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2009 swine flu outbreak

Lots of times appear in the main article the word "health", but 0 times the "flu". Could you tell me why? Just to remind you some facts, WHO raised the pandemic alert level to five, the second-highest level. More than half of the confirmed cases are currently in US (today 4714 from total=8310). Dinprog (talk) 22:09, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

The article 2009 swine flu outbreak is the most appropriate central place for the facts about the swine flu. This is neither very significant, nor relevant, to the life and times of Obama at this point as compared with the many other things in this article. The matter has been discussed on this page (available in the archives) and that is the consensus here. Wikidemon (talk) 22:16, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
What do you know about pandemic flu/5-th level? It doesn't starts with 10 millions of deaths. The increase is exponentional. And I wouldn't call this minor thing, currently it is proved that this is in 47 states in US (probably in all), and that nearly 5,000 isn't small, including deaths. Dinprog (talk) 22:41, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
It doesn't matter what I know. What matters is what's in the sources. If 10 million people die then of course sources will write about it, then we can cover it. We're not in charge of prognosticating future disease spread. BTW, I should have said "presidency of" instead of "life and times of" in my first response above. At this point I would say the weight of Obama's flue response vis-a-vis his presidency overall is worth somewhere between zero and 1/2 of one sentence. If there is, or comes to be, a section on his public health policy I would support a phrase like ", including the federal response to the 2009 swine flu outbreak" but any more detail than that belongs in a sub-article. Wikidemon (talk) 23:55, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Anger at Obama Guantanamo ruling

See: Anger at Obama Guantanamo ruling

It's quite interesting that this is not in the article: "Civil liberties groups have reacted angrily to US President Barack Obama's decision to revive military trials for some Guantanamo Bay detainees."

, only closing Guantanamo. Dinprog (talk) 22:55, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I agree, but this is relatively new information (at least to me). I heard about it on the news yesterday, so it probably hasn't had time to make it into the article just yet. Feel free to add the information. --Dudemanfellabra (talk) 22:59, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
I also agree that that info should be in the article. Grundle2600 (talk) 19:01, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Obama's proposed changes in CAFE standards

I'd like to add this info to the article, but I guess it's better to ask other people here what they think of it first.

CAFE Obama -- Proposed Mileage Standards Would Kill More Americans than Iraq War

Grundle2600 (talk) 21:25, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

discussion has degenerated. Please re-start if there is a viable proposal here
The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.


An opinion piece from a source on par with worldnetdaily, i.e. not a WP:RS? Pass, thanks. Tarc (talk) 21:42, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
(ec)Simply put: No. How many times do you have to be told that one source from one lunatic right-wing conspiracy artist is not notable enough to put in an article? Now if you could find several sources about criticisms of the gas mileage standards, this may (emphasis) slide into that section, but only at a passing glance. Something like "The standards have met criticism. ______ claims the standards will _________, ______ have suggested ________, and CNS News reported that the standards would result in the deaths of more Americans than the Iraq War." may be acceptable. --Dudemanfellabra (talk) 21:47, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
No. There is no way this piece of garbage could be acceptable in anything other than an article about the author's extreme fringe views, or an article about how totally wacky and "out there beyond Pluto" the people at Cybercast News Service are. -- Scjessey (talk) 22:22, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
Okay, let's take a step back folks. The proposed change to CAFE and emissions rules is a current news story, but likely to be seen as an important event in the Obama administration. The resistance on the part of the auto industry, and by people who like the speed, weight, etc., price of bigger power powerful cars, is relevant to the issue but in a general article like this one might be worth a part of a sentence if even that. Most of the detail would go into a sub-article about any legislation or rule change. Finally, there will of course be lots of editorials and pieces in all kinds of sources, reliable and otherwise - we should stick to the reliable mainstream sources. Wikidemon (talk) 22:55, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
If I could find better sources, would it be OK then? Grundle2600 (talk) 22:57, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
A series of non-neutral additions by Grundle have now been added to the article, employing a fine blend of synthesis and original research. This is yet another shocking example of Grundle's agenda-based editing that is completely inappropriate. I urge this individual to self-revert this poorly-conceived, one-sided nonsense immediately. -- Scjessey (talk) 02:06, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
I've warned Grundle2600 for a final time about these kind of edits, and the next time I see their like I will not hesitate to implement a lengthy topic ban for the editor in question on Barack Obama articles. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 04:29, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I added info from USA Today, citing several different, independent studies, each of which showed that CAFE laws killed thousands of people every year. Scjessey erased the info on the studies, and commented, "rewrite a horribly one-sided paragraph with more neutral language." He then added false info to the article by saying "Critics have pointed out that CAFE laws may have forced tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety." That info added by Scjessey is false, because the article does not say "may have." The article is very definite that these deaths did indeed happen. This is proof that Scjessey is biased. If you people don't criticize Scjessey for doing this, and defend me for citing those studies in the article, then that will be proof that you people are being biased too. And if you ban me for this, it will be especially strong proof that you are biased. Grundle2600 (talk) 14:53, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I responded to this nonsense on Grundle's talk page, but essentially I state that the article referenced does not indicate a direct relationship between fuel economy and auto safety, and use of "may have" reflects this. -- Scjessey (talk) 17:50, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Bigtimepeace You threatened to ban me for adding true, well sourced info about CAFE. But you didn't criticize Scjessey for removing my true, well sourced info, and replacing it with false, unsourced info. Bigtimepeace, this is proof that you are being biased and unfair. Grundle2600 (talk) 14:55, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I just went looking for info to debunk Grundle's ref. The first thing I found was this 2002 report from the National Research Council. It states, among other things, that lowering the average weight of both cars and light trucks by 100 pounds would result in approx 250 more deaths per year; raising each by 100 pounds would result in 250 _fewer_ per year. In 1999, there were about 37,000 motor vehicle fatalities, if I'm reading that report correctly. Grundle's statement isn't necessarily accurate, but neither is it completely off the wall. However, this report is quoting 10-year-old data: I'd much rather see current data involving current vehicle construction techniques before making blanket statements like he did. Besides, with fewer pollutants in the air, how many fewer people would die from respiratory issues? (Leaving global climate change completely out of the equation for now)--SarekOfVulcan (talk) 15:38, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
Just responding to Grundle above, your summary of the USA Today article was completely one sided. You cherry picked the negative aspects, giving a false impression of a USA Today article which also says things like "It has been heralded as a brilliant solution to the nettlesome mix of problems related to fuel consumption and greenhouse-gas emissions" and "Though it'll be expensive, Ford's Cischke says, a lighter car can be made as safe as a heavier car." The article is describing a debate, yet you only drew information from one side which is the problem since you are not presenting the issue of CAFE standards in an NPOV manner, and did not discuss your proposed change on talk (or at least receive consensus for it first). This is the problem. Plus two other edits I mentioned on your talk page ( ) are either original research (in the first case, since nothing is said of nationalization whatsover) or a combination of original research and non-NPOV as in the second (particularly blatant) case. I completely stand by my above warning (made more specific on Grundle's talk page), which is literally probably the fourth or fifth I have left for that editor. This is a longstanding pattern, it's disruptive and needs to stop now or you will be topic banned from these articles. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 17:28, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
And a further point. From what I've seen (and I'd welcome counter-examples from Grundle), basically every single contribution Grundle has made to Obama articles has been to add some directly negative (or information which would be construed as negative) information about Obama. Not adding NPOV material which includes criticism, but strictly adding criticism. This has been going on for months, and there's a point where it becomes nearly impossible to continue to assume good faith about an editor's intention in that context, i.e. there's a larger picture here. Note that I would have the exact same attitude about an editor that was constantly adding plaudits in a non-NPOV (often OR, often using poor sources, often using the sources incorrectly) manner. Quite frankly Grundle is lucky he has lasted this long here. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 17:43, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
The source that I cited says the deaths are definite - there is nothing in the source that says "may have." Misplaced Pages articles are supposed to reflect their sources. Grundle2600 (talk) 18:57, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
Why don't you find me an example where notable negative information has been added by any one of the pro-Obama POV pushing editors cited in the O-Arbcom? BTP you have a very bad record for imposing your personal viewpoint on these articles and pretending your version is NPOV and that anyone you disagree with is violating policy. You're not impartial and you've done a very poor job of mediating. Your advocacy for one side has hurt the integrity of Misplaced Pages and is actively harming our content. Stop making malicious and mean spirited accusations that violate AGF. This is especially inappropriate when you carry it out againt good faith editors with a long record of contructive edits. If there's something you disagree with use the talk page to discuss the content. You should be desysoped for focusing on editors rather than content and for continuing to abuse yoru admin privledges. Stop it already. You've been warned repeatedly. ChildofMidnight (talk) 23:27, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

The source states, "The National Academy of Sciences, Insurance Institute for Highway Safety, Congressional Budget Office and National Highway Traffic Safety Administration have separately concluded in multiple studies dating back about 20 years that fuel-economy standards force automakers to build more small cars, which has led to thousands more deaths in crashes annually."

That is a definite thing - there is no "may have" about it.

For you to remove the sourced fact that I wrote, and replace it with an unsourced "may have," goes against the wikipedia policy of Misplaced Pages:Verifiability.

In the name of verifiability, NPOV, and accuracy, I would like the article to quote that part of the source word for word, so there will be no doubt as to its accuracy.

Grundle2600 (talk) 19:09, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I did not replace anything you wrote, so I assume you mean to refer to Scjessey. We are not going to quote that word-for-word because there is no need to do that. But here's a possible fix, and first bear in mind that these are just some studies that say this, and it's possible they are outdated and therefore not really appropriate (you might want to actually find these studies, or better yet very recent ones, and see when they were done). But how about instead if we said something like "Organizations like the National Academy of Sciences have argued that CAFE laws would force tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety." That's stronger, but still puts the claim to a group, rather than us making the claim ourselves, which is problematic. But I'm actually not sure that's the best option. I don't know that the NAS has actually "argued that CAFE laws would force tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety." They have just done some research that says small cars lead to more deaths - there's no indication they have weighed in on CAFE standards, and indeed I'm guessing they have not. Adrian Lund, president of the Insurance Institute for Highway Safety, who is cited in the article, is someone who has directly criticized the CAFE standards. It thus might make more sense to say "Organizations like the Insurance Institute for Highway Safety have argued that CAFE laws would force tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety." This group has both done a study, apparently, on the safety of small cars and opined on the CAFE standards, so this is a possible way to word it. But I don't know if they're an objective group, indeed the might not be, and if not that's worth considering/noting.
Additionally I would note an important point on your source—USA Today is not very well regarded as a newspaper, and indeed has not been basically since its inception (receiving nicknames like "McPaper"). Other dailies like the NYT, the WaPO, the WSJ, etc. are much better sources. Quite frankly your best bet is to find a series of good sources that describe the debate about CAFE standards from all angles and write-up a full, balanced paragraph on it. Do some real research on this and figure out what the pro and con arguments are, what the administration's standard comment on the matter is, and put together a few sentences that describe what's going on here. That's what I would recommend, and honestly that's the only way to go about editing here.
I've noticed that you've ignored the rest of my comments above, focusing instead solely on this one small issue, but I hope you have taken them to heart. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 19:45, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
Where is your proof that USA Today is not a reliable source? Grundle2600 (talk) 20:39, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
No proof, because I didn't say it was not a reliable source, I said "Other dailies like the NYT, the WaPO, the WSJ, etc. are much better sources." A source may pass the reliability threshold but still be less than ideal—we want to use the best possible sources and there are better papers than USA Today (I don't think that's very controversial, regardless of one's political views). But would you care to respond to the rest of my comment? --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 21:23, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I'd much prefer to see the studies cited explicitly -- nothing guarantees the writer of the article actually got them right. If the studies aren't verifiable, we shouldn't cite them.--SarekOfVulcan (talk) 19:25, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

It's a fact that USA Today said what it said. I should at least be alloowed to quote the part of the article that cites the four studies. Grundle2600 (talk) 20:39, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
One could get the impression from that statement that you don't care whether the story is accurately reporting what the studies say, just as long as it makes Obama look bad.--SarekOfVulcan (talk) 20:44, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
Second Sarek's remark, and it's also a mistake to think of things in terms of what you should be "allowed" to do. The goal is to write a good article, not to let certain users be allowed to do certain things, and that's a very strange way to put it (albeit one in keeping with your overall approach to these articles). I gave you some very specific suggestions above, which would admittedly require a bit of work, so you might want to respond to those. Whatever you do next, get consensus for changes here before making them in the article. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 21:23, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
(comment moved as it was posted in the wrong place)
Do you have something to offer that concerns improving the article, or are you just going to misuse this talk page with personal-attack-rants like this? -- Scjessey (talk) 00:33, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Scjessey, you have made multiple personal attacks in this very section of the talk page. Furthermore, I agree with the claim that certain editors only add things that are positive about Obama to these articles. If you have ever added anything that was negative about Obama, please show it to me. Grundle2600 (talk) 01:59, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

AIG

I added this to the article, but someone else removed it - I think my use of the word "forever" is against wikipedia policy. If I remove the word "however," can the rest of it be put back into the article? Other than that one word, there's nothing here that goes against the rules. And it's certainly a topic that received widespread media coverage. I think all of this info should be in the article.

While Senator, Obama had voted for the Emergency Economic Stabilization Act of 2008, which included corporate welfare for American International Group. As President, Obama signed a stimulus bill that protected AIG bonuses. Prior to signing this stimulus bill, Obama had said, "when I'm president, I will go line by line to make sure that we are not spending money unwisely." However, after signing the stimulus bill that protected the AIG bonuses, Obama expressed surprise and outrage at the bonuses, and said that he would "pursue every single legal avenue to block these bonuses."

Grundle2600 (talk) 15:14, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Transparency

The section talks about how the website recovery.gov was going to post info on how the stimulus money was being spent. I added info from the Washington Post saying that this promise has not been kept. Since the section already mentioned the promise, then in the name of balance, it should also mention that the promise has not been kept. Grundle2600 (talk) 15:53, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

From the article you cited:
Devaney says the site will not post much spending data until October, when recipients must file their first full reports. "I'm not being particularly apologetic about where this site is today," he said. "I would be if someone could show me anything that has happened that isn't on this site."
If not much has been submitted to put up on the site, then it's hardly surprising that not much is on it, is it?--SarekOfVulcan (talk) 15:59, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
But it also says the private website has the information. So why doesn't the government website have it? Grundle2600 (talk) 16:49, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
Because the private site is posting WAGs?--SarekOfVulcan (talk) 17:04, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
"Wag is a highland district in the Amhara Region of Ethiopia and was once a medieval province." Grundle2600 (talk) 17:33, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
S/he wrote "WAG", all capitals. See here what it means --The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 18:01, 21 May 2009 (UTC)
I quoted what was at the link. It said, "Wag is a highland district in the Amhara Region of Ethiopia and was once a medieval province." Your link says, "a rough estimate." I think your link does a much better job of making its point in this discussion. Grundle2600 (talk) 19:00, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

A civil discussion about putting Obama's proposed changes in CAFE standards in the article

The discussion was closed, but it said, "discussion has degenerated. Please re-start if there is a viable proposal here"

Great. Let's have a civil discussion about this.

I would like the environment section of this article to have the following:

"Obama has proposed to address global warming by substantially increasing the CAFE standards for gasoline mileage. The National Academy of Sciences, Insurance Institute for Highway Safety, Congressional Budget Office, and National Highway Traffic Safety Administration have all separately determined in multiple studies that CAFE laws have already forced automakers to build smaller cars, which has already led to thousands more deaths in crashes annually. Concerns have been expressed that Obama's plan to strengthen the CAFE program would make this death toll even worse. "

That is based on what the source says.

According to the source, there is no "may have" about it. It is 100% definite that those four studies show that those deaths definitely did occur. I want the article to match the source.

The person who had replaced my wording with "may have" was not going by what the source said. I want my exact words to be in the article, without use of the word "may have," because I want the article to match the source.

Grundle2600 (talk) 05:49, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I'd rather the above discussion had not been closed, because now we are starting over. You never really responded to my suggestions about how to go about this Grundle, but I continue to think that we need to actually check on some of these studies (and when they happened - if they are 20 years old it's a problem) rather than simply assume USA Today got it right. Better yet, I think we should build a whole paragraph on this topic which covers it from all sides, rather than only putting in what you have suggested, wording which amounts to "some people say Obama's plan will kill more people." I think it's a great idea to talk about CAFE standards and the debate surrounding them (possibly including something along the lines of what you have in mind), but we need it to be NPOV. Are you willing to put in some work to help research this topic and present it in a balanced manner? That's what we need here, I don't think what you have proposed can go in the article, but it can be a starting pointing for building text that is actually NPOV and not sourced to half of a USA Today article (since you are still leaving out the parts of the article that describe Obama's proposal positively). In sum, we need more (and better) sources and we need to present a neutral and overall view of the policy proposal and the reaction to it. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 06:01, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
While of course I agree with the points in the collapsed section above about this addition violating issues of sourcing, weight and tone, I'd like to address the reference's actual claims, because that article uses specious logic to leap to shaky conclusions which everybody seems to be taking as gospel. It is simply not true that smaller cars are the only way of increasing fuel economy. It may have been true looking back on the 1960s or in the Reagan era, but in the real world of the 21st century in which we live, hybrid and electric car models are a reality at long last, and would of course be a primary factor. The Chevrolet Volt is likely to get 50 MPG or more. The Tesla Roadster is said to get as much as three times as much. To the degree it would be about size, the point wouldn't be to make vehicles like the MINI and the Beetle smaller—though these light cars and others like them already exist and have been around for several decades—it would be to make vehicles like the Hummer smaller. Yet even with those SUVs, they are beginning to manufacture hybrid SUVs, which are of comparable size and weight to other SUVs.
We don't need to make small cars smaller in order to reach the 35 MPG average goal. We do need to stop selling the absolutely biggest (they have already stopped making the biggest Hummer), and start making most other models available in a hybrid or electric version. But even more important is every truck, bus and large vehicle. Trucks consume 48% of our fuel. In January, Coca-Cola bought a fleet of 185 hybrid trucks including 150 tractor-trailers, which are 30% more efficient and have 30% fewer emissions compared to diesel, which itself has gotten better over the years. They already had about 140 of the hybrids, so this move doubled the hybrids in their fleet. There is a market for electric cars, particularly sexier models like the Tesla, and that will push up the MPG on the high end. The rest of the work is done by getting rid of the worst offenders on the low end.
As to traffic fatalities, they have decreased for decades, even as smaller cars have become more prevalent. While most cars in 1950 were plenty big and heavy, there were about 7.5 deaths per 100 Million vehicle miles. Now there are 1.5, a decrease of about 80%. The sharpest declines in deaths per vehicle mile actually came at two times in history when a new wave of smaller cars were introduced and became popular—the late 1960s/early 1970s, when Japanese cars flooded the market and VW Beetles were all over the place, and American carmakers made smaller models as well; and the early 1980s, after late-70s fuel standards were enacted and the Government-aided Chrysler K cars were released and '70s "boats" including Cadillac and Lincoln grew smaller. Reagan and Clinton both undercut the effectiveness of those standards and enabled the current situation by pushing back these fuel standards repeatedly. The shallowest decline in deaths per vehicle mile has been since the 1990s, despite the return to larger cars including SUVs and Hummers. This fact alone would seem to fly in the face of the allegation. Fuel economy, which increased from the '50s through the early '90s, during the periods of sharpest decline in fatalities, has not improved since the '90s, which is when the rate of decline virtually flattened.
I will grant that the late-'60s/early-'70s decline had a great deal to do with the advent of seatbelts as standard features, and the '80s decline had something to do with laws mandating their use. On the other hand, the rise of the SUV was contemporaneous with the rise of the airbag as standard equipment not only for driver/front but side and passenger airbags, and it seems that one cancels out the other, especially when you factor in the use of cellphones and other electronic devices, all of which contribute to an increase in accidents. Yet another contributing factor in the decrease in traffic fatalities has been the adoption of lower speed limits. Measures to combat drinking and driving has contributed to a decrease, as have increases in street lighting, traffic lights and stop signs, other road signs, painted lines, in-road reflectors and grooves, and other safety measures. (Many of these developments are supported by grass-roots organizations , and all were implemented by federal, state and/or local government, and paid for by tax and/or consumer dollars.) You can view a five-decade chart of traffic fatality rates by year here.
Interestingly, when gas prices rose last summer, shippers worked to find ways to use trains for long hauls instead of trucks whenever possible, as trains get more miles per gallon for their weight than on-road vehicles like trucks and cars. Removing some of the need for trucks in this way both helps the increase in fuel efficiency and removes some of the dangerously heavy vehicles from the roads, making all cars safer and roads less congested (further helping reduce the waste of fuel and emissions in traffic). Increasing the accessibility of public transportation for commuters—which is one of the infrastructure plans for the notoriously traffic-addled Northeastern U.S.—will also raise fuel economy standards and decrease the rate of traffic fatalities by reducing the vehicle miles per person.
Which brings me to my final point. Vehicle miles per person is the metric by which traffic fatalities are measured, something conceded by the author. So anything that raises vehicle miles per person will make traffic fatalities be and/or look worse, and anything that lowers vehicle miles per person will make traffic fatalities be and/or look better. The author oddly presumes in the article's formulation that the price of gas will decrease by a dollar from current prices, which he construes as causing an increase in vehicle miles per person. It is this increase in vehicle miles per person that from a purely mathematical standpoint would have to raise the fatalities. However, this dollar-a-gallon decrease is highly unlikely over the long term, unless stimulative efforts fail to prevent a deflationary cycle. Most sources I'm familiar with expect that over the coming decade or so, gas prices at best will remain where they are and are more likely to rise somewhat than to fall. If the author of the referenced article actually admits falling gas prices is a major component of his perceived rise in traffic fatalities, the most responsible thing to do would be to raise gasoline taxes. (We could use the money to fund the development of alternative fuels and renewable energy sources, preventing any future wars over oil and diminishing the future proliferation of nuclear technologies.)
If you think about it, it would be every bit as logical and factual, using this author's own postulates, to write an article entitled "People Against Increased Fuel Taxes Have Killed More Americans than Iraq War." Hey, maybe that's why green energy has been so mocked, maligned and under-supported—all the traffic fatalities its adoption would cause because it would be so much cheaper to drive that we'd suddenly spend vastly more time doing it. Abrazame (talk) 08:08, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Bigtimepeace, I did explain the positive - I said it was to combat global warming.Corporate_Average_Fuel_Economy#Effect_on_traffic_safety contains sources to back up the claim made in USA Today. Grundle2600 (talk) 09:35, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
(ec, replying to Abrazame) Interesting points, though obviously you go into quite a bit more detail on the subject than we could in the article. My basic (incredibly general) takeaway from your comment is that these issues are, unsurprisingly, quite complex, which lends further credence to the idea that some thorough research is needed to put together an NPOV paragraph on CAFE standards, and that the USA Today article is far too simplified of an account for our purposes (at the very least it cannot be our only source). You seem abnormally (in a good way!) conversant with these issues, so if you'd like to help with writing something on this I think that would be great. And just to be clear I certainly don't take the claims in the article as gospel and am glad you have elucidated some of the possible issues with it here. As I said above it's still advisable to go to the source in terms of the studies referenced (or similar ones) in order to see what they say about deaths and small cars (and when they were saying it) while also looking for sources that perhaps disagree with those conclusions. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 09:47, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Abrazame, I agree with you that Tesla Motors won't have any problem meeting those mileage standards while maintaining safety - they have already surpassed those standards by several multiples, when you look at the gasoline equivalent of the Tesla Roadster electric car. And I'm sure that Toyota and Honda will do just fine too. But General Motors and Chrysler are a different story. I think it's ironic Obama is bailing them out while they continue to make gas guzzling SUVs. The environment would be better off if they were allowed to go out of business. It's not like there won't be any jobs available to build cars in the U.S. without them - Honda and Toyota have already been making up for that. According to this, while Michigan lost 83,000 Big Three auto manufacturing jobs between 1993 and 2008, more than 91,000 new auto manufacturing jobs were created in Alabama, Tennessee, Kentucky, Georgia, North Carolina, South Carolina, Virginia and Texas during that same time period. Why not let General Motors and Chrysler cease to exist, and let the better manufacturers make up for it with better, safer, more fuel efficient cars? Why bail out companies that are destroying the environment? Grundle2600 (talk) 09:58, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

(replying to Grundle's brief comment a couple of comments' above) That's not what I meant re: the "positive." Let me try another tack to show you why your proposed addition is problematic. I'll use the same article you did - drawing only on it for information - and show you a different possible version from what you propose.

"Obama has proposed to address global warming by substantially increasing the CAFE standards for gasoline mileage. This proposed change has been hailed as an excellent solution to a variety of problems related to greenhouse-gas emissions and the consumption of fuel. Carol Browner, the director of the White House Office of Energy and Climate Change, has suggested that car companies will be able to use new technologies to comply with the new standards and thus will not have to significantly alter the composition of their fleets."

Does that sound good to you? Me either. It's horrible, but it is based completely on the article, it's just that I've picked out all of the positive aspects and left out the negative ones. You are doing essentially the opposite, and it's just as much of a problem. Does this make sense?

But we're moving beyond this. We need other and better sources to write well about this issue. Are you interested in working on that? Because really no one seems interested in putting in your suggested change as is, so some additional work is probably required here. At this point, discussion of CAFE standards should not be based on this one USA Today article.

Also let me say that both Abrazame's comment and Grundle's last one are shading off into questions of politics and the automotive industry, rather than focusing solely on the article. We need to deal only with the latter. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 10:07, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I do like that paragraph. You did an excellent job writing it. Grundle2600 (talk) 10:49, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
If that was the only thing that was in the article, it would be horribly unbalanced, given what the USA Today article says. You still seem to be having some problem fully grasping NPOV, and that accounts for a lot of the problems you have faced in editing this and other Obama articles. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 16:00, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

The article still says, "Critics have pointed out that CAFE laws may have forced tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety."

Am I the only one here who thinks that the words "may have" do not reflect the source?

This is what the source says:

"The National Academy of Sciences, Insurance Institute for Highway Safety, Congressional Budget Office and National Highway Traffic Safety Administration have separately concluded in multiple studies dating back about 20 years that fuel-economy standards force automakers to build more small cars, which has led to thousands more deaths in crashes annually."

It says those four studies show that those deaths definitely happened. There is no "may have." It is definite, according to the source.

Misplaced Pages requires that articles match the source.

Why am I the only person here who disagrees with the use of "may have," when it is very clear that such wording goes against wikipedia policy?

Grundle2600 (talk) 14:07, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I have already explained my use of the words "may have" to you (more than once), but you have chosen to ignore me. The wording does not "go against Misplaced Pages policy" at all. You are trying to write something that basically states that there is a direct relationship between an increase in fuel efficiency and an increase in deaths, but the source does not support that, and it is obviously not true. At best, it could be described as a gross oversimplification. The biggest problem, however, is your framing of this event, which is actually about how Obama brought together a disparate group that included auto manufacturers and came up with new fuel efficiency goals that everyone agreed with. You made it sound as if Obama was personally signing the death warrants of people who buy fuel efficient cars. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:51, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Here's a simple temporary solution already suggested above. Rewrite the sentence as "Critics have argued that CAFE laws force tradeoffs between fuel economy and auto safety." That's accurate in terms of what the source says, and avoids the word "may," while also making it clear that this is only a claim made by some, not an iron clad fact. But we need to rewrite the whole thing ultimately using better sources. I've asked Grundle2600 repeatedly if he's interested in doing that, and for now the answer appears to be no since I've received no reply. That's instructive (particularly as all Grundle seems able to do is push, over and over again, for his or her preferred version, despite repeated efforts on my part to draw the editor into actual collaborative work), but I don't think I have anything more to say here at this time. I suggest making the change above as a temporary fix to put this silly discussion over "may" to bed (so long as a couple others agree - don't just make the change without discussion), but then I hope at some point we can actually write a good paragraph on this issue. What we have now is not that, regardless of whether we say "may" or not. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 16:00, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Just to give a bit of extra context for my choice of "may", the edit I performed was a quick and dirty change to try to neutralize the version put up by Grundle. I never intended for it to be a permanent solution, and at the time I considered just deleting the entire paragraph per WP:NPOV. Clearly the main story is that Obama succeeded in negotiating a set of new standards that move the country further toward improvements in lowering emissions and decreasing our dependence on foreign oil. The mainstream media has given little attention to the notion that it will lead to an increase in auto-related deaths, presumably because there are no current data to support the notion that fuel efficiency improvements automatically involve making cars lighter and less safe (as evidenced by the gigantic Chevy Tahoe hybrid). -- Scjessey (talk) 16:16, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
I'm leaning towards leaving all that out and just saying that Obama supported the move to tighten CAFE and pollution standards. This article should simply state what Obama and his administration did during the period, and not the arguments on both sides of each policy issue. Thanks to the wonders of hyperlinking, that can all be explained in each article on the subject - organizing things that way is part of the fundamental premise of Misplaced Pages. Stating pro and con arguments, either from analysts or partisans, is best kept to a minimum, and only where the arguments themselves factor into the presidency. The support, opposition, or effect would have to rise above the normal noise of politics, and I don't see that here. Wikidemon (talk) 16:37, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
In response to Wikidemon, I don't see the harm in a sentence (that's probably the extent of it) describing a couple of viewpoints on the CAFE policy proposals—it is the kind of issue that in the past has provoked a lot of reaction, from environmentalists, the auto industry, perhaps even consumers. In this article far more than at Barack Obama, we really need to move beyond just saying "here's what the administration said/did." In my view an article on a presidency needs to discuss reactions and effects throughout. Yes a lot of that can be farmed out to sub-articles, but confining this article to "what Obama and his administration did" is a mistake I think, and turns us into little more than stenographers summarizing White House press relies. I think the end product in that scenario is an uninteresting and uninformative article (and maybe I'm just misreading your comment, but what you're describing sounds more to me like what we should have at Timeline of the Presidency of Barack Obama). Now one can certainly argue that, so far at least, this has not received enough coverage to warrant more than a passing mention if that, but I don't think any of us have investigated that question sufficiently as yet. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 17:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC)


Scjessey, you said, "You are trying to write something that basically states that there is a direct relationship between an increase in fuel efficiency and an increase in deaths, but the source does not support that, and it is obviously not true."

If it's not true, then please tell me what this part of the article means, in your own words:

"The National Academy of Sciences, Insurance Institute for Highway Safety, Congressional Budget Office and National Highway Traffic Safety Administration have separately concluded in multiple studies dating back about 20 years that fuel-economy standards force automakers to build more small cars, which has led to thousands more deaths in crashes annually."

Grundle2600 (talk) 19:54, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Bigtimepeace The best way to have this article be balanced is to allow different people to add to it. If I get to add what I want, and you get to add what you want, and Scjessey gets to add what he wants, then the article will be balanced. Right now, it seems that everyone except me is allowed to add what they want to the article. That's not balance. An article gets balanced by adding to it, not by erasing from it. If you think my addition is unbalanced, then please add to it what you think needs to be added. But please don't erase what I wrote. Grundle2600 (talk) 19:57, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

That wouldn't lead to "balance", that would lead to an incomprehensible mess. The way for you to get something into the article is to write something that a consensus agrees passes at least WP:RS, WP:NPOV, and WP:WEIGHT. Cherry-picking cheap shots from wherever you find them is the wrong approach. PhGustaf (talk) 20:40, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Grundle, you are not being prevented from adding a goddamned thing, it is what you wish to add that is the problem. Stop with the persecution complex, please. Tarc (talk) 20:57, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
Grundle your statement above, with my username leading off in bold, is shocking for an experienced Wikipedian. That is absolutely not how we do things, period, end of story, how are we even talking about this. If you continue to edit along the theoretical lines you lay out above, you will not be able to participate at these articles anymore (at least for awhile, in the form of a temporary topic ban). Please go read WP:NPOV and other various content policies backwards and forwards, because my efforts to explain the problem in your approach are obviously falling on deaf ears. --Bigtimepeace | talk | contribs 21:09, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Dick Cheney speech on Obama

I think this deserves mentioning in the article. This speech from Dick Cheney is quite interesting. He points out that although Obama released to the public the information about interrogating terrorist suspects, Obama has not let the public know the information that was obtained through these interrogations. Cheney claims that the interrogations "prevented the violent death of thousands, if not hundreds of thousands, of innocent people," and criticizes Obama for making the interrogation methods public, while keeping the info about the terrorists' plots that was stopped by the interrogations a secret. Grundle2600 (talk) 19:50, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

What an ex-administrative official has to say about the presidency in a speech to a private institution is irrelevant to the Presidency of Barack Obama. Thanks. Tarc (talk) 20:59, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
True. It might be relevant to article(s) on Dick Cheney though. However, we're not here to cover supposed truths that ex officials point out. If the fact of their speaking becomes noteworthy in its own right (for example, Cheney now being a thorn in Obama's side and an embarrassment to some Republicans), that could be relevant to Cheney's retirement career as a pundit or speaker. Wikidemon (talk) 21:11, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
  1. Safety could suffer if we boost mileage by making cars smaller, USA Today, May 20, 2009