) wiki is the uncensored store of all human knowledge. First, if you're going to do the pompous quotation thing, get it right: Misplaced Pages is (aiming to be) the SUM of of all human knowledge. Misplaced Pages? Not Everything2.
- 2) removed POV. Wrong, twice. You're not removing anything, and what you're adding is POV: pure campaign-attack-ad detail; I suspect you'd add ominous thrumming music in the background if you could figure out how.
- 3) uncensored. Another word you're misusing. Hint: "editing unimportant, irrelevant, trivial, and/or tendetious details" =/= "censoring"
- 4) (From previous edit summaries) rv -- propoganda and censorship have no place on wiki See #3 for the latter and #2 for the former: take your own advice, or at least don't cloak your axe-grinding with such obvious hypocrisy.
Perhaps you should reacquaint yourself with WP:NPOV -- and a decent dictionary. --Calton | Talk 02:20, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
- Edit summaries labeled "minor" that actually remove large portions of text are vandalistic and not acting in good faith, Calton. Misplaced Pages is aiming to be the warehouse for all human knowledge, and you are working against that aim. I've done my part to be neutral, adding inforamtion about all of Dellums lobbying. Now its your turn to be neutral: cease removing relevant, notable, encyclopedic content. Justforasecond 02:47, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
Lobbying activities
What's the problem with listing Dellums lobbying activities? As far as I can see, the edits are sourced and a newspaper is an acceptable source. CoYep 02:59, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
- I don't see any response to this but there is a lot of reverting going on. Could editors that are opposed to information about the lobbying activities (User:Guettarda, User:Joshuaz, etc) please explain their rationales? It's not a consensus if you don't discuss. I've put in information about the contrvoersial and less controversial activities so I don't think it is unbalanced. Justforasecond 17:53, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
Refusal to discuss
Several editors are refusing to discuss their opinions on the talk page. This is counter to the spirit and policy of wikipedia. Picking and choosing factual material to remove to support a POV is also counter to wikipedia. Please act in good faith, follow wikipedia policies and we can all make wikipedia a more useful resource.
Justforasecond 05:49, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
- Once again, Justforasecond, IMHO you are accusing people of not following Misplaced Pages's policies if they don't edit an article for a few days or don't endlessly continue a discussion with you where you make veiled (or open) personal attacks on editors and their motives, continue to push what appears to many of us (and as we have explained over and over) to be an anti-Dellums POV, and quote policies that many of us feel you are not following in your own edits. Please take a break from the various crusades that you have listed on your user page and please refrain from impugning the motives and morality of those that you disagree with. BCorr|Брайен 12:20, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
- Bcorr, please be more civil. I have editted neutrally, and, like I said, added information about *all* of Dellums' lobbying activities, whether it is for the Peralta colleges or for Haiti. A couple of editors continue to delete particular lobbying activities that might make Dellums look bad. They refuse to discuss their reasons for this. Some have not said even one word about this, just reverting...not very wikilike behavior! I would implore users that don't have time to adhere to wikipedia policies of consensus building and neutrality to take a break.
- BTW, I have no part in politics, unlike some political consultants who may be editting here. Justforasecond 14:47, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
trinidad, dc, new england and tokyo
editors from trinidad, dc, new england and tokyo, your help on wiki is appreciated, but when it comes to local politicians in california that you don't have much experience with or knowledge of, please think twice before making changes. and, of course, discuss your changes here.
thanks! Justforasecond 18:07, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
So much wrong there:
- 1) Smarmy and disingenuous claims of special knowledge. What exactly are YOUR special qualifications? Do you even live in Oakland or even the Bay Area? Hint: self-righteousness doesn't count.
- 2) Irrelevant claims that only certain editors are able or should be editing certain articles: not even wrong, as Wolfgang Pauli reportedly once said. You certainly have no qualms about boasting about your work on Dan Rostenkowski (so, you live in Chicago, too?}, George Miller (you also live in Contra Costa County?), and Woody Allen (so, you and the Woodster are close?).
- 3) Factually incorrect: I'm a former resident of his district -- for many years, in fact -- and still vote by permanent absentee ballot. Hell, I voted in California's last recall/gubernatorial race BY FAX from Tokyo (special circumstances allowed by the state, due to the short notice for the special election -- fat lot of good it did me, since the bastard still won).
Justforasecond, your excuses are getting more and more desperate. --Calton | Talk 19:48, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
- Calton, please remain civil. You may have lived in the district (though it doesn't sound like you actually lived there when Dellums was in office), but certainly others have not and know little to nothing about Dellums. If these editors were actually adding to the article or doing research, then they are welcome to add content, but they aren't -- they are simply reverting. Some have not even typed a keystroke on this talk page.
- As for voting from Tokyo: You don't seem very informed in what is going on in the state -- the last gubernatorial election was not a recall. Schwarzenneger was re-elected in an ordinary election in
20052004. If you can't keep up with something as basic as this, maybe you could let Oaklanders decide their own leaders? Justforasecond 20:51, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
- Stop with your disingenuous nonsense about "civility": you've been insulting everyone's intelligence here with your nonsensical and ever-shifting rationales for your obvious axe-grinding. Frankly, I'm more amused than angry by the holes you keep digging for yourself.
- though it doesn't sound like you actually lived there when Dellums was in office Really? And you know this HOW, exactly? What tests did you apply to my writing to come to this conclusion? Computer-aided textual analysis? Deconstructionist techniques? Ouija board? Or did you, as it sounds like, simply pull out an empty and meaningless phrase from your nether regions and hope no one would notice? Whatever technique you used, you'd better get a refund from whomever taught it to you, since it is blatantly -- and probably knowingly -- false.
- You don't seem very informed You don't seem to have much reading comprehension: what part of the conjoined phrase "recall/gubernatorial race" did you miss?
- Schwarzenneger was re-elected in an ordinary election in 2005. That's funny, the California Secretary of State doesn't seem to have heard of this election. There WAS a special election where the Guvenator's pet propositions got thrashed (that one, I did by ordinary mail). If you can't keep up with something as basic as this, maybe you leave this to people who know what they're doing.
- And speaking of qualifications, you dodged the entire question -- the one on which your whole flimsy argument of local knowledge giving you special qualifications rests on -- of where, exactly, you live: Berkeley, Oakland, Chicago, or Woody Allen's back pocket? Be straight, for once: which is it?
- (My marginal bet is I've been in Berkeley and/or Oakland more recently than YOU have, despite living in Tokyo, and my sure-thing bet is that I've spent more time there than you. Not that it really matters, but if you're going to make this claim, you need to put up or shut up, guy.) --Calton | Talk 00:19, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- Calton, please be civil. Don't know if you noticed the teacup at the top of the page. "Put up or shut up" is not a friendly way to talk to people. But if I were in your shoes, I don't think I'd be putting much on that "sure thing" bet. Justforasecond 00:28, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- Have you considered, I dunno, giving a straight answer? An actual answer to the actual questions you've been repeatedly asked? No? Didn't think so. Into the bozofilter with you, troll-boy. --Calton | Talk 04:41, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
Boys! Relax, this is rediculous. Neither of you is taking the high road here (although both of you are close). Justforasecond, I know we all are irritated by the edit wars going on here, but that really doesn't have anything to do with the location of our computers. Carlton, I understand how that would make you feel defensive, but it was not an intentional personal attack, and perhaps we all need to assume positive intent... of course that is easier when we keep our words positive! And keeping it positive does NOT mean one conciliatory sentence followed by baiting or attacking. Lets get this article good, I'm not sure we have enough time to do that AND bicker. Have great days, although I think some of us are ending one and some of us are starting one.Reggaedelgado 00:49, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- Oh, based on JFAS's history, I strongly suspect that it his/her edits were intentional personal attacks. But Calton shouldn't waste his breath on trolling. Guettarda 03:26, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- I removed this personal attack but Guettarda re-inserted it and called my edit vandalism. Justforasecond 04:50, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- I think you mean "typing fingers", since I don't yell at my computer much these days since the neighbors started complaining. But yeah, taking JFAS seriously is an utter waste of energy, and he's simply best ignored or marginalized. Well, actually, it seems as if he's self-marginalizing... --Calton | Talk 04:41, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- I see Calton has chosen to inbibe this discussion page with his emotionally invective patter. I point out Calton's favorite techniques which he consistantly uses in the many discussion pages he enters, whips into a froth and then leaves. Nearly every discussion page post he makes has some judgement of character which makes little of the person he edits against. He consistantly chooses a target, uses language to belittle the target. His forte' is "I'm right and you are wrong," I liken his methods to building a fort of words and then throwing brick-like words over at the other fellow. His discussion page posts usually begin with a judgement which he makes and states in such a way as to get everyone's agreement. And then he becomes uncivil. Could you imagine a politician talking like he does? heh ! Terryeo 17:05, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- I think you mean "typing fingers", since I don't yell at my computer much these days since the neighbors started complaining. But yeah, taking JFAS seriously is an utter waste of energy, and he's simply best ignored or marginalized. Well, actually, it seems as if he's self-marginalizing... --Calton | Talk 04:41, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
- I liken his methods to building a fort of words and then throwing brick-like words over at the other fellow. As Sam Spade said in The Maltese Falcon, "What do you want me to do, learn to stutter?" Articulation: clearly an enemy of Terryeo.
- ...he makes has some judgement of character... Some people need their characters judged. You're an obvious example, maybe someone should...wait, it's already been done and is being done. Boy, sucks to be you, doesn't it? --Calton | Talk 06:53, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'm thinking the same: the basic reason. --ElectricEye 18:23, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
I've blocked JFAS for 24 hours for revert warring and gaming 3RR. It is not appropriate to force through your desired version against consensus — we have to engage others in discussion instead. Having said that, I'd also like to remind people of the No personal attacks and Civility policies. — Matt Crypto 19:10, 5 April 2006 (UTC)
Encyclopedic Standards
Accuracy, Verifiability, Credibility -- Unless the San Francisco Chronicle is lying, the informations included by JFS are accurate, verifiable and credible
Neutrality & Objectivity -- Listing facts without judgmental comments is IMO neutral and objective.
And, I for my part like to know who is on who's payroll. (I would love to see the list of W Bush included in his article as well)CoYep 21:09, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
Truth in edit summaries
Hey friends. Wiki requires consensus. Looking around this talk page it seems like only a couple editors have been discussing, and seems like there is agreement or "consensus" among these. There are a few others that have been reverting. I encourage these editors to discuss their changes here, but in the mean time they won't be part of the discussed consensus.
I'd also like to get the article out of the back and forth reversion mode, but it seems any change, even if it doesn't involve the lobbying activities of Dellums is reverted.
Justforasecond 02:04, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Just for the record, Justforasecond, the version that you continue to revert to is YOUR preferred verions, NOT the consensus version or the one that the discussion on THIS ENTIRE PAGE has tended to support. BCorr|Брайен 18:35, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Bcorr, please limit your CAPITAL letters. They come across as shouting, which is uncivil. I'm hoping to get discussion about the article here, which is the wiki way. The consensus on the talk page is that Dellums lobbying should be described in the article, but some editors keep cutting this information out. Justforasecond 18:44, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- i've only been shouting because i have felt that i am struggling unsucessfully to make myself understood by you. BCorr|Брайен 20:55, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- All I'm requesting is discussion of the edits rather than reverts. Its hard to assume good faith when editors appear out of the blue, and begin reverting without comment. These editors have been invited by users with names like "Stealth Technology" and no edit history. It's also hard to assume good faith when editors try to turn Dellums into a racial issue by posting on an invitees-only "race and ethnicity" noticeboard, even more difficult when these editors label others "trolls" and "white supremacists" Justforasecond 21:27, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Strangely to me, that's all that many of us -- myself, Colton, Guettarda among others -- have asked you for weeks, and you continue to revert and revert and revert to a version that you favor (and from time to time another editor will come along and echo you, such as Broadway Joe or CoYep). Although you have relented on insisting that some of the more (IMHO) POV sections and statements, you have continued to insist that all sorts of side issues -- as mentioned above on this entire page -- are reasons that other opinions aren't valid or don't constitute real discussion: e.g., living in New England, someone at some point called someone a troll, using capital letters, and so on.
- IMHO I feel that those are red herrings and distract from the main point: namely that you have been engaged in a campaign, as outlined on your user page, to highlight in Misplaced Pages articles what you consider hypocrisy and dishonesty of certain individuals. Please desist.
- Thanks, BCorr|Брайен 21:44, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Bcorr, you've sockpuppeted around and reverted my edits on pages such as "Gummy Bears" and "Berkeley Marina" and posted info about the Dellums page on the "Race and Ethnicity" noticeboard. Notoriously uncivil users have shown up here without showing any previous interest in the page after being notified by suspicious users like User:BTR a.k.a. "Stealth Technology". Several of these editors don't seem to have any ties to the Bay Area at all. Their newfound interest in a mayoral election in Oakland is unusual. You might not think it odd that these users appeared and of the blue and began revert warring and making personal attacks immediately....but many would.
- But to get beyond that, what are the issues with Dellums' lobbying? It's all cited information. How did y'all decide which of the lobbying activities were fit for the article and which weren't? And what are the issues that require the NPOV tag on the top of the article? I inserted one in the lobbying section, which seems to be the big bone of contention, but some editor reverted it without commenting. Justforasecond 23:16, 8 April 2006 (UTC)
- Ah yes, the familiar cycle of complaints from you, Justforasecond: surprise, lack of understanding of our differences, implications of alleged unethical behavior, indignant rejection of others' "standing" to edit the article, and flip rejection of other editors' points, and focus on minor events and points, and citation of only vaguely related guidelines and policies.
- The problem that we have all noted is that you have been adding large amounts of information related to Dellums' lobbying, his children, and his campaign for mayor of Oakland. Your older versions of the article demonstrate this clearly: such as this one and this user and perhaps going as far back as this edit (since this user is interested in the same topics as you are). As the article has been expanded a bit to keep it balanced, more of your desired information has made it in, but you seem to be unsatisfied unless the article clearly gived the reader the impression that Dellums didn't do his job as a congressman, father, mayoral candidate, or even as an American -- and that no one who lives outside of the Bay Area could know as much as you do.
- (getting away from indentation)
- Call it "allegedly unethical" if you want, but logging in anonymous to remove my edits on articles such as "gummy bears", "credit score" and "berkeley marina" strikes me as odd behavior. It is unusual for editors from Trinidad to be interested in Oakland mayoral candidates.
- Yes, I believe the article should have information about Dellums lobbying activities and his son Michael, the one in prison, as well as his fight against Apartheid and his son Erik, the one in "The Wire". Why would it make sense leave either out? I've expanded the article in almost all of the sections, as the history shows. You and the revert-only users that have shown up lately don't seem to mind when I've created or expanded sections that make Dellums look good.
- To make things simple: what is your standard for lobbying activities that are fit for the article and which aren't? Justforasecond 16:12, 9 April 2006 (UTC)
- The section on Dellums' family as I've rewritten it and as it now stands is perfectly in keeping with the treatment of the families of other notable persons in biographical entries, generally, and on Misplaced Pages in particular. There is absolutely no rationale for making separate entries/subheads for selected offspring. Your deliberate overemphasis of the one son's criminal background is a transparent and, IMO, tacky attempt to smear the father with the sins of the son. It won't be tolerated. Deeceevoice 13:14, 11 April 2006 (UTC)
Dellums accused of cocaine and marijuana use
Dellums was investigated for cocaine and marijuana use back in 1983:
Rep. Ronald Dellums (CA)(1983) H. REP. NO. 98-559, 98th Cong., 1st Sess., at 3-4, 15-16, 56-63, 398-401, 406-409, 411-419 (1983)
Used cocaine and marijuana
Preliminary Inquiry voted (March 15, 1983); Special Counsel investigated and found no basis for charges; Comm. took no further action (Nov. 17, 1983)
www.house.gov/ethics/Historical Chart
I haven't been able to find out much more about it, but it looks like his staffers were also investigated. The article is locked right now but we can put it in when the time comes.
Justforasecond 05:04, 10 April 2006 (UTC)
- This is a good example to demonstrate that people have tried to attack the character and reputation of Ron Dellums by making charges that had no basis and were demonstrated to be false.
- I support this being part of a short subsection with the heading "False charges made against Dellums" and text such as "In 1983, Dellums was falsely accused of using cocaine and marijuana. A special counsel thoroughly investigated the accusations and after eight months could find no basis for the charges, and Dellums name was cleared." Of course, his staffers also being investigated (and cleared) might be helpful in showing just how much people tried to find something on Dellums and weren't able to. I hope you can find more about any resolution of that side issue.
- Good work finding something that helps balance the article. I'm glad we can agree on a piece of information and I'm sure we can also agree on how to present it in the article.
- Thanks, BCorr|Брайен 12:26, 10 April 2006 (UTC)
- Of course it should be noted that the counsel found nothing worth pursuing. I don't think we can say "falsely accused" and "thoroughly investigated" because we don't really know if the accusations were false and "thoroughly" is a POV term. Do you know anything additional about the allegaions? Who made them? Justforasecond 14:53, 10 April 2006 (UTC)
- I see what you're saying here, but surely you agree that any investigation of charges as uncomplicated as these and that lasts for eight months is by definition thorough -- unless you have some information to share that demonstrates that the special prosecutor completely failed to do his or her job. Also, I'm not sure what you mean by "we don't really know". That is not the standard that we use here. We don't really know if Dellums was elected or if he somehow stole the elections without most people finding out. We don't really know if he is the father of his children or if it's another man. We don't really know if he is African-American. We don't really know if he is still alive, but that someone else is impersonating him for political gain and profit. It seems very reasonable to assume that the allegations were false unless you have some information that indicates otherwise. Thanks, BCorr|Брайен 12:00, 11 April 2006 (UTC)
- We don't see a section titled "False accusations of murder against Robert Blake" in the Blake article, just a statement that he was tried and acquitted. We don't need to make further judgements in the Dellums case. I really don't know what the process is so I don't know how active the investigation was for those eight months. It takes our government long periods of time for fairly mundane activities. The Dellums investigation might have been thorough, but it also might have been fairly cursory. If we just say "the investigation closed eight months later" we will be stating the facts without inserting any judgments of our own.
- The other items (whether Dellums is African American, whether Dellums was ever elected) are "unknowable", but we have hundreds of sources for those pieces of information, including thousands of voters in his district. But, if anyone here really want to, he/she can change it the article "according to ...., Dellums is African American" Justforasecond 15:16, 11 April 2006 (UTC)
- For the record, I completely disagree with your analysis, and strongly oppose adding this information in a way that is inconsistent with the evidence and the clear implications of the evidence: to wit, that this demonstrates that people have tried to attack the character and reputation of Ron Dellums by making charges that had no basis and were demonstrated to be false.I would support text such as "In 1983, Dellums was falsely accused of using cocaine and marijuana. A special counsel thoroughly investigated the accusations and after eight months could find no basis for the charges, and Dellums name was cleared."
- Thanks, BCorr|Брайен 22:43, 13 April 2006 (UTC)
- I agree -- information should be added that is consistent with the the sources we have. i.e. "in 1983 dellums and his staff were investigated for cocaine and marijuana use. after eight months the investigation closed for lack of evidence." we should not add things in like "dellums name was cleared" or "dellums was falsely accused" or use pov terms such as "thoroughly". Justforasecond 23:22, 13 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'm afraid that your statement is not agreeing with mine. "For lack of evidence" implies that they were guilty, but somehow the necessary evidence was not available. And "thoroughly" is not POV -- it is at worst presumptive rather than biased, but I maintain that an objective statement about an eight-month-long investigation, despite your comments that we don't know exactly how the eight months were spent. It is POV to assume that it was not thorough. A word like "exhaustive" or "conclusive" would be POV, but clearly not the word "thorough." Finally, have you found a clear citation demonstrating that others were investigated, and if so who, and was it part of this investigation or anther one, and what was the result. I am confident that you would agree with me that rumor and innuendo have no place in an encyclopedia.
- However, in an attempt to meet your concerns and compromise in a way that both of us can live with, I propose adding the following once the article is umprotected: "In 1983, Dellums was accused -- quite possible falsely -- of using cocaine and marijuana. A special counsel investigated the accusations over an eight-month period and could find no basis for the charges.nd Dellums name was cleared."BCorr|Брайен 00:20, 14 April 2006 (UTC)
- "quite possible falsely" is speculative and pov and "Dellums name was cleared" is unverifiable. If an editor added "quite possibly accurately" I think you'd see why it is pov...just like if someone added "OJ's name was cleared". Let's just stick to the facts. Accused, investigated, investigation closed. About the staffers, their names are right next to Dellums' in the records of invesitations (also for drugs), but there are almost no details about the case. Justforasecond 00:48, 14 April 2006 (UTC)
- John Apperson (aide to Rep. Ronald Dellums) (1983)
- H. REP. NO. 98-559, 98th Cong., 1st Sess., at 56-63, 402-405, 410, 420-422 (1983)
- Used cocaine
- Preliminary Inquiry voted (March 15, 1983); Special Counsel investigated and found no basis for charges; Comm. took no further action Nov. 17, 1983)
- I simply disagree and stand by what I have proposed. Also, I don't know what the above stand-alone line "Used cocaine" means -- is it an accusation? a verdict? a question? a supposition? That information is not clarifying the matter, except to make it clear that it was one person (a staffer) rather than his staff (as a group). BCorr|Брайен 21:06, 15 April 2006 (UTC)
- You simply disagree with inserting facts and keeping out POV? Hmmmm...I don't think that's acceptable editor behavior. Justforasecond 21:18, 15 April 2006 (UTC)
- I simply disagree with your proposition of how to state the facts and your interpretation of what is considered "inserting facts and keeping out POV" I also take serious exception to your accusation here that my position is not "acceptable editor behavior". I consider that to clearly be a personal attack and ask you to consider apologizing to me. Sincerely, BCorr|Брайен 21:42, 15 April 2006 (UTC)
Inserting your own POV/analysis ("after a thorough investigation, dellums name was cleared") into articles is unacceptable editor behavior (see WP:NPOV). Sorry if you misinterpreted this as a personal attack, I assure you it wasn't intended as one. In the future remember to assume good faith (see WP:AGF). Justforasecond 22:05, 15 April 2006 (UTC)
- You are not understanding me. I simply disagree with your proposition of how to state the facts and your interpretation of what is considered "inserting facts and keeping out POV" I also take serious exception to your accusation here that my position is not "acceptable editor behavior". I certainly do consider that to clearly be a personal attack and I ask again that you to consider apologizing to me, which you have so far refused to do. Sincerely, BCorr|Брайен 12:25, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
- Sorry if you misunderstand -- as I said before this is not intended as a personal attack. "Dellums name was cleared" is your interpretation (you haven't indicated that you read it somewhere else) and "thoroughly investigated" is POV language. Remember to assume good faith Bcorr. Cheers. Justforasecond 19:01, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'm afraid that it may be you who is in the grip of what might be considered a misunderstanding. To reference what you proposed, which I believe is biased and therefore does not represent a neutral point of view (NPOV), when you wrote of using the phrase "For lack of evidence", there is a clear implication that they were guilty, but somehow the necessary evidence was not available. And I maintain that "thoroughly" is not POV -- it is at worst presumptive rather than biased, and I would ask you to explain why you consider it to be so, and not issue what seems to be another proclamation that "thoroughly investigated" is POV language
- I also maintain that an objective statement about an eight-month-long investigation, despite your comments that we don't know exactly how the eight months were spent. I believe that it is POV to assume that it was not thorough. A word like "exhaustive" or "conclusive" would be POV, but clearly not the word "thorough." Once again, I implore you to provide a clear citation demonstrating that others were investigated, and if so who was investigated, and was it part of this investigation or anther one, and what was the result. I remain confident that you would agree with me that rumor and innuendo have no place in an encyclopedia.
- However, in an attempt to meet your concerns and compromise in a way that both of us can live with, I again propose adding the following once the article is umprotected: "In 1983, Dellums was accused -- quite possible falsely -- of using cocaine and marijuana. A special counsel investigated the accusations over an eight-month period and could find no basis for the charges and Dellums name was cleared." -- BCorr|Брайен 16:15, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
- "-- quite possible falsely -- " is POV/speculative and "Dellums name was cleared" is unverifiable/POV, but otherwise this is getting better now that "thoroughly" is gone. I provided the citation about investigation of his aide Apperson above(looks like just one, my bad). Justforasecond 18:53, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
- I want to reiterate that this is a good example to demonstrate that people have tried to attack the character and reputation of Ron Dellums by making charges that had no basis and were demonstrated to be false, and showing just how much people tried to find something on Dellums and weren't able to. Despite your arguments, I still believe that it is POV to assume that it was not thorough, but more to the point, a word like "exhaustive" or "conclusive" would be POV, but clearly not the word "thorough." However, in a further attempt on my part to compromise again and address your concerns....
- I want to propose something that may address the issues you are raising in your last comments: this should be part of a short subsection still with the heading "False charges made against Dellums" and text such as "In 1983, Dellums was accused of using cocaine and marijuana, but no basis for that claim has been publicly demonstrated. A special counsel investigated the accusations and after eight months could find no basis for the charges, and Dellums was no longer under the cloud of suspicion." Of course, the information on his staffers also being investigated seems to be less meaningful and less relevant that it seemed when you though it was a larger number. It might be helpful to get more information on who this so-called aide "Apperson" actually is, what his position was, what the specifc charge was (as "drug charges" is far too vague to provide encyclopedic information), and if he was investigated as part of the same process or something else. I do hope you can find more about any specifics, details, and resolution of that side issue.
- Thanks, BCorr|Брайен 19:25, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
- Looking better! John Apperson was accused of using cocaine (as I pasted above and as you'll see at the link). I think we might skip the "cloud of suspicion" line, it just doesn't sound encyclopedic. BTW Dellums left this event out of his book so I wasn't able to find more details about it. Justforasecond 19:43, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
Vietnam War crimes hearings
This section seems overly long - I suggest leaving only the first paragraph, and creating a separate article out of this section, where it can discuss the contributions of other people as well. I have not made this change yet; I'm just suggesting it. user:Argyriou
- Sounds good to me. Justforasecond 14:33, 12 May 2006 (UTC)
uncited additions to ron dellums
please don't remove cited material and replace it with uncited material. it decreseas article quality. Justforasecond 01:36, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
- Calton, salon.com is a highly respected magazine. Please stop removing cited material and replacing it with uncited material. Justforasecond 06:13, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
- deeceevoice, linking to http://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Ron_Dellums&action=edit§ion=4 (in other words...a link to edit the ron dellums page) doesn't really count as a citation. I'm not sure why you insist on removing the salon.com citation, it does say that the U.S. allied with South African (in part) because of anti-communism, which seems to be your point. It doesnt say anything about the U.S. "eyeing with concern" revolutions in other African nations. Justforasecond 22:36, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
An error caused by cutting and pasting the Wiki web browser link, not realizing I hadn't clicked the other, source window first. Hunted up a couple of other sources and replaced the unintended link. deeceevoice 08:08, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
dellums and angola, etc
Dellums was anti-apartheid, a socialist, and pro-Castro. In the Bay Area this wasn't all that unusual in the 70's. There is nothing to show that Dellums was pro-Castro because he wanted Castro to assist African nations in military struggles.
Justforasecond 03:51, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Dellums was pro anyone who was for the liberation of southern Africa from colonialism -- including the European settler colony of South Africa. And so were the majority of politicized African Americans of the day. (FYI: In fact, African-Americans generally have been pro-Castro since he visited the U.S. in the late '50s and insisted on staying in Harlem, because he said he felt "at home" there. He and his entourage stayed at the Hotel Teresa, owned by Ron Brown's parents. He was afraid of being poisoned, so they bought live chickens -- and killed them in the hotel bathtub. *erlch*) deeceevoice 07:57, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
- Uh, staying in a hotel in harlem and killing chickens in the tub has nothing to do with support for Angola or the U.S. "eyeing with concern". I don't having this info is in the article if there is some *evidence* of Dellums supporting Castro solely because of Castro's support for Angola, but you haven't provided any (yet) and I haven't seen it elsewhere. BTW Dellums and his wife are no longer afraid of being poisoned and now eat at restaraunts, where they have a reputation for being lousy tippers. Justforasecond 15:17, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Whut thuh?!!?!!! That was CASTRO; Dellums wouldn't have "visited the U.S." Boy, do you have a one-track mind. lol deeceevoice 17:14, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
- My bad -- but there's still nothing indicating Dellums liked Castro because Castro helped black folks in Africa. It was really all about socialism, as far as I can tell. A dirty word in some parts of the country but fairly common in Berkeley in the 70s. Of course Dellums later reinvented himself: lobbying for big pharma, driving a Benz, and holding $100 a plate fundraisers. But still tipping badly! Justforasecond 23:05, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Open your mind, JFAS. You likely weren't around/politically conscious/active during this time. I was. The phenomenon described in the quote in the article is on target with regard to African American sentiment. And Dellums was no exception. The fact that this nation (once again) was on the wrong side of human history in black peoples' legitimate struggles for self-determination and freedom from brutality, racism and oppression was a big deal in the African-American community. The U.S. was in bed with the racist, white apartheid regime and supported brutal animals like Savimbi, causing countless, unnecessary deaths and suffering -- all in the name of stemming a nonexistent "red tide." It fuelled a hot war on the African continent, sacrificing thousands of black lives, all the while making nicey-nice face to face with the Soviet Union in Europe. The message it sent was that black lives were cheap, and that this nation didn't really give a flying f*** about the so-called ideals of its "Founding Fathers." Fact is, the concerns about access to raw materials were secondary. Had the U.S. gotten over its idiotic, hide-bound "my enemy's friend is my enemy" bullcrap foreign policy, it would have realized that Angolan/Southern African Marxism was not communism, and that had it chosen the right side, the consequent bloodbaths in the Congo (including the assassination of Patrice Lumumba), Mozambique and particularly Angola (Savimbi's killing field) could have been averted, and the landscape of that part of Africa, and the lives of the people who now live there, would be significantly and immeasurably different/better - and its access to raw materials was never threatened. (Military intelligence in the Cold War would have been iffy, but vis-a-vis southern African input would have been negligible. And South Africa remains today -- IMO, unfortunately -- a staunch ally of Israel.) Manley was an eloquent and impassioned supporter of Castro in the Nonaligned Movement for precisely the same reason -- and the U.S. punished him for it. This anti-U.S., anti-CIA sentiment was/is held by many black people the world over and is in great part the result of this legacy of imperialist militarist involvement against the legitimate aspirations of African peoples for independence. deeceevoice 04:04, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
- As I said before, I don't mind if this goes in the article as long as it is citably connected to and relevant to RON DELLUMS. I've got his book here and he doesn't mention it. I don't doubt that Dellums was opposed to U.S. policies in Angola (he was opposed to many U.S. foreign policies), but I think its obvious enough that the man was a socialist opposed to apartheid. There doesn't need to be any more convoluted explanation for his support of Castro, but if it really exists it is welcome in the article. The bad tipping, however, still needs explaining... Justforasecond 05:47, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
The historical and political context is relevant and bears directly on Dellums' posture towards Cuba, as he was/is part of the African-American community -- and of that part of the African-American community actively involved in the Free South Africa Movement. It is doubtful you will find anything explicitly spoken by Dellums in this regard. Unlike Manley, he had to walk a fine line as a U.S. Congressman. The historical information, accurately and adequately sourced, is sufficient -- and on-point. deeceevoice 06:28, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
Further, the affinity among African Americans for Fidel Castro goes beyond his Harlem visit and the liberation struggles in Southern Africa. During the Battista regime, Cuba was a degenerate playground for the West. Cuban society was shot through with elitism; economic injustice; and blatant, institutionalized anti-black racism; it was a plantation economy, where blacks were still little more than slaves -- desperately poor, without rights, illiterate, subservient, completely disenfranchised. And there was no recourse. Castro changed that -- and dramatically. The nation has a higher literacy rate (just looked it up; it's now 1 percent below that of the U.S. -- 96 percent, up from only 75 percent under Battista) than the U.S., and blacks became empowered, making tremendous strides educationally, economically, in terms of access to healthcare, and politically.http://www.theglobalist.com/DBWeb/StoryId.aspx?StoryId=2553 Is Cuba perfect? A bastion of free speech, egalitarianism and democracy? Hardly. And, IMO, the U.S. embargo has only exacerbated the nation's problems. But far and away, Cuban blacks have fared far better under Castro's regime than under that of Battista, who was a racist pig and a lacky of the U.S. Of the generation of Cuban-Americans who fled Cuba when Castro came to power, many were privileged whites, who had made their fortunes upon the backs of illiterate peasants -- the majority of them black -- and who lost their land and money when they fled to the U.S. The streak of anti-black racism in that generation is deep and very evident among old-school Cuban-Americans (and many of their children, as well). The old-school Cuban-American population, in fact, is among the most racist and far-right reactionary of all Latino populations in the U.S. Just more reasons why, among African-Americans, Castro isn't the pariah most white Americans blindly accept him to be.
- You are applying (or implying) that Dellums -- simply because he's Af-Am -- opposed Apartheid and supported socialism in order to affect affairs in Angola. It's not enough to cite that other blacks felt this way. I have a whole book here where Dellums doesn't mention it even once. It might be worthy of its own article or inserted into Angola but there isn't anything directly linking it to Dellums. BTW Dellums didn't really have to walk a fine line in Congress -- Berkeley sent him to Congress to "do the right thing" not play nicey-nice politics. Justforasecond 15:20, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
Every controversial congressional representative has to sometimes "walk a line," and, as an African American congressman in the late sixties and early seventies, Dellums was no different. Again, the information is relevant background and should remain. deeceevoice 21:53, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
- Dellums continued "walking the line" through the 70's, 80's, and 90's, until it became clear everyone had forgotten who he claimed to be way back in the early days....then he realized he was on his way out and quit to become a Benz-driving beltway lobbyist (though to be fair, he was no Jack Abramoff). In any case, if Angola etc really were his motivation he could have said so in his memoirs, when walking the line was absolutely unimportant. I'm going to try to pare down the language a little bit but I'll leave in a reference to other African struggles because they are relevant to the U.S.-South Africa alliance. Justforasecond 22:20, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
Deeceevoice - Calling a civil war between a gang of Communist thugs (MPLA and FRELIMO) and a gang of non-communist thugs (UNITA and RENAMO) an "anti-colonialist liberation struggle" is factually incorrect and POV. Calling the anti-apartheid movement an "anti-colonialist liberation struggle" has the virtue of being partially correct, though "anti-colonialist" is still wrong and both sets of terms are loaded with POV.
There were significant differences between the ANC on the one hand and MPLA and FRELIMO on the other. Many people supported the ANC, or at least the aims of ending apartheid, than supported MPLA and FRELIMO, and the aims of establishing Communism in Africa, which is why I separated the two. Argyriou 23:47, 1 July 2006 (UTC)
"Badly sourced Reagan sound bite"?
What's the "badly sourced Reagan sound bite" referred to in the edit note? If the reference is to the U.S. wanting to protect its access to the natural resources of South Africa, then I don't see what the fuss is. U.S. imperialism is simply political influence and militarism in the service of capitalism, the primary goal of which is to protect strategic and economic interests. "Economic" usually means access to ports and shipping routes and access to markets and cheap raw materials (in the case of Africa, bauxite, aluminum, gold, diamonds, platinum -- you name it) to feed capitalist production and the war machine. As in the Middle East, where the desire is to secure/ensure access to the Suez Canal and oil, U.S. imperialism in providing arms and CIA intelligence and mercenaries to the despicable, ego-driven, butcher-puppet Savimbi (I'm glad he's rotting in the ground) for decades was designed to thwart what the U.S. saw as a "communist takeover" (which was utter, myopic b.s.) in southern Africa that would result in hostile regimes coming to power and, among other things, the obstruction of U.S. access to essential/valuable natural resources/raw materials. So, if that's what's being contested here, cut it out. It's common knowledge; it's the way of the world. It's the way governments with military might operate -- often to the detriment of weaker nations. And the U.S. is an old hand at it. deeceevoice 08:22, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
- i agree with dcv. calton, please explain. Justforasecond 20:18, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Removed uncited info
An editor removed a great deal of sourced material, with the edit summary "removed uncited info" . I don't understand the problem with the material. If there are sourcing problems perhaps they should be discussed and fixed rather than tossing out the text entirely. -Will Beback 20:48, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
- oops i might have removed a little more than I intended. m'bad Justforasecond 06:40, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
Dellums won.
Despite the ongoing failed and transparent attempts to smear him here.deeceevoice 08:18, 19 June 2006 (UTC)
- Please remember to remain civil deeceevoice. It is not ok to describe editing as "transparent attempts to smear".
- Dellums election is a sad day indeed for Oakland. Many voters did not know that this primary would choose their mayor, let alone that Dellums would armtwist the elections commission to throw out "unqualified" ballots to push him over 50%, rather than let an orderly election in Novemeber proceed.
- The election was tainted by Dellums misbehavior. Dellums, a socialist, held $100 a plate fundraiser and, lied on his application for the election. Dellums knew that voters would be turned off if he listed his occupation as "washinton dc lobbyist" so described himself as merely a "retired congressman".
- Even at this date, Dellums still has not stated even why he was running or what he will do beyond "build bridges"...its just been sort of a "hey guys, i don't really have much to do and am a bit of a local celebrity..." campaign. Just when Oakland was pulling out of a seeminglinly-never-ending funk, Dellums will reinstate the corrupt, ineffective, and apathetic governance (the $100 million "lost" by the school district? the kids who couldn't read? the inept fire department that couldn't stop the oakland hills fire? murder rates near tops in the country...year after year?) the region suffered throughout the 70s, 80s, and early 90s under Dellums and his squad. Well, lets hope for the best. Ron might be mayor but there's a lot of smart young progressive blood in the city that won't put up with a return to mediocrity. Justforasecond 19:44, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
- If you have something to add to the article then please do so. This page is not here to discuss Dellums. Your essay is inappropriate. -Will Beback 22:17, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
- Yes. And please stop editing your POV into the article. The information you're adding may well be appropriate, but you're deliberately putting a nasty spin on it, with inference and innuendo. Which you've done before, here and elsewhere. You might wish to stick to editing articles for which you don't have such a strong POV. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 18:58, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
- Please remember to assume good faith, jpgordon. You've removed cited information about Dellums lobbying for Haiti. I don't see why its POV to mention Dellums receiving money from Haiti. If I didn't know better I'd think you were just blindly using the "revert" button. Justforasecond 20:01, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
- "Assume good faith" doesn't mean "assume someone who as already shown repeated lack of good faith is showing good faith now." I'm glad, however, that you know that I'm not blindly reverting. Are you really so blinkered that you can't see the POV in your own insertions?
- Dellums also works for Bristol-Myers Squibb, a multinational pharmaceutical corporation. changed to Dellums also works for Bristol-Myers Squib, a large, multinational for-profit pharmaceutical corporation. While in office, Dellums had railed against the profits of such companies. This is a POV formulation, in that the obvious intent is to imply Dellums is hypocritical. It's also poor encyclopedic form; "railed against"?
- Dellums' firm lobbied for Rolls Royce, a manufacturer of military aircraft engines. changed to Dellums has accepted over $120,000 from Rolls-Royce, an military engine manufacturer whose equipment power bombers used in the Iraq War. is a clear POV spin. RR makes a vast range of engines; yes, military engines are one application; your cherry picking this one application, and then adding the Iraq reference, cannot be construed as anything other than POV.
- Dellums took over $500,000 in lobbying money from the impoverished nation of Haiti in 2001-2002. Dellums worked to support Jean-Bertrand Aristide, who is viewed by some as a murderous dictator and by others a leftist hero. Why not include what Dellums actually said: "It was a dark day in American history (when the U.S. government) allowed a democratically elected president to go down in this hemisphere. I'm proud of the work I did there." Oh, wait, that wouldn't spin it your preferred direction. And why the "impoverished nation" language? More POV.
- Anyway, I'll toss an RFC in for this article; it's possible that my disgust for you might be making me see POV where none exists. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 00:12, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- "Assume good faith" doesn't mean "assume someone who as already shown repeated lack of good faith is showing good faith now." I'm glad, however, that you know that I'm not blindly reverting. Are you really so blinkered that you can't see the POV in your own insertions?
- Please remember to assume good faith, jpgordon. You've removed cited information about Dellums lobbying for Haiti. I don't see why its POV to mention Dellums receiving money from Haiti. If I didn't know better I'd think you were just blindly using the "revert" button. Justforasecond 20:01, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
- Dellums, the former chair of the Armed Services Committee, was not lobbying for Rolls Royce the car company, he was lobbying for Rolls Royce the aircraft engine company...
- As far as Haiti, you removed the entire section(!). If you think it needs some POV adjustment, go for it...but don't just erase history. That's not a way to make a high quality encyclopedia. Justforasecond 00:27, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- PS Please remember to remain civil, jpgordon. Thanks!
- Of course I removed the whole section; since the entire edit was POV, I wasn't going to do your work for you and make it NPOV. You're perfectly capable of doing that, as an experienced editor. And who said anything about autos? RR the aircraft (and marine) engine company makes a wide range of engines, including but by no mean limited to "bombers used in Iraq". If for some reason you needed an example of what RR makes, there was no reason at all to throw in such a POV spin; if you were editing in good faith, you would have attempted to correctly and honestly portray the company's product. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 00:37, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Dellums was lobbying for Rolls Royce in a military context. He wasn't trying to get congress to invest in high priced yacht engines. If we take him at his word he was only lobbying for Rolls Royce to retool military transport aircraft.... You seem to think this hipocritical from a man who came to power on an anti-war platform...well, you aren't the only one:
- "The issue is that the public perceives him as against anything involved in militarism," Nadel said. "If that behavior isn't exactly what they thought, it might change their opinions. Especially when the candidate is not coming out with a very concrete platform. Justforasecond 01:25, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Well, I'll bow out of this discussion until some other folks are drawn here by the RFC. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 01:40, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Jpgordon, while I think that Ron Dellums should have been tried for treason in 1983, and I'm happy to be leaving Oakland before the bastard becomes mayor, your edits really do break WP:NPOV in a big way. Argyriou 06:15, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Which edits? Removing JFAS's NPOV? Perhaps you have the authorship backwards? --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 13:30, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Oops. Yes, I do. I was referring to JFOS's edits. Argyriou 14:52, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Which edits? Removing JFAS's NPOV? Perhaps you have the authorship backwards? --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 13:30, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Jpgordon, while I think that Ron Dellums should have been tried for treason in 1983, and I'm happy to be leaving Oakland before the bastard becomes mayor, your edits really do break WP:NPOV in a big way. Argyriou 06:15, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Well, I'll bow out of this discussion until some other folks are drawn here by the RFC. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 01:40, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Of course I removed the whole section; since the entire edit was POV, I wasn't going to do your work for you and make it NPOV. You're perfectly capable of doing that, as an experienced editor. And who said anything about autos? RR the aircraft (and marine) engine company makes a wide range of engines, including but by no mean limited to "bombers used in Iraq". If for some reason you needed an example of what RR makes, there was no reason at all to throw in such a POV spin; if you were editing in good faith, you would have attempted to correctly and honestly portray the company's product. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 00:37, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
One Requested Comment
Half an a hour ago, I had never heard of WHO Ron Dellums is, but jumping in and looking really quickly:
- Why the war over including in the Intro a statement over his recent election win? Is it you don't think it belongs in the intro? or you don't believe it's a fact? If it's a fact that he's been declared the winner, surely it's worthy of mentioning in the intro.
- Why include the specific dollar figures of his lobbying income? My first impression is that it's it's to emphasize "how much money he's getting paid" to lobby. Rather than remove all references to lobbying income, and rather than beating us over the head with dozens of individual sums of how much each client paid-- how about we just list dellum's total income / total lobbying income.
- Why remove any reference to Haiti lobbying? Do you dispute whether he did lobby for it? or dispute the wording of the reference? If it's just the wording, see how you like my version.
- Refering to Bristol Myers as a "for-profit" corportation is redudant, and seems like it's intended to hit us over the head with the fact that corporate lobbying exists. I totally agree with the idea that this sort of lobbying may be a dangerous threat to democracy.... but Misplaced Pages isn't the place to try to make that point.
- Similarly-- maybe the Iraq war isn't a good thing, maybe it is a good thing. We don't need to hit people over the head with the fact that military engines are being used there. Suffice to say, US military equipment is used in US military wars-- reminding people of this doesn't really provide the reader with any new incidents.
In general, I may perhaps see merit in the point Justforasecond is trying to make-- but we should go out of our way to try to make sure we don't construct Misplaced Pages articles so as to make a point. And if there IS going to be a point that has to be made, we should try to be upfront about it, and say "A lot of people feel this way ____" and cite sources.
See my version, see whatcha thing. (Keep in mind--- my edits are only issues of language and POV.I haven't researched the factuality of what I'm saying in my edits-- so continue to object if you think I edited an untrue sentence.) --Alecmconroy 06:12, 27 June 2006 (UTC) --Alecmconroy 06:12, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- re the "Dellums won" dispute, until sometime in early july, the Oakland election results are not final. The Registrar of Voters has not yet certified the election, though will do so shortly. It's a minor point, but it exists. Until the election is certified, the statement should read something like "apparent mayor-elect". Argyriou 06:18, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- I've read your edits, and like them. They present Dellums' hypocrisy quite nicely without being POV.
- I moved the two paragraphs about the Oakland mayoral election to the "political career" section, and clarified when he takes office at the top of that section. The intro says he's mayor-elect, the details belong further down. Argyriou 06:31, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- From the RFC - Alecmconroy's version was excellent. Additions since then have been about things that are unrelated to the subject of the article. Hipocrite - «Talk» 15:23, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
Family
We already list the names of spouses and dates of weddings, and the names of the children, some of whom have articles of their own. I don't see any need to go into details about the children in this article. I don't recall any other politician's article that has such a long section on children. -Will Beback 04:30, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Wiki is not paper and the information about the children adds to the article. Simply listing their names diminishes their humanity. Justforasecond 16:17, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Guess what? You just broke 3RR. I'm sure someone who does not think you are a <personal attack removed> will do the honors. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 16:21, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- I just checked, I did not "break 3RR", but you have been uncivil and made personal attacks. With voluminous information about Dellums Congressional tribute, I happen to think a little bit about the man's family is reasonable and brings this article closer to perfection. I don't see why mentioning that the man's son is an actor is worthy of instareverts. And, please, jpgordon, remember to remain civil. Thanks! Justforasecond 18:34, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Please don't be disingenuous. You keep adding derogatory information about one son and yet you're claiming that this about another son. -Will Beback 18:41, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Are you suggesting we cover one son and leave out the other? Justforasecond 18:46, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- No, I'm suggesting that details about the subject's childrens' careers are not needed in this article. -Will Beback 20:09, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Well I don't see what the big deal about saying Dellums son is an actor is. You've removed this info repeatedly. Justforasecond 00:12, 2 July 2006 (UTC)
- Because if we say that one son is an actor someone will demand that we say another son is a criminal, which gets into a conflict that doesn't help the article. If the son is notable enough for career details, then feel free to write an article about him. -Will Beback 02:19, 2 July 2006 (UTC)
- The man's family is as important as anything about him. In fact, he dedicated his memoirs to his children (all except Michael). He has a son who is an actor -- he's actually pretty good at what he does (you can see him on "the wire" I believe) though his roles are currently somewhat minor. It seems you don't object to this being in the article, but you revert it nontheless. Justforasecond 03:32, 2 July 2006 (UTC)
- Because if we say that one son is an actor someone will demand that we say another son is a criminal, which gets into a conflict that doesn't help the article. If the son is notable enough for career details, then feel free to write an article about him. -Will Beback 02:19, 2 July 2006 (UTC)
- Well I don't see what the big deal about saying Dellums son is an actor is. You've removed this info repeatedly. Justforasecond 00:12, 2 July 2006 (UTC)
- No, I'm suggesting that details about the subject's childrens' careers are not needed in this article. -Will Beback 20:09, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Are you suggesting we cover one son and leave out the other? Justforasecond 18:46, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Please don't be disingenuous. You keep adding derogatory information about one son and yet you're claiming that this about another son. -Will Beback 18:41, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- I just checked, I did not "break 3RR", but you have been uncivil and made personal attacks. With voluminous information about Dellums Congressional tribute, I happen to think a little bit about the man's family is reasonable and brings this article closer to perfection. I don't see why mentioning that the man's son is an actor is worthy of instareverts. And, please, jpgordon, remember to remain civil. Thanks! Justforasecond 18:34, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Guess what? You just broke 3RR. I'm sure someone who does not think you are a <personal attack removed> will do the honors. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 16:21, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
I see a couple editors have continued diminishing the importance of this man's family. How can a "congressional tribute" that lasted less than one day be so much more important than his children? Justforasecond 16:50, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
- I'm curious; are you unaware of what either of the words "consensus" or "disingenuous" mean? --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 16:57, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please remember to remain civil, jpgordon, and please, stick to the issue -- why do you continue to diminish the miniscule amount of information this article has about Dellums family while leaving irrelevant passages about Angola? Justforasecond 18:21, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
- If you can gain a consensus for your desired version, please do so here rather than by simply edit warring. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 05:13, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- In the interest of good faith, could the editors (such as jpgordon) who continue to diminish the absolutely tiny amount of information we have about Dellums' family, while leaving long passages about fairly minor events and tangents such as "liberation struggles in Angola" that Dellums had absolutely nothing to do with explain why? Justforasecond 05:35, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please be civil. ;) -Will Beback 05:48, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- In the interest of good faith, could the editors (such as jpgordon) who continue to diminish the absolutely tiny amount of information we have about Dellums' family, while leaving long passages about fairly minor events and tangents such as "liberation struggles in Angola" that Dellums had absolutely nothing to do with explain why? Justforasecond 05:35, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- If you can gain a consensus for your desired version, please do so here rather than by simply edit warring. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 05:13, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please remember to remain civil, jpgordon, and please, stick to the issue -- why do you continue to diminish the miniscule amount of information this article has about Dellums family while leaving irrelevant passages about Angola? Justforasecond 18:21, 4 July 2006 (UTC)
I will address the liberation struggles issue. It is important to put the situation in the broader historical context of the Wold War. It explains how the U.S. and South Africa's apartheid regime could support one faction, while Dellums and others supported another. It also explains the "Castroite congressman" comment -- which was made in the context of that situation in the cited article (read it, JFAS) and not in the context of Grenada. You can't pick and choose quotes and stick them anywhere simply in an effort to smear the man. It just won't fly. There's simply no comparison to the nature of this information and the wholly ancillary, unimportant, even trivial details about the lives of Dellums' children. deeceevoice 11:21, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
- The cited article mentions neither Dellums nor the phrase "Castroite congressman".
- It's fine with me if the Michael article is deleted -- but without an article of his own we'd have to put the info here.
- So I'm still trying to find out why we need to minimize Dellums family? I think Deeceevoice actually contributed the information about Erik Dellums. Justforasecond 14:32, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
I've said before I have no problem mentioning that Michael is currently serving a prison term. I think it lends a bit of pathos to the piece: it could happen to anyone. In fact, I wrote the abbreviated language -- that you keep altering to a veiled attack, and which keeps getting deleted. If you didn't persist in edit warring on this point, the language I wrote likely would still be there. And, no. I don't believe I wrote the Erik stuff, but if I did, it was in reaction to the ridiculous crap tacked on to the info about Michael. IMO, neither belongs. If people want to read more about Erik, they can consult the article on him. He's an actor and in the public eye. Michael is neither; he's simply behind bars -- like millions of other fairly anonymous criminals. He certainly doesn't merit an article of his own. It could never be an article, anyway. Sadly, there's absolutely nothing notable or noteworthy about his life. deeceevoice 17:31, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
And, yes, the article does mention "Castroite congressman." I introduced the information to the article, and it's where you got the phrase. You borrowed it from my inclusion -- and then separated it from its original context, again, as part of your incessant edit warring/attempts to smear the man. deeceevoice 17:33, 5 July 2006 (UTC)
Actually, Michael is is not an "anonymous criminal" like millions of others, he is the son of the winner in the Oakland mayoral race and his case was obviously important and notable enough for several newspapers to write about him. The information about Micheal fulfills all criteria for inclusion: Notability, verifiability and the information has already been published by reliable sources. To blanch over facts simply because you don't like them is a violation of the NPOV rule. CoYep 07:55, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
- Indeed. And when the article said Michael, Dellums's son from his first marriage, was born when the couple was undergoing a divorce and was raised by his mother. Michael is currently serving a prison term for a drug-related murder, it was the right amount of information. JFAS's idea of adding "balance" was to change this to Michael, Dellums's son from his first marriage, was born when the couple was undergoing a divorce. Dellums claims he did not help raise Michael. Michael is currently serving a prison term for murdering a man over a $20 bag of marijuana. In his memoirs, Dellums acknowledges all his and his wives' children except Michael. It was after going back and forth over this that another editor decided "well, screw that, let's not put in any detail at all about his offspring so we don't have to deal with JFAS's usual smear tactics. I'd be perfectly content to keep it as it was before JFAS's changes; it's the right amount of information about a basically useless human, who happens to be Dellum's offspring but was not raised by him. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 20:50, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
I don't agree that Michael is a "useless human." That's a judgment I'm neither qualified nor inclined to make. But are we moving toward an agreement to reinstate the abbreviated language I wrote? If so, fine. And let's leave it at that. deeceevoice 01:42, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
- jpgordon, please remember to remain civil. It is not OK to call encyclopedic edits "smear tactics" nor to decide "screw that" and delete notable information like the fact that Erik Dellums is actor (he's not half bad either). It's also not civil to call Dellums' son "basically useless". Michael is a person too and he and his family may be following this very discussion. He is already serving life in prison for a crime he committed while quite young, no need to rub it in. Justforasecond 04:03, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
- I'll concede "useless human" was unjustified. "Smear tactics" is an accurate description of your approach here and elsewhere. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 04:10, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
- You would have a point if JFS would make things up to "smear" Dellums or if he would reword the facts in a judgmental way. But that's not the case. He included well sourced informations (including the fact that Dellums himself claimed that "he did not help raise Michael") in a neutral way . You can only accuse him of inserting too many detailed informations, but that's what an encyclopedia is about - to give detailed informations, not only nice looking POV informations. Accusing him of "Smear tactics" is a personal attack. CoYep 15:39, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
JFAS, you're hardly one to preach. You've been "rub it in" for the last several weeks. It is your constant edit warring around Michael's circumstances (and other matters) that has made this an issue at all. deeceevoice 05:42, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
- There's a difference between reporting the truth in an unbiased, encyclopedic manner, and calling someone "basically useless". Justforasecond 05:48, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
Agreed. There is also a difference between impartiality and mounting an exceedingly thinly veiled smear campaign (which is evident to all involved here) and then lecturing someone else regarding consideration for the family involved. deeceevoice 06:20, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
- Geez, ever consider who wrote nearly this entire article? Justforasecond 06:30, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
Yes, and thanks for your positive contributions. But we've also considered the pervasive, clearly antagonistic, critical POV tone of much of what you've written -- and, happily, other editors have intervened. deeceevoice 09:22, 8 July 2006 (UTC)
Angola connection, revisited
So I finally found what deeceevoice was talking about with regards to Angola. Deep in the article she cites, Dellums is mentioned breifly, with no Angola context whatsoever. It is just the same stuff about Grenada rehashed. Here's a link to an easier to the article that isn't broken into umpteen sections
The prototype of the Castroite congressman was, of course, Ron Dellums, of Oakland, California. His seat is now held by Barbara Lee, who for many years served the old lion as his top aide. She gained a bit of notoriety in 1983, when the U.S. invaded Grenada. Shortly before, Dellums had taken a "fact-finding" trip to the island, whose purpose was to persuade Congress that the air base there was meant for entirely benign uses. The invading Americans seized many official documents, among them the minutes of a highly unusual meeting of the Grenadian Politburo. They read: "Barbara Lee is here presently and has brought with her a report on the international airport done by Ron Dellums. They have requested that we look at the document and suggest any changes we deem necessary. They will be willing to make changes." Unfortunately for Lee, Dellums, and the fiction they perpetrated, the invaders also uncovered the diary of the former Grenadian defense minister. An entry in it reads: "The Revo has been able to crush counter-revolution internationally. Airport will be used for Cuban and Soviet military."
A second Dellums aide, Carlottia Scott, had written several notorious notes to the Grenadian strongman, Maurice Bishop, the most infamous of them being the most telling: "Ron , as a political thinker, is the best around, and Fidel will verify that in no uncertain terms.... Ron had a long talk with Barb and me when we got to Havana and cried when he realized that we had been shouldering Grenada alone all this time. Like I said, he's really hooked on you and Grenada and doesn't want anything to happen to building the Revo and making it strong. He really admires you as a person, and even more so as a leader with courage and foresight, principle and integrity. Believe me, he doesn't make that kind of statement often about anyone. The only other person that I know of that he expresses such admiration for is Fidel."
Can we please remove this Angola information? Believe it or not, Dellums is a socialist who supports Fidel. There is no evidence that this is because of "liberation struggles" in Angola. I really can't see the motivation for editors inserting this information again and again. Being a socialist was pretty typical for the Dellums era in the East Bay so there's no use trying to cover it up, if that's what this is about.
Justforasecond 22:21, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
- After 3+ weeks, there seem to be no comments on this angola connection, so I'm removing it. Justforasecond 19:59, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- Considering the lack of discussion after over 3 weeks, the reversion of my edit, labeling it "vandalism" is not reasonable. If there's a reason this info is relevant please describe here. Justforasecond 23:30, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
socialist party?
Dellums calls himself a "socialist", but does he have any affiliations with a socialist political party? I just put the infobox up and it has a slot for party (I put Democrat)
Justforasecond 20:01, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- I took the 'socialist' reference out of the infobox. Dellums is a socialist but isn't a member of the DSOC, especially because a) it's not a political party and b) it doesn't exist anymore. drseudo (t) 22:31, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- Well I'm not sure the DSOC wasn't a "party" (a group of politically like-minded individuals?) but he was the vice-chair of the "democratic socialists of america", which I've put into the infobox. Justforasecond 22:51, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- 'Was' is the operative word here. The infobox is for what party Dellums is currently a member of and caucuses with, which is undisputably the Democratic Party. The fact that he is philosophically a socialist, and was once the vice-chair of a socialist organization, doesn't change this. By all means mention the socialist stuff in the main article, but the answer to your original question 'does he have any affiliations with a socialist "politcal party" ' is no. drseudo (t) 23:17, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- Well I'm not sure the DSOC wasn't a "party" (a group of politically like-minded individuals?) but he was the vice-chair of the "democratic socialists of america", which I've put into the infobox. Justforasecond 22:51, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- I don't see any mention of him quitting the party anywhere. It's not impossible to be a member of two parties. If you can dig up a mention of him disavowing his former party we can add a tag on "socialist" saying "former" but for now what we have are 1) many sites saying dellums is a socialist 2) a socialist party website saying dellums is a member 3) an article as recent as march of this year says dellums is still "affiliated" with the socialist party. dellums did caucus with the democrats -- there were no other socialists to caucus with, and the dems are a lot closer than the repubs to socialist goals. you might notice the infobox says "party", which doesn't say anything about caucusing. deeceevoice, please discuss here. Justforasecond 23:27, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- The DSA's web site says that Dellums is no longer a vice-chair or any other thing. Dellums ran for Congress as a Democrat and for mayor as a Democrat. This is straightforward. And your 'article' is an op-ed; the difference is nontrivial. drseudo (t) 23:39, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- The page you cite does not mention Dellums. There is nothing saying Dellums is not a member of the party and there are pages saying he is. If you can find something to the contrary I'd be fine with a "former" label attached to the socialist link, but if not, it should stay. Justforasecond 23:46, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- DSA isn't a political party per se. Some of its members are Democrats, some Greens, and some are in other parties. To some extent, it functions as a caucus group within a party. Dellums has long been a member of DSA, and has been a registered Democrat his entire electoral career. Argyriou 05:36, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
districts
down at the bottom of the dellums article is a box saying he was congressman from the 7th, 8th, and 9th districts. do we have any citations for this?
Justforasecond 04:23, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
- You could look it up at the clerk of the house website. The numbering of districts in California starts at the north and works south; as the number of districts increased, the district Dellums represented changed number. I know I've voted against him in the 8th, then the 9th district. Argyriou 05:29, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
- Ahh, thanks a lot, and thanks for making sure that no one removes citations. Justforasecond 06:24, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
talks the talk
If the Ireland quote is to be included, it really needs more context. Thing is, the cite is to someone citing it; can it be made more clear that Ireland was referring to the topic of the paragraph (lobbying activities)? Otherwise, it seems we'd need something like "Will Harper says Doug Ireland says...". --jpgordon 15:49, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, Ireland is referring to the lobbying. Most long-time supporters I know were shocked by his lobbying for a military contractor, but I'll add a counter view to make the paragraph "neutral". Justforasecond 16:00, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
Which is why some of his old fans are so disappointed in Dellums now. James Love, director of Ralph Nader's Consumer Project on Technology, a group that advocates drug-pricing reforms, is among those who have soured on Dellums in recent years. Love said Dellums was "a big hero of mine" until he became a consultant for Bristol-Myers. "He was a real problem for a while, zipping around, pushing the drug company line. Some of us were disappointed. We were not happy with what he was up to. We didn't trust him."
Likewise, Doug Ireland, the progressive journalist who wrote "Dellums for Dollars" in POZ, said, "Ron has gone bad, I'm afraid. He talks the talk, but he doesn't walk the walk anymore."
...(then some info to make it "neutral")...
Still, some defenders say his current consulting work is consistent with his approach in Congress. "I think if you were to talk to him, he would say just because of the fact that I'm advocating for a company that may be paying me consulting fees, I'm not selling out my beliefs,"
- Oh, I don't care about that particularly -- I hate this "balancing quotes" stuff -- it just makes our articles seem like Fox News. My concern was with the quote itself, since there's no evidence in the reference provided that Ireland was talking about lobbying, only that Will Harper liked Ireland's rhetoric. A direct pointer to the source would be a lot better; why not just use that? --jpgordon 01:03, 17 August 2006 (UTC)
path to FA
To get this article to "featured article" status, we need to expand on Dellums life *outside* politics. I'm going to begin restoring the "family life" section, which is now miniscule compared to the political section. Dellums upbringing, education, time in the Marines, career as a social worker, and Berkeley City Council activities could also do with more facts.
Justforasecond 19:20, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
- Do we really? Other than his politics, Dellums is unimportant. There should be more on his time on the Berkeley City Council, though. Argyriou 19:25, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, we do. It's not a good biography if you don't cover a person's family (and it is suspect when the family information is actively removed). If the article were shorter it might be OK to skimp over it, but the article is quite detailed. Dellums family is also fairly interesting.
- We also need a little more detail on his Congressional activities, Ron was involved, though I'm not sure how deeply, with reparations to Japanese-Americans and the Americans with Disabilities Act, neither of which are mentioned.
- More to add: Dellums "assured funding for area projects such as the economically vital deep dredging of the Port of Oakland, and locating a new federal building and the nationally known Chabot Science Center in the city."
- We may also want to organize the references into a section at the bottom. Weblinks are great and simple to add, but when a website goes down or changing its url scheme we still want to have the title of the page, etc. (already happening!) Justforasecond 19:35, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
Good article nomination failed
I regret to inform the editors that I did not find the article met all the criteria for good article status. While this is an admirable start, there are several issues that must be addressed before this article may be passed. To begin, the article is difficult to read and overly segmented; too many subheading makes it look much longer than it actually is, and needs to be condensed. The appearance of subheaders in the article with one sentence beneath them suggests that these are stubs, just as do the headers that have only one sentence. The article expands on the section of Dellum's career, which raises questions about consistency and emphasis, given that none of the other sections has any subheadings. While this article employs links to citations, there is no list of references readily available, making this article not readily verifiable. Because references are not listed, it also raises reliability questions as far as source materials. Also, though continued editing is encouraged, this article has been subject to some extremely heated debate on the talk page and still retains the tag describing it as a "testy" page. Large-scale edits continue, with many only today, and due to the amount of controversy that has surrounded this page and the number of edits continuing, I am not comfortable that these will necessarily be well received, and I cannot see that this article can be called "stable", according to the good article criteria. Finally, I feel as though some of the image choices are awkward and should be reconsidered. For example, using the cover of a book for the main photograph seems inappropriate when there is a portrait of him farther down the page. The picture of Oakland seems to be taking up space and not really enhancing the text of the article. Something like a picture from the campaign would be appropriate. Basically, the point is that Ron Dellums is an extremely public figure of whom there should be some public domain or licensed images available that would better the article. I do think this article has great potential, and I admire the work of those editors who are intent on making this a featured article. I hope that you take these comments in good faith as they were intended. I encourage you to address these issues and renominate this article. Cheers! Chuchunezumi 22:16, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, now we know what to do. I've changed the portrait and removed some of the subheadings. Sounds like the family stuff and other short sections needs to be expanded on. We also need to ad a referenced sections. I removed the "calm talk" section as it seems to be a factor in failing good article and it doesn't seem to have any beneficial effects. Justforasecond 23:01, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
Great work on references
Plange, Agriyou, great work putting the references section together! I've found a couple of them are broken and have to be regenerated (probably from web searches I did which expired). Justforasecond 05:28, 17 August 2006 (UTC)
War crimes hearings
Why are we attempting to whitewash war crimes? The Dellums committee wasn't investigating alleged war crimes; it was investigating war crimes. (By the way, is a reliable source?) --jpgordon 16:23, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
- The Dellums committee was a propaganda exercise which tried to paint normal and legal occurrences during wartime as war crimes, providing that the acts were performed by the U.S. The actual war crimes which occurred were tried by the Army. Argyriou (talk) 05:25, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
- That's a POV characterization, of course -- regardless of whether it is correct or incorrect. As is adding sneer quotes to what was then called a War Crimes Investigation; "alleged" in this case is the equivalent (it serves the same function as "so-called"). --jpgordon 05:50, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
Bishop correspondence
The Bishop corresponence has been reported widely. We should replace the FrontPage reference with a more neutral source, though. I removed Horowitz's opinion as unimportant. ·:· Will Beback ·:· 21:21, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
Additions by Justforasecond/Alexfusco5
Among your edits to the page
- The Dellums mayoral campaign was criticized for holding expensive fundraising dinners and because Dellums would not disclose his plans for the city, or his positions on issues. - please provide a reference for this; surely, per WP:BLP, you would never insert something like this without a source?
- Elise Ackerman, an Oakland resident who bought the domain recallmayordellums.com sent an open letter to Dellums that was covered in the local press, saying to Dellums, "African Americans and Latinos live in fear in Oakland because of your lies. Middle-class residents working two jobs live in fear because of your lies. Nurses, teachers and social workers live in fear because of your lies." Near the end of the message, she continues "You are not effective, you are not honest, you have no integrity and you should step aside." - what is your source for this?
- In 1972 John Lennon wrote the song Woman is the Nigger of the World. Asked for his reaction to the use of the word "nigger" by a white singer in a pop song Dellums wrote "If you define nigger as someone whose lifestyle is defined by others, whose opportunities are defined by others, whose role in society is defined by others, then good news - you don't have to be black to be a nigger in this society, most of the people in America are niggers!" Lennon was delighted with his reaction and proudly read the quote on the Dick Cavett Show prior to performing the controversial song with his wife at the time, Yoko Ono. - can you explain the removal of this material?
- Grenada and Cuba controversies, treason allegation - why did you add the bolded text to the header?
- Conservative journalist David Horowitz suggested Dellums' actions were treasonous. - source?
- Why did you change Dellums worked as a lobbyist for the government of Haiti in 2001–2002 to Dellums accepted $500,000 in payment for lobbying work for the government of the impoverished nation of Haiti in 2001–2002? How is it acceptable, per NPOV to add the impoverished nation of?
How is the addition of unsourced attacking material acceptable? How is this "not attacking"? This is forbidden under Misplaced Pages policy. If you repeatedly violate the policy on articles about living people in this manner you can be blocked. 35.9.6.175 (talk) 17:02, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
- 35..... this is all easily verifiable. Type it into google if you've got pressing doubts. Haiti is indeed impoverished, many sources online will attest to it. I have been meaning to put in references but its a holiday and the article uses the "ref" syntax rather than simple urls, so it takes quite a while to do this. I removed the John Lennon quote because it is not notable and is inflammatory, among other problems. Justforasecond (talk) 20:28, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
WP:BLP requires that negative claims about living people must be sourced. Apart from that, all this negative material seriously unbalances the article. In addition, as you well remember, there was an agreement here that all the stuff you wanted to add about Michael being a murder wasn't appropriate for this article. Guettarda (talk) 20:33, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
Don't ask, don't tell
I don't want to be partisan here or anything, but Dellums was the original sponsor of the bill that came to be known as the "don't ask, don't tell" policy. Seeing as it's such a big issue, shouldn't that make it into the article somewhere? Here's my source: http://assembler.law.cornell.edu/usc-cgi/get_external.cgi?type=pubL&target=103-160. Undomiel (talk) 23:55, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
- Go on and put it in there. Another interesting chapter in Dellums live is his support of Your Black Muslim Bakery. The leadership of this organization was allegedly involved in child abuse, rape, large-scale welfare fraud, and murder, but Dellums thought they were such pillars of the community that he wrote a nice letter praising them to the bankruptcy judge. Dellums lackey Barbara Lee also supported these thugs, but she withdrew her support once bakery members allegedly took a shotgun to a local journalist who was writing an unflattering piece about them. Justforasecond 18:49, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
"Mayor of Oakland" section
This edit seems questionable to me. IMO, it should probably reverted, as most of the changes by the anon were unsourced and biased towards one point of view. Or is it just me? Bash Kash (talk) 08:05, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
Yes, it bears the hallmarks of a Dellums crony, I agree it should be stricken. Justforasecond (talk) 06:14, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
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