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Featured article

Has anyone considered nominating this article for featured article status? Looking it over, I think it would almost definitely pass inspection. Deyyaz 19:41, 12 June 2006 (UTC)

And so it is! Congrats to the editors involved.--Mantanmoreland 17:14, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

Oh, thank you! I only noticed when I saw this post, so you were the one to pass on the good news, Mantan. ;-D SlimVirgin 21:44, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

Vandalism of this page - should we do something about it?

I recently noticed that someone with IP 137.158.128.105 modified Vrba's page, inserting the following:

"Vrba escaped by flying away in the time machine that he made from the human soap and ashes that he found in the gas chambers, which explains the remains of any human remains actually being found atAuschwitz after the war. He also wrote "Sergeant Pepper" in 1943 whilst at Auschwitz, which was later passed on to John Lennon, who basically copied it note-for-note in the 1960s. He never received due credit for having basically invented the psychedelic music genre, and his heirs should be backpaid for "Pepper"'s royalties from the 60's! Accusations that Vrba was schizophrenic and suffered from hallucinations and delusions are just anti-semitic lies made by Neo-Nazis and terrorists."

Thankfully, Kingboyk noticed this vandalism and reverted to the previous version within less than 2 hours (thanks Kingboyk!). I looked at the list of edits that came from IP 137.158.128.105 and it seems that this guy has edited several Holocaust related entries and inserted this sort of vandalism in those entries as well. I'm new to Misplaced Pages but since we're fortunate here to have some very experienced users editing this page, allow me to ask: should we report this? to whom? how? Guidance from experienced Misplaced Pages users would be appreciated.

Escamoso 11:01, 17 June 2006 (UTC)

All you can do is grit your teeth and revert. I'm surprised there isn't more vandalism, given the nature of the subject matter.--Mantanmoreland 17:35, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

What's going on with the first sentence of this article? I am very new to editing Misplaced Pages, but I can't seen to remove it when I go to edit. Help!--Teamla 22:56, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Nevermind, someone got it. Thanks!--Teamla 22:58, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Book title

I just stumbled upon this excellent article, and I had a question. Vrba's memoir, which I read years ago and still have somewhere, was entitled "I Cannot Forgive" when it was published years ago and still has that title in US editions. It stuck out in my mind not just because the book was so memorable but because it was not a very good title. I see here that it is listed in the footnotes with a different title, "I escaped from Auschwitz." Shouldn't it be referred to by its original title? Note the listing on Amazon.. Someone points out in a "product Wiki" at the bottom of the Amazon page, correctly, that the book was originally entitled "I cannot forgive." I think use of the newer title is a bit confusing.--Mantanmoreland 16:09, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

It has been republished, along with some very useful appendices (e.g. the full Vrba-Wetzler report), so the new edition is the one we're using as a reference. However, we should make a note in the References section that it was originally called I cannot forgive. SlimVirgin 16:20, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

I just checked, and we do. SlimVirgin 16:21, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

OK, thanks for clarifying. I think the "I cannot forgive" part may have come first in the original title, but I'd have to haul out the book and it is buried somewhere.--Mantanmoreland 16:37, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

Good article

It is really a good article. But should not we restrict size to the recommended level! FAs going well beyond the size recommended does not look nice, though I am not sure of the same. --Bhadani 16:50, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Thank you, Bhadani. I don't think there is a recommended level. I saw a discussion about length recently on the FA page, and people were saying articles should be as long as they need to be (with the stress on need, of course). SlimVirgin 17:02, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Thanks SV. Now, a doubt has been cleared. The page is really nice and I learnt a lot - though I had heard the name before. --Bhadani 17:31, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Oh, I am growing older. I forgotr to congratulate your and Jayjg, and all others on the nice work. Congrats. --Bhadani 17:32, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

We the bankers say this as Need based contents. --Bhadani 17:36, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Thank you for the congrats, which are much appreciated. :-) SlimVirgin 17:38, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Only five escaped?

I think something needs to be reworded, because I don't fully understand.

The article states he was one of 5 who escaped Auschwitz concentration camp but the article states that nearly 300 escaped.

I don't think I understand, maybe someone could word the article more accurately.

But otherwise, it is a very good job. Congrats. The0208 00:22, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Similarly I was confused by this. I think the opening para is unclear in that either they were the 1st two of 5 who escaped and gave credible reports or simply 2 of 5 who escaped and that they also gave credible reports. And, experimenting, does the tag work? Paul Beardsell 07:42, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

The second footnote explains it. Overall, 667 prisoners are known to have tried to escape, 270 of whom were caught and killed; the fate of the others is unknown. Of the 667, 76 Jews succeeded, five of whom managed to pass information about the camp to the Allies. Vrba and Wetzler were the second and third of those five. SlimVirgin 10:08, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Yes, I know. But the point is simply this: The sentence is ambiguous. It is always better that this is not the case. And if there isn't an tag there could usefully be one. Paul Beardsell 11:23, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

It's best not to put tags on featured articles. I don't find the sentence ambiguous myself, but perhaps you could suggest a way to make it less so, but retain its accuracy. Here it is:

"In April 1944, Vrba and Alfréd Wetzler became the second and third of only five Jews to escape successfully from the German death camp at Auschwitz and pass information to the Allies about the mass murder that was taking place there."

I read it to mean that they were the second and third Jews to escape and pass details to the Allies i.e. there was one Jew before them who managed to escape and pass details, and two after them. (The reason Vrba's information is regarded as important is that it was the first to be taken seriously, not the first overall, as the article and footnotes say.) SlimVirgin 11:37, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

When the Nazis abandoned Auschiwitz I thought that several/many thousands of prisoners voluntarily retreated westward with the SS troops. The numbers mentioned above included only those who stayed behind waiting for the Russian troops - those too sick, etc to travel. I am sure the SS didn't just take 5 or 6 or 300 prisoners with them.

Only 5 of 76 gave daming info to the Allies - how about after the war? This seems strange. Any info on the names of the other 71+, not counting the voluntary evacuees. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.105.80.219 (talk • contribs)

Most of the 76 were recaptured (so "escaped" includes "escaped temporarily" - this could be clarified in the article). The following from Erich Kulka, "Attempts by Jewish Escapees to Stop Mass Extermination", Jewish Social Studies 47:3/4 (1985:Summer/Fall) 295-306 may help:

"A total of seventy-six Jewish prisoners fled from Auschwitz-Birkenau, but for lack of assistance from the Polish resistance movement and lack of connections in the world outside the barbed wire, most were recaptured. Barely a dozen successful Jewish escapees were traced after the war."

Kulka cites Tadeusz Iwaszko, "Haftlingsfluchten aus dem Konzentrationslager Auschwitz," Hefte von Auschwitz, 7 (1964), 49ff. --Zero 13:46, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

Another source of confusion here is that some of the figures are for escapes from the main camp, and others are for the Auschwitz complex (main camp and many sub-camps). Kulka is clear that the 667 figure was for the whole complex and includes those recaptured. --Zero 13:58, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

A milstone

A milestone! Really a great job. --Bhadani 02:24, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Redundant article The Vrba-Wetzler report

The article The Vrba-Wetzler report appears to be redundant. Can certain portions be merged?

"Redundant" in what sense of the word? Paul Beardsell 07:45, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

It voluminously repeates the exact same thing.

First two sentences

Should the second sentence be the first? Per inverted pyramid, its more important that he escaped from Auschwitz and passed info to the allies than that he was a professor of pharmacology. Marskell 08:26, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Hi Marskell, my reasoning was to first of all say who he was i.e. when he died, what his position in life was. And then to say what he was known for. SlimVirgin 09:36, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Perhaps: "Walter Rosenberg (September 11, 1924 – March 27, 2006), was an escapee of the German death camp at Auschwitz, Holocaust documentarian, and later Professor Emeritus in the Department of Pharmacology and Therapeutics at the University of British Columbia in Canada." Nothing else would need to change, except there'd be no need to repeat "German death camp" in the next sentence.

done.Sfahey 14:11, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Great article BTW. Marskell 13:10, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Thanks. :-) SlimVirgin 18:53, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Marskell, I'm really not keen on the first sentence saying he was an escapee, and particularly not a "Holocaust documentarian." He was a professor of pharmacology. Escaping Auschwitz was something he did, not something he was. And others documented it; he just told them what had happened. SlimVirgin 20:17, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

I don't understand at all. He is notable because of his escape. The article details his documentarian work. He was an important Auschwitz escapee. That's broadly why this article exists. Per any existing stylistic standard you want, the lead sentence should note this. I have absolutely no desire to revert something you've worked on so greatly (and particularly with Jayjg editing) but...I don't understand at all. Marskell 20:30, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Marskell, I'm not sure I can explain it clearly. It's that escaping from Auschwitz isn't something he was, but something he did. He became known because he did X, not because he was an X-er. So you're right: that has to be very near the top. But first you want to answer the question: Who is this person? The answer is: Name, a professor of pharmacology. And the reason we're telling you his story is? He escaped from Auschwitz.

That intuitively feels like the best flow to me. SlimVirgin 20:43, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

On a kind of ontological level, I do understand your second sentence...but then I'd quibble (of course I would :). That profession is "is-ness" is debatable, personally and in terms of writing a Wiki page. He was man. He was a husband. He was a Jew. He was (maybe) an optimist or a pessimist, a Cancer or a Virgo. If you could ask him, I'm sure some of those would occur before "Holocaust escapee". But the primary question here is: why are you reading this? Answer: because he escaped Auschwitz and passed info to the allies. This shouldn't be near the top, it should be at the top. And, presentation-wise, order of primacy in the lead should reflect order of primacy in the body. We have "50 papers" in the first sentence now, but this doesn't occur in the body until after half the article is done. One or the other should be changed.

Now then! I've had one article on the main page and it's a very stressful day. I don't want to be too pedantic, picking apart 0.25k when you've done up the other 84.75 so well. The first sentence does matter, and I don't agree with it as it stands, but perhaps tomorrow will provide a compromise. Cheers, Marskell 21:04, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Thank you for understanding about today! Tomorrow would be great. ;-D SlimVirgin 21:48, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Circumstances of death

Usually in a biographical article where the subject is deceased, the circumstances of the death are given. Icemuon 13:38, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing that out. It was in an earlier version then was moved during a series of edits, and not put back. It's there now. SlimVirgin 13:54, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Can someone fix ... =

... the tortuous second paragraph of "Vrba's accusations". There's a long, meaningless sentence in there that smacks of "too many cooks". I don't know the story well enough to do it. Sfahey 14:09, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Which is the sentence you don't like? SlimVirgin 18:07, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Possible vandal?

The mention of sexual orientation in this sentence doesn't look quite kosher, but I don't know enough about the subject to rip it out myself: "He decided to return to Slovakia, but was caught by homosexual Hungarian border guards while crossing back over the Hungary-Slovakia border." --Robertb-dc 17:18, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Thanks, Robert. Not quite kosher is right. :-D SlimVirgin 18:52, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

At the bottom of the page, after Further Reading, this appears.

    [[he:רודולף ורבה nigger fuck shit
    ]]

I don't know what the Hebrew says, but I'm positive that the English is offensive. Bobbit bob 18:10, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Thanks Bob. The Hebrew is just his name; the other stuff has gone, I think — at least for now. SlimVirgin 18:52, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

Improved source needed for sentence

Hi, This note is regarding the sentence that reads: "It is regarded as one of the most important documents of the 20th century because it was the first detailed information about the camp to reach the Allies that they accepted as credible."

The sentence uses a "weasel word" formulation "it is regarded" ("Here are some weasel words that are often found in Misplaced Pages articles:"...is widely regarded as..."...From Weasel words wiki-page). The wiki-page on "weasel words" goes on to say "It is better to put a name and a face on an opinion than to assign an opinion to an anonymous source." An editor has pointed out that this sentence is footnoted. However, the footnoted sources (BC bookworld author bank, from abcbookword.com, and Jewish News Weekly of Northern California) are not sources that would normally be used in an academic context. Misplaced Pages's verifiability policy states that Information on Misplaced Pages must be reliable and verifiable. Facts, viewpoints, theories, and arguments may only be included in articles if they have already been published by reliable and reputable sources. As such, it would help if we could find a more scholarly source (e.g., a journal article, encyclopedia article, etc).Nazamo 02:18, 8 October 2006 (UTC)

Pressac was mentioned in the lead article - is there any truth to the story that he concealed a memo that implies that the gas chambers were actually gas shelters? He supposedly had the memo in his possession for a few years before his death and it remained hidden until recently. Link to this info? The existence of this memo would tend to further ruin his story - I notice in the article that several of the good guys "historians" already question Vbra's testimony, at least partially. The internet has almost nothing on Vbra - not even Zundel who he gave evidence against. Is this story a hoax? He seems to be little regarded as a reliable source of info even by his "own side".

In 1942 Karski reported to the Polish, British and U.S. governments on the situation in Poland

In 1942 Karski reported to the Polish, British and U.S. governments on the situation in Poland, especially the destruction of the Warsaw Ghetto and the Holocaust of the Jews. He met with Polish politicians in exile including the prime minister, as well as members of political parties such as the PPS, SN, SP, SL, Jewish Bund and Poalej-Syjon. He also spoke to Anthony Eden, the British foreign secretary, and included a detailed statement on what he had seen in Warsaw and Bełżec. He then traveled to the United States and reported to President Franklin D. Roosevelt. His report was a major factor in informing the West, but no action followed.

In July 1943, Karski again personally reported to Roosevelt about the situation in Poland. He also met with many other government and civic leaders in the United States, including Felix Frankfurter, Cordell Hull, William Joseph Donovan, Samuel Cardinal Stritch, and Stephen Wise. Karski also presented his report to media, bishops of various denominations, members of the Hollywood film industry and artists, but without success. Many of those he spoke to did not believe him, or supposed that his testimony was much exaggerated or was propaganda from the Polish government in exile. It is possible, however, that Karski's descriptions influenced FDR to create a War Refugee Board several months later in January of 1944. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.156.86.41 (talk) 21:10, 8 April 2007 (UTC).

Witold Pilecki a member of the Armia Krajowa (Home Army)informed the Western Allies of Nazi Germany's camp atrocities

Witold Pilecki (May 13, 1901 – May 25, 1948; pronounced ; codenames Roman Jezierski, Tomasz Serafiński, Druh, Witold) was a soldier of the Second Polish Republic, the founder of the resistance movement, Secret Polish Army (Tajna Armia Polska), and a member of the Home Army (Armia Krajowa). During World War II, he became the only known person to volunteer to be imprisoned at Auschwitz Concentration Camp. While there, he organized inmate resistance, and as early as 1940, informed the Western Allies of Nazi Germany's camp atrocities. He escaped from Auschwitz in 1943 and took part in the Warsaw Uprising (August–October 1944). Pilecki was executed in 1948 by the communists. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 69.156.86.41 (talk) 21:19, 8 April 2007 (UTC).

Very odd article - Yehuda Bauer calls him a hero and a liar in one sentence. No mention is made of his testimony in the Zundel trial where Bauer turne out half right - he was a liar. Odd.159.105.80.141 15:54, 9 April 2007 (UTC)

Removal of sourced material

Editor Slimvirgin, please stop removing sourced material. --72.209.9.246 (talk) 01:14, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

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