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Claim in waterboarding section

In the waterboarding section, the following sentence has been added but with no source: "However, the CIA and all documents state that Waterboarding has not been used since 2003." I suggest a speedy deletion of this sentence unless a source can be provided. Pexise (talk) 11:53, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

A speedy deletion? Yeah, we wouldn't want this article's readers to get the impression that the people who claim to oppose "torture" were hyperventilating over only three fascists. They might prematurely stop hating the U.S. and begin opposing real torture elsewhere.

I added the reference, but there are plenty of others, and we could probably find a better one.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 13:45, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

OK, I've adjusted the content accordingly. Pexise (talk) 20:23, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest, Neutrality, and Factual Accuracy tags

I think it should be obvious that it deserves these tags, but I'll explain.

All of us who have engaged in bickering seems to have a conflict of interest. Pexise seems to be a bit liberal with his changes, while Randy and I both are somewhat conservative with our and trying our best to stop radical changes while fixing the anti-American streak.

This article is not Neutral. It is mostly Anti-American. This article might not be factually accurate, and it appears to be spinning facts for its own agenda. --Rockstone35 (talk) 20:49, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

• What is the specific content you think should be changed? Pexise (talk) 21:14, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Prison abuse photos to be released

More prison abuse photos to be released next month. Pexise (talk) 09:33, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

It looks like these will be photos from criminal investigations. I wouldn't expect to see any activities that the U.S. military had sanctioned.

It will be worth watching more to study the people who claim to oppose torture. We'll have to see how they run with it. I don't see how it applies to this article but we'll definitely need to get more names. Sadly, that BBC link only names Amrit Singh, who we already know.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:36, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

• Yes, like this quote:

The ACLU says the photos show that the much-publicised abuses at Abu Ghraib prison in Iraq amounted to a specific policy. "These photographs provide visual proof that prisoner abuse by US personnel was not aberrational but widespread, reaching far beyond the walls of Abu Ghraib," said ACLU lawyer Amrit Singh.

Pexise (talk) 16:48, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

And just what do you expect her to say? She's a lawyer for the other side. It's her job to spin things that way. This is what she gets paid to do.

Perhaps you don't realize, when it comes to Abu Ghraib (which I guess is where most of these pictures will be from), the descriptions of this material are already out there as part of the investigations that were made public (e.g. Fay Report). They've been public for years.

Pictures from other investigations may come more as a surprise, but only because nobody paid attention to those cases before.

With over one million troops having been in Iraq over the years, some criminal abuse is inevitable. That should be common sense. It was the same way in WWII. Louis Till (Emmett Till's father) was convicted and executed as a soldier for his crimes against civilians. There was no "specific policy" involved in that either (no matter what any amoral ACLU lawyer might have said). The Army has been even more diligent in prosecuting them today than they were in WWII (although they haven't executed anyone yet).

This is actually what happened to Abu Ghraib. The Army prosecuted that one immediately but most of the people who claim to care about human rights ignored it until after the pictures came out. But I don't think it'll work out the same way again. They'll try, though, and that'll be intereresting to see.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 19:22, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

• What do you mean by "lawyer for the other side"?
• The photos are from Iraq and Afghanistan. Pexise (talk) 20:03, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

Well, first, it's obvious that she is taking sides. Just look at the quote you cited. If the abuse does reach "far beyond the walls of Abu Ghraib" then how far does it go?

Just think about it: What evidence does she have to say that, which the Democrats in Congress did not have when they pursued this? They've had access to all these pictures for years with plenty of motivation to pin this on the Bush administration if they could.

Clearly, she is speaking with authority she is does not have. I seriously doubt that she has even seen the pictures, and yet she is taking an adversarial position rather than an investigative one. There is no other way to explain this than that she is taking sides. Again, what has she seen that the Democrats did not see?

And yes, I know the pictures are from both theaters. That's why I've addressed "Pictures from other investigations" in my previous post.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 01:02, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

• None of that is concern to us. If she is considered a credible source by the BBC, then she can be quoted in the article. Regardless, let's wait and see what comes out of this one, and add any relevant material to the article when the photos have been released. Pexise (talk) 09:51, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

It's not much of a concern because this isn't really the right article to address this.

That being said, the BBC considered her a source because she's directly involved in the case against the U.S. government. That makes her a person of interest only in the same manner that a mass murderer's attorney would be. It doesn't mean she's credible or non-biased.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:44, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Photo release cancelled:

• In reversal, Obama seeks to block abuse photos, Jennifer Loven, AP, May 13, 2009

President Obama's announcement pretty much confirms my previous comments, and contradicts the ACLU's statement:

"This is not a situation in which the Pentagon has concealed or sought to justify inappropriate action," Obama said of the photos. "In fact, the most direct consequence of releasing them, I believe, would be to further inflame anti-American opinion and to put our troops in greater danger."

In other words, it's from criminal investigations by the DoD. The ACLU lawyer was blowing smoke when she tried to pretend the photos show that the much-publicised abuses at Abu Ghraib prison in Iraq amounted to a specific policy.

If it was really a specific policy, it would have been covered up, and not prosecuted. This lawyer needs to be remembered.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 22:46, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

NPOV tag

Rockstone35 added a NPOV tag to the article. What exactly is NPOV? (And I very much disagree with using (minor) when adding such a tag). Dendlai (talk) 04:22, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

We had a discussion about this earlier, with no rationale offered for the addition of tags (see Conflict of Interest, Neutrality, and Factual Accuracy tags above). Pexise (talk) 09:48, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

I didn't actually mean to add "minor" to the tag, I used a program. Anyway, there is a rational for it, being the disputes seen on this talk page. There IS evidence that this is biased against the US (though, for defense of this article, an article about human rights with any country tends to be negative). --Rockstone35 (talk) 14:02, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Could you list some specific issues, please? This is, obviously, a topic that evokes strong opinions. Wading through the talk pages for this article would be a tedious and probably frustrating task; so could you list some specific issues that you see? Dendlai (talk) 14:55, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

One memorable problem is the question of when something becomes part of the human rights record of the U.S.

If an American soldier commits a crime not authorized or encouraged by the government, and the prosecution begins immediately, in what way does that belong here? To do so would mean that every substantial military intervention is virtually guaranteed to merit inclusion here -- including those engaged solely on behalf of human rights.

And if it does belong here, then why shouldn't Louis Till be listed as well?

-- Randy2063 (talk) 16:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

• It belongs in the article if it is a recognised human rights violation, such as torture, and/or if it is referred to by a source as a human rights violation. Don't forget that the US government is responsible for ensuring that it's agents (e.g. the military, the police, the CIA) do not commit human rights violations such as torture - something discussed at length in previous discussions.

• Also, as well as specific violations, this article deals with the general human rights record of the US and issues concerning the US and human rights (e.g. treaty ratifications, role in promoting and protecting human rights, historical participation in landmarks in human rights development such as the UDHR). Pexise (talk) 18:21, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Do other human rights articles discuss marginal criminal activities by individuals? I don't see it.

Yes, the U.S. is responsible for the acts of its soldiers, and that's why they've been prosecuted. But marginal criminal activity is simply that. Marginal criminal activity may be notable to specific articles where critics want to pretend to care about human rights, but it has no place in a general article like this one. In fact, it appears that the forthcoming photos are all from those cases that other countries might have swept under the rug.

Then what about Louis Till? Going by your standards, what justification would there be to exclude him from this article?

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

• What are you referring to specifically? If you are referring to the material on Abu Ghraib, that is included because pronouncements and statements have been made my numerous human rights organisations including the Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights. Pexise (talk) 15:39, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Do you mean regarding my position that many of America's critics don't really care about human rights?

Just look at that UN High Commissioner for Human Rights. Perhaps he is, personally, a nice guy, but that position is influenced by the GA, which includes some of the worst regimes on earth. Even a good man would be stifled by its bureaucracy. Have you heard of their recent "anti-racism" conference? What kinds of "human rights" concerns could ever be expected to come out of that mess? It's only natural that anti-Americanism would get a high profile there, and the crimes of our enemies a much lower one.

To be fair, the quote we have from the guy is very guarded. He didn't try to claim that the goings-on at Abu Ghraib were a deliberate policy of the U.S. government. (And that's why Abu Ghraib doesn't belong here unless to show that the U.S. military does investigate and prosecute its own.)

But the bottom line is still, if the U.N. cared about human rights to the degree that they should, they'd have worked harder to stop real human rights abuses committed by their friends. As for the others, while I hope Amnesty and HRW are still sincere at their core, they continue to avert their eyes to the misdeeds of their friends. But you don't have to take my word for this. Just look at when they claim to care about human rights, and when they turn silent.

And what about Louis Till? It's an interesting parallel in that the facts of his crimes were also exploited by the worst political interests.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 14:54, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

• Who are these so-called "friends"? Pexise (talk) 16:41, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
• Can you provide an example of a country that the UNOHCHR and other human rights organisations are silent on to back up your claims? Pexise (talk) 17:40, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Well, I'd have thought the "anti-racism" conference explains a lot about the U.N., but here's something more pertinent: Sanctioning Human Wrongs.

The so-called "human rights" activists are often silent when bold moves could make a real difference. For example, most of these "anti-war" demonstrations include factions from the far left (many are organized by those extreme groups). The participants include friends of Hamas, Hezbollah, and FARC.

This one included supporters of Al-Sadr, who, as you must know, has been part of the reason the Iraq war lasted so long. (This wasn't an isolated incident; they've long had a presence at these things.) That links to another article about the discovery of one of their torture chambers. Their friends don't bother with anything so tame as waterboarding.

The problem isn't simply that they befriend the wrong people. The real trouble is that some of these left-wing protestors aren't bad people. They might not be supporting war and real torture if groups like HRW and Amnesty could dare to call them on it. Instead, they choose not to -- probably a fundraising decision.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 18:26, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

• What have groups of protesters in the US got to do with this discussion? There is no logic to your argument here.
• Your link to the *Sanctioning human wrongs article* mentions that the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights attended a conference in Tehran of the Non-Aligned Movement. The Commissioner attends countless conferences all over the world - there is nothing unusual about this.
• Neither the OHCHR, Amnesty International or Human Rights Watch have refrained from highlighting and criticising human rights violations in Iran, eg: HRW page on Iran - hundreds of links to reports and statements; Amnesty International page on Iran - hundreds of statements about human rights violations in Iran here; Press releases from the UN Office of the High Commissioner on Human Rights; Other statements from UN OHCHR on Iran; reports from the UN Human Rights Treaty bodies on human rights in Iran
• Not what I would describe as "silence". Pexise (talk) 19:13, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Sure, HRW has reports on Iran. Do you think the Iranian leaders take that seriously, knowing that HRW has one on the U.S., too?

Look, I've always been willing to say that HRW and Amnesty do some good work. But filing reports is fine for an otherwise quiet think tank. HRW and Amnesty are much more than that. They have access to the eyes of millions of people who'd like to say they care about human rights -- and that's exactly what the protestors have to do with this.

I shouldn't need to tell you that mobilizing public opinion is an important function of these "human rights" organizations. Those protestors like to call themselves a Second Superpower. They can sometimes influence U.S. policy. Saddam Hussein had fully expected them to stop the invasion of Iraq outside Baghdad.

Yes, they can stop CIA from waterboarding (for a while, at least). When are they going to stop torture everywhere else? They have a bias.

You asked, who are these so-called friends, and you did me a favor by pointing out the NAM.

The only business a true human rights advocate might have with the NAM is to ask them that they start caring about human rights. Somehow, I just don't think her meetings with Dick Cheney would have gone the same way. It's fine to be cordial but not pliant.

So, to summarize, people are judged by when they choose to speak up, and by the company they keep. There's no way of getting around this.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 03:33, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

• I'm starting to doubt the seriousness of your complaints about these sources, but if you really are serious, why don't you take it up on the Misplaced Pages:Reliable sources/Noticeboard? Pexise (talk) 19:04, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

We were not discussing sources here. If we were, I'd say they're useful as long as let the reader know who said it.

But we were discussing when something is worthy of mention in a general article about human rights in the U.S. And we still haven't heard your position on Louis Till and why that does or doesn't belong here as much as you think Abu Ghraib does.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 00:03, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Quit deleting my tags, There is rationale.

• This article is always going to have bias, and any article that has bias should have a NPOV tag.
• Amnesty International is not always a reliable source in an article about this in the same way a Nazi is not a reliable source for information about the holocaust, both would have biases.
• The USA has traditionally had an excellent human rights record. While throughout history, the USA has had numerous "questionable" human rights activities, its bad activities is only 1% of all of it's human rights. This article harps on the 1% instead of the 99%. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rockstone35 (talk • contribs) 23:36, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

This article is always going to have bias, and any article that has bias should have a NPOV tag. Thank you for stating your intentions. Apparently you're not looking to improve what the article says, you just think it should have an NPOV tag. Your actions, while no doubt meant in good faith, are clearly disruptive. Please stop. Dlabtot (talk) 23:52, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

• What is supposed reason for the NPOV tag? Could someone please tell me one specific issue with the article in terms of POV? Then, we can address that issue. If there are others, we can address them one by one. Till there are none left. Dlabtot (talk) 16:08, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

• The tag continues to be added with no reason given. It is also being added using a programme so it doesn't show up on watchlists etc., otherwise I would delete it straight away. No specific reason or content has ever been offered for why the article is not NPOV. Some editors disagree that there should be any criticism of the US human rights record on Misplaced Pages, and to they add the NPOV tag for that reason. Pexise (talk) 16:17, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

'Sigh', I think it's time for my two cents. I agree with those who say the article is NPOV, but for different reasons. Namely, the article has a serious problem with Undue Weight. There is a MUCH heavier emphasis on the human right abuses, but there is also a much heavier emphasis on current events. The United States of America have been around for 200 hundred years, but the bulk of the article has to do with very recent events. Having an entire section devoted to Hurricane Katrina is like having an entire section devoted to Kent State. Also, it's fairly obvious that many of the sections of the article, namely Hurricane Katrina and Justice system and to a lesser extent Health Care, are entirely devoted to criticism of the United States. And what's with the Obama quote at the end of the Guantanemo section? It's vague, there's no context, it's just out of place. Joker1189 (talk) 17:07, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

RE: the Obama quote - check the source: Obama is referring to the period the US has just gone through when torture was legitimised and practiced as government policy. Pexise (talk) 17:14, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

I think the Obama quote is rather quaint. It also has great potential for irony as more of the people who like to claim they oppose "torture" start to accuse him of it, too.

The Hurricane Katrina section isn't the worst we've got but it's always been off the rails. Those "shoot to kill" orders it mentions were never more than the Governor's attempt to appear tough. How many looters were actually shot? Besides that, looting wasn't even a federal issue. When it says, "the government was accused of overreacting" that implies it's the federal government, but it wasn't.

Even if it was sufficiently notable for this article, the shooting of looters has historically been the proper response in an emergency.

I'm tempted to believe the entire section was added as a parody.

If this article was serious, we should have more stuff on natural disasters. This is something that the U.S. excels at (which is why it's not covered here). Even in Katrina, the federal response was enormous, and the casualty count turned out to be far below what the computer models had projected. People complained for two reasons: 1) a huge toll was inevitable given the scale of the disaster; and 2) politicians and so-called "human rights" activists saw an opportunity to make hay. Had Katrina happened in another country, the death toll would have been much, much higher.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 21:23, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

BTW: Pexise, we still haven't heard your position on Louis Till and why that does or doesn't belong here as much as you think Abu Ghraib does.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 21:26, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

What is your case for including Louis Till? What is your source? Pexise (talk) 22:45, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

My position is that Louis Till would not belong here. His crime was a personal one, and he was prosecuted for it by the Army. It was definitely not part of the human rights policy of the U.S.

The trouble is, the same logic applies to the Abu Ghraib photo on this article. The guards' crimes were personal ones, and they were prosecuted for it by the Army. It was definitely not part of the human rights policy of the U.S.

So, why do you think that photo belongs here but not Louis Till?

-- Randy2063 (talk) 00:49, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

SO why bring it up? There are many many sources on Abu Ghraib, if there are none saying Louis Till is a human rights issue, it doesn't belong here. Pexise (talk) 21:45, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Louis Till's crimes were indeed a human rights issue, but they weren't the policy of the U.S. The same reasoning applies to the crimes of the guards at Abu Ghraib.

I'm sure many critics of the U.S. claim that Abu Ghraib was an issue of U.S. policy, but the quotes and sources we have here don't explicitly say that. Bertrand Ramcharan's statement would be worth keeping if we had other information supporting it, but it does not make a firm judgment that the incident reflected U.S. policy.

That excerpt from HRW is way too ambigious for an article like this. It probably violates SYNTH, and if not, it comes perilously close. Besides that, it's mostly about other matters found at Abu Ghraib, and that doesn't support keeping the picture.

I can understand that a lot of America's critics, rivals, and opponents want to claim that that picture represents a direct link to a deliberate policy by the Bush administration. But if they're saying such a thing, I want their names -- and precisely where they stood in a war against fascism -- to be remembered so that they can't quietly take it back later. A nebulous linkage just isn't satisfactory.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 23:51, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Or, let me put it another way: If there are many sources claiming that the guards' crimes at Abu Ghraib were a matter of U.S. policy (which Louis Till's crimes clearly weren't), then let's use them instead of the ones you have here now.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 02:13, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

We have excellent human rights sources on Abu Ghraib, there are no grounds for your complaint. Pexise (talk) 10:49, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

That's simply not true.

The only thing we've got related to that picture is that Bertrand Ramcharan says (in the ref) that "there have sadly been some violations of human rights committed by some coalition soldiers."

Again, that's no different than Louis Till. If you're going to say one incident was a "human rights" issue, and not another, it would be fascinating to read that rationale.

In fact, the source characterizes Ramcharan's statement as "an apparent reference to the incidents of abuse at Abu Ghraib". Apparent??? That's an extraordinarily weak link to the photo we're using.

If we drag that photo in here, let's get a real reference to an actual person saying it's related to U.S. human rights policy. We cannot use something so weak that it later allows the person who said it to weasel out after his sympathies change. And if we can't find such a source, then ditch the misleading NPOV photo until you do.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:52, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

The title of the source you question is "UN Says Abu Ghraib Abuse Could Constitute War Crime". We have that source and also a photo of said abuse, to illustrate some of what is being discussed. I really don't know what you're getting at, but I'm beginning to think you're just trying to waste my, and other editors' time. Pexise (talk) 16:29, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

"Could"? That's not saying the guards' actions were a "human rights issue" that the U.S. government has committed. Otherwise, you'll need to fully explain why Louis Till shouldn't be here. So far you've only danced around it. Or is it that you don't think his crimes were a human rights issue?

If you don't know what I'm getting at then I suggest you read more closely. It is you who's wasting our time by piling on garbage that has nothing to do with the human rights policy of the U.S.

I'll tend to this myself this weekend.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 17:47, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

There's no question that it's a human rights issue, hence the pronouncements of the UNOHCHR and the lengthy report published by Human Rights Watch. The sources are there and there is nothing wrong with the content. Please cease your annoying and disruptive behaviour, you have no consensus to make significant changes, you are not the only editor working on this article, so don't think you can "tend to it yourself". Pexise (talk) 18:11, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Can you explain to us the difference between a criminal act committed on the individual level as opposed to an action based on official policy and which constitutes a "human rights violation"? If a soldier shoots a French citizen in Philadelphia, is this a criminal act or a "human rights violation"? Do you understand the difference yet? The article takes criminal acts on the individual level, and then makes a jump in logic that these were actions taken on the basis of official US policy. That is the point Randy is making.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 02:29, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

I re-added the NPOV tag. I think, given the extensive talk page content, as well as the article itself, that this is more than warranted. Ideally, this article should be balanced and neutral. It does not even approach this level. I would also remind editors to keep their comments civil. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 02:41, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

• I note that the NPOV tage has been removed with a note that a "consensus" reached a "conclusion" this this article is neutral. A consensus of one does not a consensus make. I will be readding the tag. Please attempt to reach a consensus of more than one person before removing the tag in the future. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 14:49, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
• As a recap the following editors think the article in question is neutral: user:Dendlai and user:Pexise. The following editors think the article is not neutral: user:Randy2063, user:Rockstone35, user:Dlabtot (who asks for sepcific examples), user:Joker1189 and user:Yachtsman1. At this point, it might be a good time for us to come to a consensus on how the article might be improved to reach neutrality. Simply discounting or denying that this article is not neutral is not a healthy manner in which to proceed. I would suggest we begin with undue weight, and work our way from there. There should be pro and contra positions regarding America's human rights record, each provided weight and each written in a scholarly manner. If this can be achieved, I think we can reach a point of neutrality that can make everyone happy. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:20, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

• I have re-added the NPOV tag. The neutrality of this article remains in dispute. Yachtsman1 (talk) 14:38, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

• I have added this article to the NPOV noticeboard, and comments are welcome. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:03, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

I agree the NPOV tag needs to stay. If Pexise can't describe why the guards at Abu Ghraib belong here, but Louis Till doesn't (and I don't believe either of them belong here) then we'd better work out some guidelines.

BTW: I haven't gotten around to altering it the way I think could meet standards, but I'll get that done when I have more time.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 16:30, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Please use short bullet points to briefly summarize why and where this article fails to be neutral. I'm sure there is room for improvement, but I would like to see specific examples in bullet form so I can address and fix them. Tags are used to show that something needs to be fixed. Please tell me what I can do to fix it, otherwise I'm going to remove the tag. Viriditas (talk) 23:48, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

• It's a human rights issue when it results from government policy. In the case of Abu Ghraib, we have excellent human rights sources saying that it was the result of government policy, so it belongs here.
• If you have other sources saying that what took place there were not human rights violations, please add them. Pexise (talk) 19:28, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

List of those implicated in US torture policies

Can we get a list togehter of those implicated in approval of US torture policies? Condoleezza Rice has now been named Pexise (talk) 12:57, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm surprised you didn't mention Dick Cheney. But I think we know only that he'd been briefed. He didn't technically have any authority to approve it or to stop it, although it's obvious he supports every legal measure in the fight against fascism. BTW: The statute referenced to make the earlier determination that it was legal at the time has not been rewritten (and probably won't be).

For names who did have some authority, and who could have stopped it if they truly wanted to, there's Nancy Pelosi, Jane Harman, Bob Graham, John D. Rockefeller IV, Porter J. Goss, and Pat Roberts.

Pelosi says she only knew it had been approved, and not that they had started using it. In other words, she's conceding she knew of it ahead of time. Like most people who claim to oppose torture, the louder they whine against it, the faster they'll slink away and say nothing when it's done on their behalf. This is why it's important that we remember where everyone stands -- particularly those who today claim to oppose torture.

In any case, Goss says everyone present had been very enthusiastic. We could get the full story if those transcripts are ever released, but (not surprisingly) Pelosi has not joined the call for that.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:51, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

Interesting. Might be worth adding that to the article. Pexise (talk) 18:32, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

It's odd that CIA director George Tenet hasn't gotten more mention.

Well, maybe not that odd. He was a Clinton appointee, and a registered Democrat. That's probably why the people who claim to oppose torture are going after the lawyers who informed the CIA what the legal parameters were.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 02:18, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Randy2063, if you continue to use this talk page for partisan bickering instead of improving this article, I will file a report about you at ANI. Viriditas (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

That wasn't "partisan bickering." Pexise isn't American. I'm sure this didn't alter his view of these particular politicians in one way or another. My comments were meant to illuminate the bias inherent in the press and commentary we see on this subject.

If you'll note, Pexise had asked for names, and I provided some he'd be less likely to have noticed. You might also note, I didn't debate his choice of the term "torture policies."

Before throwing stones, I suggest you take a closer look at your own contributions here.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 14:54, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

I'm aware of my contributions here, none of which are partisan. My only interest is in improving this article. If you want to help, great. But if you are just here to soapbox, take it somewhere else. Viriditas (talk) 15:06, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Is Fox News a reliable source on US Human Rights issues?

• Is Fox News a reliable source? Pexise (talk) 19:53, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

I'd say that'd depend on the situation. If it's a talk or political commentary show, it would likely be questionable as a source (as any talk show, such as Lou Dobbs or Glen Beck on CNN, would be). If it's regarding an event that they cover on their regular news-casts, I don't think there would be any basis in saying it's less reliable than any other news program, however you could probably find another ("less polarizing") source for such "cookie cutter" news (ie CNN or the BBC). Are you disputing a particular reference? TastyCakes (talk) 20:07, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the use of this source, from the FNC website: Pexise (talk) 20:24, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Its fine. Yes, Fox News is often accused of a conservative bias. Virtually every American news source has been accused of bias, including CNN and MSNBC. We can't rule them all out. Unless you can point out anything wrong with the article in question, it should stay, unless you can find another source. Joker1189 (talk) 20:32, 30 April 2009 (UTC) Joker1189 (talk) 20:32, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

I agree, that story looks like a reliable source to me. It refers to statements made by relevant people, and there's no basis for suspecting any of it is made up. TastyCakes (talk) 20:37, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Personally, I think the article is in danger of recentism regarding this issue. TastyCakes (talk) 20:39, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

I agree - I would like to see another source to back up these claims. Also, how reliable is an un-named US official? Pexise (talk) 20:47, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

That's a good question, I don't know if Misplaced Pages has any guidelines regarding publications quoting unnamed sources. I suspect if anything it'll be something not particularly helpful, like it being decided on a case by case basis. TastyCakes (talk) 20:53, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

I've posted the question on the Reliable sources noticeboard. Conclusion so far is that "As for the Fox News article, I suppose there would be nothing wrong with using it to verify a statement that Fox News disagrees with the CIA about how many times the CIA waterboarded detainees." Pexise (talk) 20:57, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Unless your willing to not use sources from MSNBC and CNN, this whole discussion should end. --Rockstone35 (talk) 23:05, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

That's irrelevant. Quoting "an unnamed U.S. official" in a report attributed to FNC, is not aceptable, and does not meet the "reliable source" criteria by any stretch of the imagination. The statement and source should be removed. We do not quote "unnamed" officials in encyclopedia articles, and we most certainly do not use Fox News when we do. Viriditas (talk) 05:25, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Fox News has a vetting process for sources, and meets the standards for "reliable source" as defined under Misplaced Pages policy as a mainstream news organization. This is under discussion right now at . As the author should also note, reporters often do not "name" their sources, and when a NY Times Reporter went to jail for not naming hers, some thought it a "human rights" violation. I would suggest, rather than engage in this fruitless "subjective source" debate, you merely point out what countering sources said. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:18, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

I'll add that the initial reports on waterboarding from ABCNews were from unnamed CIA personnel. If we're going to dispose of everything not linked to a named source then we have a lot of work to do throwing more things out.

Viriditas also added information from the Katrina section from the Institute for Southern Studies that he identifies as "a nonpartisan research center." Well, they may have to call themselves "nonpartisan" for tax reasons, but they're not unbiased by any stretch of the imagination. Their article calls them progressive. They're off-the-charts.

I'm not in favor of getting rid of those left-wing sources as long as they're identified. As I often say, I don't want these views to be forgotten the way the they've been allowed to disappear in the past.

People who don't think FoxNews can be used as a reliable source need to go to dKosopedia.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 16:15, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

No, the source that is used, the business newspaper, New Orleans CityBusiness, calls the Institute for Southern Studies "nonpartisan". People who think that Fox News is considered a "reliable source" have the burden of proof to demonstrate that it meets the criteria, not only for Misplaced Pages, but for the topic itself. We do not inject disputed and controversial content based on anonymous sources into an encyclopedia, merely because a news outlet with a history of poor fact-checking and partisan bias says so. You need to find a second source that supports the material without relying on anonymity, and you need to show that the source is relevant to the topic. Viriditas (talk) 23:38, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Is Fox News a reliable source on US Human Rights issues? Those who claim it is need to show that the specific source in question meets the criteria. Please do so, now. Viriditas (talk) 23:45, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

• Yes. It is a mainstream media outlet with a vetting process and easily meets WP's definition on this basis. People who think that Fox News is not considered a "reliable source" have the burden of proof to demonstrate that it does not meet this criteria, not only for Misplaced Pages, but for the topic itself. If you have any facts aside from the arguments I have seen here showing it is not a reliable source, please provide them now. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 14:23, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Sorry, but that's not how it works, nor is that the only criterion for inclusion. First, there is a great deal of evidence that suggests that Fox News is not reliable. Second, you need to be able to show that the author of the article is considered an authority on the topic. Third, the material in question should be easily verified in other news reports by competing media outlets. Fourth, the source cited in the article is "anonymous" and is being used by Fox News to directly challenge a story that appeared in the New York Times. By so doing, Fox News is making an extraordinary claim: Sheikh Mohammed was not waterboarded 183 times. And yet, when one reads the story, one realizes that there is no evidence for this extraordinary claim, other than than the authority of Fox News itself who tells us we must believe them because an anonymous person said so. Meanwhile, we have a memo from the Bush administration that says Khalid Sheikh Mohammed was waterboarded 183 times in March 2003, and we have multiple news outlets reporting it -- except Fox News. What does that tell you? Viriditas (talk) 14:41, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

FoxNews is a reliable source. The reporter was a real reporter and not one of their commentators. What matters is that a real reporter for a reliable source can be trusted to have had contacts with a government official.

This is no different than how we got our first information on EIT. It came from an ABC News reporter who had met with an unnamed CIA official. We could have doubted his information, too, but there was no reasonable doubt that the ABC News reporter did indeed meet with a CIA official, and that the CIA official was making that claim. It was quite proper to put such a claim here as long as we attribute it to an unnamed source for ABC News.

Your distrust of FoxNews is no different than others' distrust of sources like MSNBC or the Guardian (often called "al-Guardian") or the Institute for Southern Studies.

On the Institute for Southern Studies, yes it's "nonpartisan." They have to say that for tax reasons. But it's run by Julian Bond, after all. To describe them as "nonpartisan" is like describing the Christian Coalition as "nonpartisan." That's also true, but we wouldn't describe them here that way lest some reader get the idea that they're unbiased.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 15:17, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Please show me a reliable news source other than Fox News that has attacked the New York Times article and the Bush memo. Please explain why only Fox News is claiming that an "anonymous" source told them that Sheikh Mohammed was not waterboarded 183 times. When only one news source challenges all the others, and when they use "anonymous" evidence to do it, they must be discounted. Furthermore, Fox News has a long and sordid record of poor fact-checking and distorting news stories for political gain. In an encyclopedia that uses the best sources avaialable, they cannot be taken seriously. Now, show me a reliable source other than Fox News that has challenged the memo. Show it to me now. Viriditas (talk) 15:22, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

A "great deal of evidence Fox News is not reliable?" Please share with us your "evidence". Thanks a lot.Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:19, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Fox News Channel controversies. Now please stop changing the subject. Viriditas (talk) 15:23, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

And if you'll note, there are also articles on these topics:

• BBC controversies
• CBS News#Controversies
• CNN controversies
• United States journalism scandals

Nor does it end there:

• Associated Press#Controversies
• 2006 Lebanon War photographs controversies
• Walter Duranty (who could be the biggest of journalism's embarrassment)

We could go on and on. Frankly, to put FoxNews beneath regular news sources is something I'd expect from dKosopedia. That's especially so when we consider what we're talking about. If you read the original source, the point FoxNews is making is the more rational one.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 06:24, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Try Outfoxed: Rupert Murdoch's War on Journalism (2004) and this website. Fox News certainly comes at the bottom when we use the word "journalism". These reports show that it is one of the most biased news sources in the world. The transcript for the film is available here. Their entire operation violates the very concept of journalism. Given these and other facts, Fox News does not meet the criteria for a "reliable source", either on Misplaced Pages or anywhere else. If you think they do, then please prove it. The reliable source guideline states that such a source must have a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy. Clearly, Fox News does not. Viriditas (talk) 10:43, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I could easily counter that by directing you to opposing groups like the Media Research Center but I don't see where that gets us -- especially if you seriously believe that any organization run by Julian Bond could be referred to as "nonpartisan" without snickering. You evidently believe all of this stuff.

Any cursory reading of your materials on Outfoxed will bring up the names FAIR, Center for American Progress, and MoveOn. Has it occurred to you how rip-roaringly funny it is to cite them as though they are "objective" judges of character?

BTW: I've read a lot of those links. I'm not at all impressed at how easily it can be taken apart.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 16:26, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

ICRC Report

The ICRC Report does not say that KSM claimed to have only been waterboarded 5 times. What it says is: Mr Khaled Shaik Mohammed gave the following description of this method of ill-treatment, used in his third place of detention: "I would be strapped to a special bed, which can be rotated into a vertical position. A cloth would be placed over my face. Watter was then poured onto the cloth by one of the guards so that I could not breathe. This obviously could only be done for one or two minutes at a time. The cloth was then removed and the bed was put into a vertical position. The whole process was then repeated during about 1 hour". The procedure was applied during five different sessions during the first month of interrogation in his third place of detention. Dlabtot (talk) 22:33, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

To clarify, yes, he did state 'five occasions' but the claim that this 'conflicts' with the torture memo footnote is simply a false claim made by Fox News. The footnote does not say 183 occasions or 183 sessions. The footnote says: The CIA used the waterboard "at least 83 times during August 2002" in the interrogation of Zubaydah (IG Report at 90), and 183 times during March 2003 in the interrogation of KSM, (see id. at 91). The plain meaning is that the CIA used the waterboard 183 times during 5 sessions. There is absolutely no conflict. Dlabtot (talk) 23:07, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

It all comes down to semantics if you ask me. You can make the case for either interpretation. Personally, when I first heard 183 times, I thought of 183 sessions. I personally think it makes more sense to speak in terms of sessions. It's easier to make the mistake of believing '183 times' means '183 sessions', not '183 applications', because that's how we tend to interpret things. If I told you "My wife cheated on me two times", you'd be thinking in terms of men, or maybe instances, but certainly not in terms of orgasms. If I said "My brother cheated on a test three times", you're definitely not in thinking in terms of specific questions. When it comes to torture, I think we tend to view a torture session as one "unit" of torture. Let's be honest, if John McCain said the North Koreans tortured him twenty times, and it turned out it was applied in less than fifteen minutes, the American people would feel gipped. But that's just my opinion. Honestly, the thing to do is to keep the source, but make it clearer what it's actually indicating. Joker1189 (talk) 19:53, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

It obviously needed some more clarity, but the FoxNews story explains what had previously been confusing.

The line we have about "This may have gone beyond even what was allowed by the CIA's own directives" shows that some people believed "times" meant "sessions".

Here's a bigger excerpt from the original document:

During a session, water may be applied up to six times for ten seconds or longer (but never more than 40 seconds). In a 24-hour period, a detainee may be subjected to up to twelve minutes of water application. See id. at 42. Additionally, the waterboard may be used on as many as five days during a 30-day approval period. ... The CIA used the waterboard "at least 83 times during August 2002" in the interrogation of Zubaydah, IG Report at 90, and 183 times during March 2003 in the interrogation of KSM, see id, at 91. (page 37)

Clearly, the word "times" is not the same thing as sessions. That fits the meaning of Fox's U.S. source.

BTW: This bit about FoxNews helps to illustrate our POV problem. It's one thing to dislike them but it's quite another to think it's normal to regard them as an automatically unacceptable source for WP. Conservatives sneer at "al-Guardian" in much the same way but I don't see anyone saying we should exclude them.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 03:50, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

If we thought of 'times' to mean 'applications', the BBC would have us belief that CIA directives state water-boarding can be used less than two minutes a day. It's reasonable to believe then, that at least once the media used 'times' with the explicit belief it referred to number of sessions, not applications. I was apathetic before, but now I have to agree. The source should stay. Joker1189 (talk) 17:38, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

• Here's a suggestion - Try compromise and put BOTH sources. Misplaced Pages is a not a battlefield. This is not about putting the source that supports an underlying belief, this is about neutrality. Misplaced Pages is not a battlefield. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:48, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Counter-suggestion: Not all sources are equivalent, and not all POV need to be represented. Viriditas (talk) 23:42, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Is this Article about Human Rights in the United States?

Just checking, because most of it appears to reflect either conspiracy theory of the first order (Hurricane Katrina disastor response a violation of human rights), or about human rights OF the United States outside of the United States. I would suggest paring this down to get rid of the Katrina portion, and eliminating most of the items regarding human rights outside of the United States as being unrelated to the topic at hand.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 14:28, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

This is true. Although you can push US army bases on foreign soil to be also in the US, if you wanted to. Sceptre 15:05, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

On the contrary, it is not remotely true in this universe. There are close to a thousand reliable sources on the topic of Hurricane Katrina and human rights, and it's been addressed in multiple reports by research centers and think tanks, the United Nations, and NGOs since 2006, and is still under discussion by those groups. Ignorance is not a valid rationale. Viriditas (talk) 23:43, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for your thoughts. I have edited the sections you provided on euthanasia because this was a private act by doctors at non-state hospitals, and was not reflective of state action. Including it is akin to accusing the UK of a human rights violation when one of its citizens kills another citizen during a confrontation. And while I realize that these matters are of some importance to you, please be advised that civility is taken rather seriously in this project. Keep your comments civil. I am editing your comments on that basis. Kindly refrain from such acts in the future.

Consider this your first and last warning. Do not edit my comments again like you did here. My comments were directly addressing the argument. Per Talk_page_guidelines#Editing_comments, do not strike out or delete the comments of other editors without their permission. Viriditas (talk) 08:32, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

The human rights stance on Hurricane Katrine stems from a strained reading of the U.N. Guiding Principles on Internal Displacement, which provides that governments are responsible for preventingand avoiding conditions that might lead to displacement of persons, and for taking all measures possible to minimize displacement and its adverse effects. Under this theory, the US Army Corps of Engineers failed to meet this obligation by enforcing and/or re-building levees in New Orleans. The guiding principles also state a national governments’ obligations to protect people during displacement,regardless of whether that displacement is due to conflict or disaster. The Principles guarantee, among other things, the human right to dignity, security, liberty of movement, and respect of family life. They also forbid discrimination of any sort, whether it be on the basis of race, language, national origin, legal or social status, age, disability, or property. It is alleged that the US failed to meet this guiding principle when people without automobiles were not evacuated, and the majority of these individuals were black and/or the elderly. Prisoners were left behind in jails when cowardly guards fled their posts. The Guiding Principles obligate governments to provide humanitarian assistance to internally displaced persons in accordance with the principles of humanity and impartiality and without discrimination. They statethat international humanitarian organizations and other appropriate actors have the right to offer assistance and that consent to do so shall not be withheld—especially when authorities are unable or unwilling to provide the needed assistance themselves. They also mandate that international humanitarian organizations offering assistance are obligated to protect the human rights of IDPs. It is alleged that principles were not always honored in the wake of Hurricane Katrina because of fraud by private contractors, and refusal to accept aid from foreign governments, who offered medical aid and equipment, as well as the mismanagement of the American Red Cross in assisting with efforts. Other points include the cost of housing, medical care expenses, etc. Do we now have it all straight?]

The problem you have is rather obvious as the United States is a Federal Democracy, not a unitarian form of government. Government is shared in this case on three levels - municipal, state and federal. Each layer of government has a different job in disastor assistance. Municipal government normally provides the manpower and has jurisdiction over the means of providing logistics and evacuation plans from its jurisdiction. State government has, under the US constitution, primary jurisdiction over the health and welfare of its citizens. The federal government provides the monetary considerations and additional resources to assist in disastor relief. In this case, the first line of defense, the municpal government, fell apart, which meant that contray to their own evacuation plans, they failed to bus their own citizens without automonbiles out of the city. Instead, lines of busses were left in the city. The guards at the prions you identify were municipal employees, and they abandoned their posts. The police force left. The next line was the State of Louisiana. Under law, the state has the primary power to assist its own municplities. The State failed. Once the State failed, the State then requests "Relief Disastor Assistance" from the federal government, which has to be invited into the territory of the "sovereign" state. Once requested, the federal government then declares the area in question a Federal Disastor Area, and FEMA enters the picture. In other words, the role of making such a request for federal aid and assistance falls to the Governor of the State. In this case it was Blanco, who dragged her feet for days.] The result was an epic breakdown in leadership on all levsl of government. Bush could have declared martial law in the early hours, but that would most likely have lead to a separate human rights violation section. Once the federal government was allowed into the city, they engaged in rescue efforts and other steps to ensure food, medical care and other steps were taken for the remaining citizens. Couyld it have been done better? Certainly, but this particular disastor engulfed an area roughly the size of the United Kingdom, not just New Orleans. the entire number displaced? 400,000. ] What does that mean? Take the entire population of Baltimore City, and find them new homes. Even the guidelines you cite to at Principle 7, subparagraph 2 state: "The authorities undertaking such displacement shall ensure, to the greatest practicable extent, that proper accommodation is provided to the displaced persons, that such displacements are effected in satisfactory conditions of safety, nutrition, health and hygiene, and that members of the same family are not separated". I would suggest that housing and assistance for such a number of people was provided "to the greatest extent practicable".

In conclusion, I don't think Hurricane Katrina was a Human Rights violation, I think it was a human disastor generally. It showed the pitfalls of lousy local leaders coupled with a gigantic natural disastor of biblical proportions that overwhelmed the federal government. I think its inclusion in this article is seriously misplaced, and that you are stretching by including it. It deserves its own article, but is not an example of a human rights violation in the United States. Thank you. --Yachtsman1 (talk) 05:17, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Please provide a single reliable source that best represents your view, using the term "human rights". Please note, interpreting primary sources in a controversial or disputed article, requires good secondary sources that portray the point drawn from the primary source. If this isn't clear, please request help on the reliable sources noticeboard. Viriditas (talk) 08:41, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

I have provided the sources, and they make the same points. They are relied upon extensively, and linked. If it is your contention that these sources are "unreliable", please provide specific examples of why you so contend. If it is your contention that they do not support my argument, please provide specific examples of why you so contend. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 14:26, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

That's not how we use sources on Misplaced Pages, and if you still don't understand your problem, please contact the reliable sources noticeboard. Let's make this very simple. Please provide one source that supports your claim that the U.S. response to Hurricane Katrina did not violate human rights. Just one source please. Or, to make this even easier for you, provide just one source that criticizes the conclusions in dispute. Can you do that? Viriditas (talk) 14:45, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

We also don't prove negatives, on wikipedia or anywhere else. The sources I provide do not even mention the term. For a look at the sources, "click" on the links above. I have also separately responded on the NPOV board, but then again, you already knew that.Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:15, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Please provide one source that directly addresses or challenges any of the conclusions or statements reached in the Katrina section. If you cannot, then you must drop your dispute. Viriditas (talk) 15:17, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Let me see if I follow this logic - You are asking me for a source that makes a negative claim? My sources already provided already do that rather amply because they point to leadership failure, and not your claim of discrimination, as the cause of the misery. Please provide me with one source, just one, that shows positively that discrimination was the underlying reason for the failure in response time. Thanks a bunch.Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:28, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

None of the sources you "provided" have addressed the topic. To refresh your frazzled memory, you are the one that has made negative claims. You said, "I don't think Hurricane Katrina was a Human Rights violation." Great, now show sources that support that claim. You can't. Instead, you show sources that don't discuss the topic. Either address my request, or I will chalk this up to disruptive behavior on your part. You maintain that "the human rights stance on Hurricane Katrine stems from a strained reading of the U.N. Guiding Principles on Internal Displacement." Now, prove it with sources that directly address your claims. You can't because they don't exist. Original research is not allowed, so stop interpreting multiple sources to say what they don't say. Put up or shut up. Answer the question. Viriditas (talk) 15:34, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't have time to work this in right now, but I suggest taking a look at this from Popular Mechanics.

Bumbling by top disaster-management officials fueled a perception of general inaction, one that was compounded by impassioned news anchors. In fact, the response to Hurricane Katrina was by far the largest--and fastest-rescue effort in U.S. history, with nearly 100,000 emergency personnel arriving on the scene within three days of the storm's landfall.

Dozens of National Guard and Coast Guard helicopters flew rescue operations that first day--some just 2 hours after Katrina hit the coast. Hoistless Army helicopters improvised rescues, carefully hovering on rooftops to pick up survivors. On the ground, "guardsmen had to chop their way through, moving trees and recreating roadways," says Jack Harrison of the National Guard. By the end of the week, 50,000 National Guard troops in the Gulf Coast region had saved 17,000 people; 4000 Coast Guard personnel saved more than 33,000.

These units had help from local, state and national responders, including five helicopters from the Navy ship Bataan and choppers from the Air Force and police. The Louisiana Department of Wildlife and Fisheries dispatched 250 agents in boats. The Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA), state police and sheriffs' departments launched rescue flotillas. By Wednesday morning, volunteers and national teams joined the effort, including eight units from California's Swift Water Rescue. By Sept. 8, the waterborne operation had rescued 20,000.

While the press focused on FEMA's shortcomings, this broad array of local, state and national responders pulled off an extraordinary success--especially given the huge area devastated by the storm. Computer simulations of a Katrina-strength hurricane had estimated a worst-case-scenario death toll of more than 60,000 people in Louisiana. The actual number was 1077 in that state. (emphasis mine)

People who don't think the U.S. government responded strongly to this disaster just hadn't considered (or, more likely, chose to ignore) its vast scope.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 06:39, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Great. Find a reliable source that says that as a rebuttal to those who make claims about human rights violations. Until you do that, this thread is closed. Viriditas (talk) 00:10, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I think you've said it all.

It would be interesting to see if the other editors would agree with you on that. Frankly, I'd be surprised if even those who'd otherwise generally share your perspective would go that far.

Until they're willing to admit that they do, this source (which is highly respected and truly non-partisan) does belong here more than the ravings of Julian Bond's outfit.

-- Randy2063 (talk) 20:22, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Justifying the use of the NPOV tag

I would like to see short bullet points listing specific neutrality problems so that I can address them and fix the article. Each point should consist of less than 25 words. Thanks. Viriditas (talk) 15:11, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

The consensus at this point is that the article is not neutral. See supra. If you remove the tag, I will report you for edit warring. This is getting ridiculous. I will be preparing a list of points as to why this article fails neutrality that will be extensive, and I will post it within 24 hours. Be warned, it may say things you disagree with. In light of that fact, I ask that you comply with WP:CIV when reponding to it.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:23, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

I can and will remove the tag if you cannot answer my request to justify its use. Now, please justify the use of the tag with short bullet points explaining how the problem can be fixed. If you refuse to do this, the tag will be removed, and this discussion will be used as evidence. I will not respond your usual list of "extensive" distractions. Talk page etiquette requires short and succinct points that are easy to address with the goal of improving the article. Please reply to my request with a short reply addressing specific neutrality problems in bullet point form. If additional clarification is needed, then a short discussion may take place. Viriditas (talk) 15:29, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

A consensus of one then? Thanks for the confirmation. This will take some time, as this article's problems are huge. As stated, the "bullet point" list you request will be provided.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:34, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

What part of what I'm saying isn't reasonable to you? The tag is used to alert editors to a problem so they can fix it. It isn't used at the personal whim and fancy of POV pushers. If you can't specifically address the neutrality problems that you say exist in simple to understand language, then I can only conclude that they don't exist and the tag should be removed. Viriditas (talk) 15:37, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

The only true POV pusher I have seen around here is you. Neutrality has been disputed above by numerous posters, and they have posted on it extensively. Where would you like me to start my bullet list? The content forks for human rights violation outside of the United States, or the undue weight portion of the article? Please let me know. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 15:42, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Personal attacks, now? Tsk, tsk. I thought for sure I was going to get a few more false accusations of uncivil behavior before you started to show your true colors. To refresh your memory again: You deleted material from the article. I restored it with sources and expanded it. That is not "POV pushing"; it's the very definition of good editing. In other words, I cleaned up after your POV pushing by representing the subject you falsely claimed did not exist. Is that clear? You can start your bullet list right below here. Viriditas (talk) 15:51, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Personal attacks are your stock in trade, so it would make sense you would direct my attention to them if they appear, or play the victim when they don't. I merely state the obvious, no attack necessary. Your position clearly discounts any countering opinion as "wrong" and advocates your own position as "right". It ignores neutrality, which is the preferred "pov". As stated, it will be up in the next day. Some of us have to work.Yachtsman1 (talk) 16:00, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

I thought you were working. More personal attacks? Tsk, tsk. I await your justification for your use of the NPOV tag, which I suspect will arrive Real Soon Now. Of course, if it doesn't, I'll just remove the tag. Viriditas (talk) 16:02, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

And if you remove the tag, I will simply re-add it, and await a consensus of more than you to counter the tag. Until that happy moment, I remain --Yachtsman1 (talk) 16:08, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

That's not how it works. The person adding the tag has to use the talk page to explain how the tag can be removed, and the explanation must be reasonable and easy to understand. It should also entail both a quick-fix solution and a long-term approach. This is because tag warring is a common tactic used by POV pushers to hold articles hostage, and they will often move the goal posts depending on which way the wind blows. Viriditas (talk) 16:11, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

← Guys. Let's take a step back. Fighting over an NPOV tag is not a good way for anyone to spend their time. Leaving aside some of the more heated rhetoric, the initial request is a reasonable one. It may help to reboot the conversation and focus it on specific issues of article content and sourcing. Yachtsman1, if you see a huge number of NPOV issues, it will still be helpful to break the problem down into individual, bite-sized pieces and tackle them one-by-one. Identify what you believe is the biggest NPOV issue (Katrina?) and briefly list the specific issues you see with it. Even if you have done this before, in the reams of discussion above, it will be helpful to do it again in a focused and (ideally) dispassionate manner. The most constructive approach of all would be to simultaneously propose alternate wording that you believe would better reflect NPOV. MastCell  16:23, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Cutpasted from ANI: I believe that most of the article is neutral. However, there are a few snags with the article. The Katrina section needs more citations; the whole first half of the first paragraph is unsourced, including a quote by a living person. Sorensen's quote needs context as to when and why it was said, and the whole waterboarding section needs copyediting. And finally, the Gitmo section needs a massive overhaul, because the whole section is all over the place, some facts don't have citation, etc. Sceptre 16:04, 20 May 2009 (UTC) Sceptre 16:38, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Sceptre, can you tag the issues you note? I would like to fix them, if it is possible. Viriditas (talk) 08:12, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Comment by Mosedschurte

This article is almost a comedic riot of silliness (and quite embarrassing for Misplaced Pages). I had no idea it existed until seeing its mention on the NPOV board. It includes:

• Discussions of "human rights" outside the U.S. (directly contravening its title), such as actions in Iraq by the U.S. Army.
• A discussion of U.S. workers working longer hours than in some other countries (seriously, this is actually shoehorned into this article)
• A discussion of the simple employment-at-will legal existence (which exists in almost every country on earth) -- the idea of which in a purported "human rights" article is so laughable, this alone is embarrassing to Misplaced Pages
• A generalized sentence of "treatment of autistics" (as if this were relevant to "human rights")
• Incredible WP:Undue Weight negative mentions of individual cases heavily weighting in sections of the article addresssing where the United States literally leads the world (by a wide margin), such as Freedom of Expression.
• Despite that the United States has the world's #1 most aggressive civil recourse system for gender and racial discrimination (by a huge margin, by the way, nothing else in the world is even in the ballpark of the massive Title VII judgments available to U.S. plaintiffs in these cases), literally no mention of this is made (????), nor any mention of the massive (compared to every other country no the planet) U.S. racial and gender preferences for minorities and women, with, instead, WP:Undue Weight given to every prior historical negative.
• It -- hold the laughs -- actually contains an entire section on the rescue efforts for Hurricane Katrina (where half of an entire city under sea level was flooded via levy breaks) as a "human rights" violation. Even were this addressed as a "human rights violation" in reports of serious note, a section on it is beyond laughable in the WP:Undue Weight category, especially given that few (if any) countries in the world could have even mounted the size of rescue efforts put forth (not that they didn't have problems). Honestly, this section was so ridiculously out of place in a purportedly Encylopedic article on "Human Rights" for a nation of 300 million people that I though at one point that it was going to quote Kanye West.
• The "International Human Rights" section is virtual archetypal example of POV editing and WP:Undue Weight in a Misplaced Pages article section. They should freeze that text and put it somewhere as an exemplary how-not-to-edit blockquote. For example, forget just being a major actor, the United States has actually literally led the world in funding and providing professionals for the major war crimes tribunals addressing the Rwandan Genocide and the Bosnian Genocide (never mind the Nuremberg Trials et al.); is the largest funder of UN peacekeeping troops; led the NATO action stopping the Slobodan Milošević repression of ethinc Albanaians in Kosovo; was the leader attempting to get U.N action to stop the Darfur massacres; was the primary actor (or close thereto) in opposing the two biggest human rights violators in world history (Adolph Hitler and Joseph Stalin); has given literally billions of dollars a year for decades -- the world leader by far -- in aid to address dictator-caused famines and other human rights abuses around the world; has effectively led the push against the most ghastly police state in the world today (North Korea); the list goes on even too long to begin to recount the leadership in this arena. Yet virtually none of this is mentioned, with huge weight being given to every purported negative international human rights source in existence. The end reading of which is utterly laughable as a section.

In short, it's a virtual panoply of POV-constructed sections. It would take probably weeks to go through this article with the major comparative sources on recourse and enforcement of relevant rules regarding comparisons to other countries to write anything remotely NPOV. Right now, it looks like something that could have been written by the heavily discredited (to put it mildly) UN "Human Right Commission" headed by such NPOV/Human rights stalwarts as Syria and Libya attempting to find anything to spin negatively to blow grossly out of proportion. Mosedschurte (talk) 05:56, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Up at bat, eh? Welcome. Your understanding of the concept of "undue weight" appears to be in serious error. Please actually read the policy you linked to above. I'm going to start by addressing your assessment of the Katrina section. You claim that this section is lacking "reports of serious note". Could you describe what you mean? These are good sources that describe the issue. You seem to be proposing that anything negative about the U.S. human rights record should be removed, and only pro-U.S. sources should be used. Is that a correct observation of your position? If so, it goes against the very notion of NPOV. I would like a response from you, Mosedschurte, and not the predicted tag-team response from the usual suspects I expect, having seen this same charade play out for several years now. In other words, to focus on this one point, what would an acceptable human rights section on Katrina look like? Please keep WP:ENEMY in mind when you compose your reply. Thanks. Viriditas (talk) 06:46, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "You seem to be proposing that anything negative about the U.S. human rights record should be removed, and only pro-U.S. sources should be used. Is that a correct observation of your position?"

Is that a joke? I didn't mention a single "pro-U.S." source in my entire post. This appears to be some sort of stock response.

See my comments at the bottom. All discussion of human rights advancement is connected at the hip with an anlysis of critical and what you would call "negative" portrayal. Do you understand this or do I need to explain it to you further? Viriditas (talk) 07:20, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "In other words, to focus on this one point, what would an acceptable human rights section on Katrina look like?"

This is beyond easy. To begin with, as the most simple of editing decisions, there would simply not be an ENTIRE SECTION in an article "Human Rights in the United States" devoted to the rescue efforts for a single hurricane in the year 2005. This could not be more straight forward in an article of this breadth of scope on a country of 300 million people with a 200+ year history. Keep in mind that not only is there, right now, NOT a section in the International Human Rights section on, say,-- to give just ONE example -- the U.S. taking the lead in the Nuremberg Trials, prosecuting the worst violations of human rights in world history, but it may not even be mentioned in the entire article. Yet there is an entire section on the rescue efforts in a single hurricane in an article purporting to address "Human Rights". To even type as much generates laughs. This does not reflect the balance of secondary sources on these matters, to put it mildly (rather, it would be about 1,000-to-1 the opposite direction).

Considering the attention this subject has received from human rights organizations and nonpartisan groups, there are enough secondary sources to describe it in its own section, however it might be viewed as more balanced (from your POV) if related historical rights issues were included. So, the answer is not to delete it but to expand it. This isn't the first time this has happened, and there are other related issues, such as environmental justice and environmental racism that are connected. Viriditas (talk) 07:20, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "the predicted tag-team response from the usual suspects I expect, having seen this same charade play out for several years now.""Charade"? Pointing out the rather comical POV and gross WP:Undue Weight issues herein.

I disagree. You want to paint a rosy picture of the U.S. that is divorced from reality, when in fact, history shows that all human rights have been fought for and won by people who have criticized the status quo. No human rights have been given to anyone. Viriditas (talk) 07:20, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I think he's saying that we're using too many negative sources, not that we should remain completely positive. Which is understandable: humans by nature tend to write more in criticism than in praise. Sceptre 07:01, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes. On a more very basic Misplaced Pages editing note, the weight devoted to negative (and irrelevant given the article scope) text is WELL, WELL beyond undue given the breadth of sources on the history overall in the sections addressed herein. I just pointed out a few very basic areas that jump off the page given even just a very rudimentary knowledge of world history and U.S. legal history.Mosedschurte (talk) 07:10, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I recently added three sources to the further reading section (a three volume set) that celebrate the role of the U.S. in promoting human rights at home and around the world. It should be used and added to the article. The history of human rights advancement in the U.S. comes in the wake of negative attention. You can see this when you look at the overall picture. So, the problem isn't the use of negative sources, but how we present the positive outcome, if there is one. Mosedschurte, do you understand that the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. has come out of the criticism of negative incidents? You cannot separate the two, but you can present the problem as a whole. I'm not getting the sense that you understand this. Viriditas (talk) 07:12, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "Mosedschurte, do you understand that the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. has come out of the criticism of negative incidents?"

There seems to be a fundamental misunderstanding of our tasks as Misplaced Pages editors. We as Misplaced Pages editors are not here to "advance human rights in the U.S." through publishing "criticism of negative incidents" on Misplaced Pages.

Rather, we're here to edit articles reflecting the balance of information from reliable sources and magnitude of issues on the articles in which we edit. Skipping over (or spending just a sentence or two on) all of the massive world historical leadership positions taken by the U.S. on literally the largest human rights issues in world history and largest efforts to stop human rights violations worldwide while simultaneously devoting an entire multiparagraph section on, say, rescue efforts regarding one hurricane (presented as a "human rights" violation) is CLEARLY not reflecting the balance of sources and contextual importance of the issues in the article.Mosedschurte (talk) 07:25, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

You seem to be misunderstanding (deliberately or mistakenly) what I have written. To repeat it again for you so that it is perfectly clear: the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. has come out of the criticism of negative incidents. This is a function of history, and does not represent any personal or political POV. It is in fact, reflective of every single source on the subject. Either you are ignoring the history of human rights in the U.S. or you are purposefully skewing an accurate portrayal of the subject. Our job as editors is to write the best article we can, using the best sources (i.e. not Fox News). And, we do not ignore the historical role of human rights in relation to a tragedy like Katrina. We use the best sources we have to represent the topic. If you have sources that challenge this view, then please provide them. Viriditas (talk) 07:34, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

(Outdent)

Re: "To repeat it again for you so that it is perfectly clear: the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. has come out of the criticism of negative incidents. This is function of history, and does not represent any personal or political POV."

But it's simply NOT our job as Misplaced Pages editors to undertake the publication of this criticism for such advancement.

Rather, it is to reflect the sources and events in context. For example, suffice to say that the number of sources about, say, the U.S. leadership at the Nuremberg Trials, prosecuting the Rwandan Genocide, leading the opposition to the worst human rights abusers in history such as Joseph Stalin, leading in U.N. Peacekeeping funding to stop human rights abuses, the world's #1 most aggressive civil recourse for racial discrimination and gender discrimination in Title VII, one of the most aggressive (if not the most aggressive) Freedom of Expression legal structures in the world, etc. entirely dwarfs the sources of claims that the rescue efforts of a single hurricane in 2005 being a "human rights" violation. Yet, humorously from a Misplaced Pages editors perspective, the latter is actually been given a multi-paragraph section in a "human rights" article while almost none (or maybe none) of the former are even mentioned.

Re: " Our job as editors is to write the best article we can, using the best sources (i.e. not Fox News)."

Fox News? Who has ever mentioned Fox News? As indicated now, you're not even responding to discussion, but rather, spouting some sort of political slogans.Mosedschurte (talk) 07:40, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Like I said above, you aren't "getting it", either willfully or not. Thankfully, I can easily prove my point in few words. I'll do it now: If you were to rewrite this article, and as your first step. you were to create an outline, what subtopics would the outline contain? Please note, your entire outline would have a single theme: the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. arising out of the criticism of negative incidents. Do you disagree? Then provide an outline that does not show this. You cannot. This is because it is a historical fact reflected by all of the sources on the topic. You don't seem to understand this concept. FYI... Fox News is a topic of ongoing discussion several threads up. It might help to familiarize yourself with the talk page instead of making ignorant accusations. I can't help but notice that you are repeatedly trying to hijack this thread by changing the subject. In case you have forgotten, the topic is human rights in the United States. Please confine your discussion to that topic. Viriditas (talk) 07:49, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "Thankfully, I can easily prove my point in few words. I'll do it now: If you were to rewrite this article, and as your first step. you were to create an outline, what subtopics would the outline contain? Please note, your entire outline would have a single theme: the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. arising out of the criticism of negative incidents."

--Well, that pretty much does it for reasonable non-silly discussion. You just asked a question to "prove your point", then hilariously answered it yourself re what "I'd do."

--Perhaps this is in indication as to why this article is in such a laughable state in terms of POV and WP:Undue Weight.Mosedschurte (talk) 07:57, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

No response to my challenge other than a personal attack? Tsk, tsk, it's too early for that. Considering that my first major edit to this article was at 05:18, 19 May 2009, and only to the Katrina section, I'm afraid you can't blame me for the problems in this article. In the past, I have tried to mediate disputes on this page, and I've made reverts to blankings by Raggz et al. but I haven't really participated in this article before now. But, please, propose your outline. If you were to rewrite this article, how would you do it? Viriditas (talk) 08:03, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Not only have I not seen a single personal attack towards Viriditas, I have not seen a single attempt to reach a conensus by this editor either. If you can work with others, great, if not, your present course of conduct is hardly constructive. Please try to work to each a consensus on the POV problems in this article, and stop with the non sequitors. Thank you for your anticipated cooperation.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 21:16, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Please stop addressing the editor and address the questions asked of you. You and Mosedschurte have been unable to address any questions asked of you. All you do is attack editors. Your behavior is transparent and needs to stop. Your threats in the above thread to continue edit warring over the POV tag, even when requests for justification have been made, are disruptive. Propose solutions or don't edit here. Viriditas (talk) 21:40, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

As I have been instructed not to address the above-editor, I will therefore not directly address the editor. I concur with Mosedschurte on the basis of the reasons he has provided. I also agree with the other editors on this thread, including Joker and Randy, that the article in question violates neutrality. There is a consensus that this is the case, for the reasons provided by all of us. As it stands, the article requires clean up. I have accomplished the following based on consensus:

• Reworked the introduction to reflect the article's content, and to ensure neutrality;
• I have added a piece in the race section displaying that Obama has been voted in as president, and linked to one of his speeches as a cite;
• I have proposed the elimination of US human rights outside of the United States as a content fork and as being inapplicable to the subject of human rights in the United States;
• I have proposed elimination of the Hurricane Katrine section of the article as a violation of neutrality, and on the basis of undue weight.

Any other suggestions on improvements to this article from editors I can communicate with directly are appreciated. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:29, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I think all initial points by Mosedschurte are valid and can serve as a basis for improving this article.Biophys (talk) 03:59, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Discussion of human rights outside the U.S.

Mosedschurte objects to this topic, but authors like Michael Ignatieff have covered it in books like American Exceptionalism and Human Rights (2005) and it is an important subtopic. Viriditas (talk) 07:53, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Discussion of U.S. workers working longer hours than other countries

Mosedschurte objects to this topic, but it is an important part of labor rights, a subtopic directly related to human rights in the U.S. Viriditas (talk) 07:56, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

To put it mildly, you're not exactly helping the silliness of your POV and WP:Undue Weight concerns with the commission of subtopics such as this given the many points made above.Mosedschurte (talk) 08:00, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Can you address this discussion without personal attacks? Try it. Do you need me to find you sources on labor rights as human rights in the U.S. or can you find them yourself? Do you understand the concept of WP:ENEMY? Do you understand that we need to be able to write articles that do not represent our personal POV? Is any of this making sense to you? Viriditas (talk) 08:05, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

What's the mean and standard deviation for hours per week? If it's within a standard deviation, then criticism and praise should be balanced. Sceptre 18:26, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Viriditas (talk) 21:37, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Treatment of autistics

Mosedschurte objects to this topic, but it is an important component of the disability rights movement, a subtopic of human rights in the U.S. Viriditas (talk) 07:58, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I'd agree that autism could be considered part of the disability rights movement. That said, the current sourcing is poor. The article states that the "United States Government currently is heavily criticized for it's poor treatment of autistics, especially in the fields of employment." OK - but the cited source is a handful of letters to the editor of the Washington Post, in response to an op-ed column. That's not what I would call evidence of "heavy criticism", especially compared to the sourcing for other items (U.N. reports, scholarly works, etc). Maybe we can find a better source? MastCell  16:55, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. The original editor did not pay any attention to the human rights component. Glancing at Gbooks, there are a number of good sources on this, even one which describes both sides of the argument.(Mesibov et al. 1997) One important point is whether the Convention on the Rights of Persons with Disabilities comes into play here. Viriditas (talk) 22:03, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Problems

I'm probably not the only one to weigh in on this, but I'll try to be specific

• Why is there only one blockquote about opposition to Universal healthcare, that hardly covers the scope of the opposition's position.
• I can tell the person who wrote the death penalty section is against it, so who is for it and what do they think?
• The prison system section has lots of weasel wording (heck the whole thing uses vague terms like "some" and "social critics"
• Additionally, the prison system is nothing but condemnation, are there steps being taken to fix the problems, reasons for the overcrowding and other problems. Also, does Pelican Bay and others really justify sweeping statements like those used? Isolated incidents are hardly ever representative of a whole (and you must prove they are)
• The next section, what do the police have to say about the situation? Why are isolated incidents used, I've seen cases where officers shot a man over 100 times because "that's all the bullets they had." Does this mean cops go around shooting ppl excessively all over the US?
• A hurricane is never going to have happy results, the section seems to be a little WP:FRINGE.
• For the Human rights treaties not signed or signed but not ratified section, you either need to give a little reasoning and background, or get rid of it. To simply say "they didn't sign it," doesn't give reasoning (and could be implied to be simply they didn't care)
• The entire international human rights section is grossly out of balance. Surely the amount of money we spend, the number of charity organizations that are supported from here, and the work we've done through gov't programs like peace corp warrant more than a paragraph versus 14 paragraphs of things we didn't do or did wrong.

I didn't read the top few sections but really this article focuses on one side of the issue far, far too much. You need to give the other side if you want an WP:NPOV article. Soxwon (talk) 15:05, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Having read just the racial section I must say I'm not impressed. It doesn't even mention the 13th or 15th amendment or even the emancipation proclamation or any of the other positive elements of US history. This is not a list of US sins. I'll read some of the other sections but really, shouldn't the race section have gotten adaquete coverage before moving on to all these things we didn't sign and Katrina? Soxwon (talk) 16:26, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

For the feminism section, what about the National Organization of Women? Soxwon (talk) 17:01, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

For the accused section, Ex Post Facto and Habeas Corpus and the 7th amendment (jury trial)?? Soxwon (talk) 17:08, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Having just run across the article, these were my similar observations in a section above.Mosedschurte (talk) 17:31, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Soxwon, do you think this article is the place to discuss opposition to Universal healthcare? If so, tell me how you would do it. Which human rights-related sources would you use? Are you aware of the human rights issues associated with U.S. prisons? Should the most notable incidents drawn from good sources be used as examples? As for excessive violence from law enforcement in the U.S., have you reviewed the literature? Police brutality and excessive violence in the U.S have been the focus of human rights groups and the UN. What is "fringe" about the Katrina section? Please describe the problem so I can fix it. Finally, has human rights in the U.S. increased or decreased after 9/11? I have more questions, but I would like you to answer those first. Not Mosedschurte, but you, Soxwon. Viriditas (talk) 22:53, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

If you are going to treat this as a POV fork I'll put it up for deletion. You must have BOTH sides fairly represented on any given issue if you are going to include it, or you are going to make it into an attack article. As for Katrina, where should I begin. The fact the majority of it comes from the same two partisan sources, or the fact that the one sentence that doesn't, is completely different than the article it quotes. And btw, how about addressing all of the information that you neglected to mention? Soxwon (talk) 00:30, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I don't know what you are talking about. You must have me confused with someone else. Can you please address my questions? Also, please show that the "majority of it comes from the same two partisan sources". I don't see that at all. Also, please show me specifically how the source differs from the material. These are reasonable questions and should be very easy for you to answer. You say you have a problem with the material. Fine, please show me the problem so I can either fix it or remove it. Viriditas (talk) 01:15, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Katrina

(outdent)Two partisan sources: and . All of the others refer back to these two sources save for the AP article. The AP article does not support the statment made in any way:

The UN Human Rights Committee and other groups allege that these problems reflected racial and economic prejudice; most of those trapped in New Orleans were African-American and poor.

First of all from the article itself: Both experts are independent and unpaid. Secondly if you actually read the article it says that the main problem is that the replacement housing will be at market rate, rather than subsidized. Nowhere does it make sweeping comments about racial and economic prejudice. In short, the paragraph is poorly sourced and POV. Soxwon (talk) 01:23, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

To directly address your points: 1)The secondary source used (New Orleans CityBusiness), describes ISS as "nonpartisan". Are you challenging that statement? If so, what reliable source are you using that calls them "partisan". Please provide it. 2) I see your problem with AP. You failed to actually look at reference 99. Look at it again. There is more than one source being used - there are three, and they all compliment each other. Did you review the other two sources? The source you are referring to is only used to show that, The experts said the U.S. Department of Housing and Urban Development and local governments will violate the human rights of thousands of New Orleans residents by demolishing public housing units. The majority of those affected are black and many were devastated by Hurricane Katrina, they said. That's it. The other two sources support and compliment the material about the "UN Human Rights Committee and other groups allege that these problems reflected racial and economic prejudice." I have it saved offline, so let me pull the quote for you. But more to the point, I'm not clear on what you are challenging. Can you specifically state what you are challenging? The sources appear at the end of the sentence/paragraph per best practices. Are you challenging any part of this statement? If so, please specifically state which part. The UN Human Rights Committee and other groups allege that these problems reflected racial and economic prejudice is referenced to Klapper, Bradley (2006-07-28). "U.N. Panel Takes U.S. to Task Over Katrina". AP Online (The America's Intelligence Wire), and is a news article covering the findings from the UN Human Rights Committee, Concluding Observations on Report of the USA to the Human Rights Committee (July 27, 2006). I'll try and see if I can clear up any of the ambiguities (which you were right to observe) with some kind of cleanup effort. Viriditas (talk) 02:38, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Biophys, I asked you to explain your reasoning at 07:13. You didn't, and at 14:59 you removed the material. This is not how Misplaced Pages works. Please use the talk page. The discussion both on the talk page and on the NPOV noticeboard shows no consensus for removal. Please do not bring your long history of edit warring to Human rights in the United States or act as a proxy for other edit warriors. Thank you. Viriditas (talk) 21:20, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

This has been already discussed (see above). Almost all editors except you suggested this material be removed. It is not notable with regard to human rights. Moreover, all this content can be found in Criticism of government response to Hurricane Katrina, and as such represents POV fork.Biophys (talk) 00:29, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

This is not true. Please provide an actual reason for deletion and diffs of what you claim above. I've asked you to provide an actual reason other than "I don't like it" and I haven't received one. I'm looking at more than a dozen reliable sources on the subject in front of me, consisting of newspaper articles, journal articles, research studies funded by Brookings, reports from the UN, and books about human rights released by academic publishing houses. I'm reading a journal right now that has the entire issue devoted to Katrina. The claim that this is "not notable with regard to human rights" is not true by any stretch of the imagination. If you would please provide with a description of your personal criteria for inclusion, then we can begin to have a discussion. This is a reasonable request. Viriditas (talk) 01:57, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

This has been discussed at length by numerous editors above in many sections discussing its many problems for an article on "human rights" -- they have been raised ad nauseum. The idea that no reason has been given for its deletion was simply false. Numerous editors have given such reasons.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:09, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

No reason has been given for its deletion. This is a true statement. Please provide a reason based on evidence and state your standard for inclusion. This is a reasonable request. I will personally remove the material if anyone can demonstrate a valid reason why it should not be in the article in any form, including a summary style from a new article, which I am in the process of creating. If there is an objection to blockquotes, then I would share that objection and agree that prose supported by secondary sources is favored over large primary source blockquotes. This is why I am creating a new article about this subject. But I expect this information to be in this article in some form (preferably 2-4 paragraphs, possibly intermixed in the racial section, possibly in a different section), and I haven't seen a single argument against inclusion. All I see is the usual supsects handwaving and edit warring. Want me to remove the content? Fine, then convince me based on Misplaced Pages policy and guidelines why it shouldn't appear here. Viriditas (talk) 02:13, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

• Guys, please let's calm down.

• When I looked up human rights aspects of Hurricane Katrina in google books, there were hundreds of hits, including the ones below documenting the involvement of Amnesty International and many other human rights organisations. There are more than 2500 google news hits for "human rights" and "hurricane katrina". These are indications that this has been a major topic. I think we should have brief summary of the issue, with a link to the relevant standalone article. JN466 17:08, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Inappropriate rationale for removal of Katrina section

This edit removing the Katrina section had the edit summary "rm POV fork to Criticism of government response to Hurricane Katrina. Also undue weight. We can not reflect each UN report here."

This edit summary misconstrues the meaning of WP:POV fork. Creating a POV fork means that content (praise or criticism) is deleted from one article but inserted or retained in another related article, creating two articles with different POVs: e.g. one positive, one negative. In this sense, it is the removal of this section which is actually creating a POV fork, by deleting all human rights-related criticism of the Katrina response from this article and retaining it elsewhere.

As for the second part of the argument, We can not reflect each UN report here: given that that the UN did report on this and there was widespread controversy around this topic, I think it is appropriate to include a summary of it in the present article, along with a link to the main article.

Accordingly, I endorse the restoration of the section by Viriditas. JN466 12:16, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

For reference, sources testifying to the importance of the Hurricane Katrina response as a human right issue are easy to find: Greenwood Publishing Group, House Committee Hearing, Columbia University Press, Carolina Academic Press and many many others. JN466 12:40, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Reliable sources

This list is incomplete

Journals

• "Natural Disasters and the Rule of Law". Human Rights: Journal of the Section of Individual Rights & Responsibilities. 33 (4). ABA Publishing. Fall 2006. ISSN 0046-8185. Editorial board This issue has eight articles devoted to a discussion of human rights and Katrina.

News reports

• Alter, Jonathan (2004-09-19). "The Other America". Special Report. Newsweek. Retrieved 2009-05-20.
• "Report says U.S. Katrina response fails to meet its own human rights principles". New Orleans CityBusiness. 2008-01-16. {{cite news}}: |access-date= requires |url= (help); Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
• Klapper, Bradley (2006-07-28). "U.N. Panel Takes U.S. to Task Over Katrina". AP Online. The America's Intelligence Wire. {{cite news}}: |access-date= requires |url= (help); Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
• Sothern, Billy (2006-01-02). "Left to Die". The Nation. pp. 19–22.

Research studies

• "Hurricane Katrina and the Guiding Principles on Internal Displacement" (PDF). Institute for Southern Studies. Jan., 2008. Retrieved 2009-05-18. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
• Goldman, Lynn. Christine Coussens, Institute of Medicine. (2007) Environmental public health impacts of disasters: Hurricane Katrina. National Academies Press. ISBN 0309105005

Books

• Bullard, Robert (2009). Race, Place, and Environmental Justice After Hurricane Katrina. Westview Press. ISBN 0813344247. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |coauthor= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)
• Levitt, Jeremy (2009). Hurricane Katrina: America's Unnatural Disaster. University of Nebraska Press. ISBN 0803217609. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |coauthor= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)
• Bringing Human Rights Home: A History of Human Rights in the United States. Praeger Publishers. 2007. ISBN 027598821X. {{cite book}}: Unknown parameter |editors= ignored (|editor= suggested) (help)

Comments on Reliable sources

If you're going to post "reliable sources" in an effort to support your contention that Katrina belongs here, it might help if you leave out the ones we're going to laugh at.

Jonathan Alter is an opinion columnist. He's well respected, but he's a liberal, and therefore hardly objective when it comes to pointing fingers at the Bush administration. I think it's fine to use him to provide color and context but he doesn't confirm anything.

I guess the AP story on the "U.N. Panel" is about Doudou Diène. He's a Senegalese socialist (who also complained about the Jyllands-Posten Muhammad cartoons controversy, btw). Most U.N. "human rights" sources are hypocrites. Quote him and a lot of readers won't take you seriously. Even so, I don't think his opinion on Katrina, as stated here, is strong enough to be worth mentioning. A recommendation that poor people get jobs in reconstruction is hardly notable.

As I said before, the so-called "non-partisan" Institute for Southern Studies is not an objective source. Anyone who thinks about it is going to click on that link, see it's run by Julian Bond, and they'll know that's not an objective source. Again, the ISS has to call themselves "non-partisan" for tax reasons. It would be as if we referred to the Christian Coalition as "non-partisan." That would technically be true as well, but anyone who reads that would think it was meant to be intentionally deceptive.

New Orleans CityBusiness is just reporting what the ISS had said. From what I've seen, they're not saying they agree.

I don't know why you think this stuff will help. What's to be gained if readers don't take this article seriously? -- Randy2063 (talk) 04:35, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

No offense, but it doesn't sound like you understand how we use sources on Misplaced Pages. If you have a particular question about a source being used or content, then please ask, but your comments above are completely irrelevant. We have a reliable secondary source referring to the ISS as "non-partisan". In order for your claim to have any merit, you would need to provide another reliable source showing that they have been described as "partisan". Do you understand? Your POV does not have any bearing on this topic. We only go by what good sources say. Viriditas (talk) 16:20, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Response by Mosedschurte

In response to my many POV and WP:Undue Weight points above, I received responses from this editor such as:

• "Mosedschurte, do you understand that the positive advancement of human rights in the U.S. has come out of the criticism of negative incidents?" (Viriditas)
• "You seem to be proposing that anything negative about the U.S. human rights record should be removed, and only pro-U.S. sources should be used."(Viriditas)
• "Our job as editors is to write the best article we can, using the best sources (i.e. not Fox News)."(Viriditas)
• "You want to paint a rosy picture of the U.S. that is divorced from reality, when in fact, history shows that all human rights have been fought for and won by people who have criticized the status quo. No human rights have been given to anyone."(Viriditas)

Not exactly building confidence as editing with an NPOV.Mosedschurte (talk) 00:53, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Please stop ignoring my questions per talk page guidelines. Failure to answer them but continuing to make the same points will get you in trouble. I asked you above to provide an outline for a potential rewrite that meets your objections. So far, you have remained silent on the matter, but still show up here to make personal attacks. Your strategy of "scrolling" the discussion off the page with the use of distracting commentary is tiring. Please address the questions asked of you. Viriditas (talk) 01:13, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "Please stop ignoring my questions per talk page guidelines. Failure to answer them but continuing to make the same points will get you in trouble." (Viriditas)

I can't say I'm surprised at threats at this point. If you're going to threaten people in violation of Misplaced Pages policy, try to make it less ineffectual than a threat to get other editors "in trouble" if they "ignor my questions".Mosedschurte (talk) 06:32, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Another personal attack? Please answer the question and get back on topic. Viriditas (talk) 10:29, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

This is again, simply false. Not a single "personal attack" in the comments, and in fact, the last one was just out to point your Misplaced Pages policy violation with a false threat. And yet more deflection, including demands to answer your interrogatories, rather than discussing the glaringly obvious and overwhelming POV and WP:Undue Weight problems editors have pointed out regarding this article.Mosedschurte (talk) 13:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

You've distracted away from the direction with nothing but personal attacks, and all you can do is address the editor, rather than the points raised. Please stop your disruptive behavior. Viriditas (talk) 21:36, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I concur. There has been no attempt to reach a consensus on these topics. Instead, we have denial, and the playing of the victim card. We need to work TOGETHER to reach cosnensus. Unfortunately, Viriditas's hostility towards anyone with a countering point of view is making this difficult. Please try to remain constructive and reach a consensus on how to make this article neutral. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 21:21, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Please, I've seen this little tag-team charade too many times. All I've seen from Mosedschurte and Yachtsman1 are personal attacks, evasions of points, promotion of unreliable sources, and non-neutral edits (see below). Answer the questions asked of you, and address the topic. I've directly addressed the problems raised in this article and I've attempted to help fix them, only to be attacked by you Yachtsman1. If you can't discuss the topic without discussing the editor, then don't edit here. It's that simple. Your little "game" of making a criticism and attacking anyone who responds to it with a tag-team is old and tired, and many editors before you have tried it. None have succeeded. Viriditas (talk) 21:36, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

This is a personal attack, please stop. List your concerns, and then end. Also, please assume good faith as required. Thank you for your anticipated cooperation.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 22:04, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I suggest you address the questions asked of you and stop addressing editors. Your behavior is disruptive and does not help improve the article. I have assumed good faith, until proven otherwise, with your continued attacks above. Please focus on the topic, instead of constantly distracting away from it. This isn't Fox News, where you get to attack people and make stuff up. This is Misplaced Pages. Now, address my questions above. Viriditas (talk) 22:07, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for your post. The "questions" have already been addressed by many editors at this time. See supra. I have also made a fresh review of Misplaced Pages policy, and nowhere does it require me to provide further explanation on a neutrality discussion than what we have here. At this point, we should be trying to reach consensus on how best to achieve neutrality on this article. I would suggest that at this point, you show how us what you propose to improve the article in question so that consensus can be reached. Thank you again. The obvious points that have been made is that we should eliminate undue weight, eliminate human rights outside of the United States, and eliminate the section on Hurricane Katrina as a human rights violation. So far, there are numerous editors who have reached this consensus, and I can omnly count you as in opposition. In a spirit of cooperation and in order to incorporate your views, please provide us with your view on how neutrality can be achieved. Thank you again.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 22:24, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I already have above, and you refused to answer my questions. Right now, I don't consider you to be working in good faith. I consider you to be a hostile, POV pusher who makes personal attacks and distracts from the discussion and is incapable of discussing the topic. This isn't Fox News. This is Misplaced Pages. Viriditas (talk) 22:32, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

And that's your point of view, and that's the problem. You have tarred me with the "Fox News" brush, and you have absolutely not a clue how wrong you are. This is not an election, this is not a war, and this is not a contest of who watches which news outlet. Objectifying your perceived "opponents" with these tactics is terrible form, and uncivil. Just thought you should know. Misplaced Pages is not a battlefield.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 01:04, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Neutrality in the racial section

Mosedschurte, with all your crocodile concerns about neutrality, your most recent changes attempt to show only one side to the history of human rights and race in the United States. Looking at your most recent changes, you deleted material about the African-American Civil Rights Movement, the lack of human rights in the early U.S. in regards to African Americans and Native Americans, and slavery. In fact you skip more than a century of history and start the section in 1964! You finally admit at the end, out of historical and chronological sequence and very briefly, that slavery was legal at one time and Native Americans did not have rights. Is this your idea of neutrality? Which one of these sources even discusses human rights? If this isn't a whitewash, then I have to ask, what is? How is this section neutral? Considering the weight of history and recent events, why are you skipping most of it, and focusing only on the most recent advancements? Viriditas (talk) 22:00, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Current issues

• Deletion of a link to the civil rights movement
• Deletion of the title page to abolitionist Anthony Benezet's book Some Historical Account of Guinea, London, 1788. Benezet and the Quakers organized the first human rights organization in the United States,(Lauren 2003:33) and Mosedschurte deleted this and replaced it with an image of LBJ.
• Condensing 188 years of the history of human rights in the U.S. from 1776-1964 to a very small paragraph at the end of the section out of chronological order, and focusing only on the most recent 45 years.
• Sources: are they actually discussing human rights?

I have to agree (partially) with Viriditas. The pendulum has swung too far and it doesn't show the whole story. The second paragraph is too much 1964. Where is the emancipation proclamation or the 15th amendment. Also where is the Dred Scott decision, Plessy v. Ferguson, or Uncle Tom's Cabin? Soxwon (talk) 22:25, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I've listed some concerns above. Do the sources even discuss human rights? Replacing Benezet with LBJ is way over the top. Viriditas (talk) 22:34, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Complaint dept.

This is apparently Mosedschurte's justification for his edits: On a more very basic Misplaced Pages editing note, the weight devoted to negative (and irrelevant given the article scope) text is WELL, WELL beyond undue given the breadth of sources on the history overall in the sections addressed herein. I just pointed out a few very basic areas that jump off the page given even just a very rudimentary knowledge of world history and U.S. legal history.Mosedschurte (talk) 07:10, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not following that. How is the last 45 years of history more important than 188 years of history from 1776-1964? And how is this "irrelevant"? The truism holds: the people who tend to complain the most about neutrality are the ones who can't adhere to it. Viriditas (talk) 22:14, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

This is a personal attack, please stop. List your concerns, and then end. Also, please assume good faith as required. Thank you for your anticipated cooperation.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 22:03, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Then I suggest you don't understand the definition and use of WP:NPA. What I have written above is not a personal attack in any way. Please contact an administrator to help you understand what I have written. Viriditas (talk) 22:04, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

WP:NPA - "Insulting or disparaging an editor is a personal attack regardless of the manner in which it is done..." I understand this policy quite well, thank you. Please stop violating it.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 22:28, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I can provide many diffs of you doing that right here on this page. Would you like to see them? You've started every personal attack on this page, and when I respond asking you to stop, you turn around and accuse me of making a personal attack. Your disruptive behavior is tired and old and only serves to distract and hijack threads. Go away. Viriditas (talk) 22:36, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Unconstructive recriminations will be ignored. Time to improve the article. I have added the fact that Barrack Obama was elected the first Afircan American president of the United States and links to his inaugural speech from 2009. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 22:50, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Sources have to be about or describe human rights. You cannot just add any source you want or any type of information that supports your POV. Furthermore, the authors have to be fairly competent (journalists, professors, educators, etc.) and cannot be your average Fox News talking head. Viriditas (talk) 22:55, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you again. The POV I want to reach is "neutrality", a balanced approach to the subject at hand. I will use any source I deem appropriate and which is reliable to support that mission. Thank you again for your thoughts.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:17, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, but that is most certainly not how we edit Misplaced Pages. You will not use any source you "deem appropriate". You will use sources that directly address the topic of human rights in the United States, and if you don't, your content will be removed. Viriditas (talk) 23:33, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you again for your thoughts. I will use the sources that meet the definition of "reliable" as defined by Misplaced Pages, not by the definitions provided by you in this thread. Please let me know if you would like a link to actual wikipedia policy on what constitutes a reliable sourse so that you can then learn how "we" edit Misplaced Pages in accordance with Misplaced Pages's policies and guidelines. Thank you again.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:34, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for offer of help, but I've been here long enough to use them and know how they work. Your most recent edit to the lead section shows that you do not. Viriditas (talk) 23:36, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your thoughts. The lead section has thirteen cites, which were from the prior incaranation with changes in verbage, but not substance or citation. Again, thank you so very much.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:47, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Please don't be dishonest. We have diffs which show you adding unsourced material and even adding "citation needed". Viriditas (talk) 23:51, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

And thirteen cites, and this is an introduction that replaced some portion that basically said the human rights history in the united states was "complex", and unsourced. Thanks again for your thoughts.Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:58, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

(outdent) Re: "In fact you skip more than a century of history and start the section in 1964!" (Viriditas)

Yet another inaccuracy. The section doesn't start with any year. It actually starts with EXISTING human rights-related racial equality law in the United States, and it is the 14th and 15th amendments -- which are both currently in effect -- not the CRA. The CRA is the next paragraph.

The paragraph at the bottom summarizes past now inactive law (pre-13th-15th amendments, SBE pre-Brown, etc.). This could not be more straight forward. And the signing of the 1964 CRA photo is an easy slam dunk call for the image for the section -- it is by far the most important active law in the United States and, as the secondary sources have stated, probably the most important Civil Rights law in history.

Same thing for the Gender equality section. 20th Amendment, then CRA addition, then Sexual Harrassment, etc. Mosedschurte (talk) 03:41, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Re: "Where is the emancipation proclamation or the 15th amendment."

If you'll look, the 15th Amendment, which is still active law in the U.S., is in the very FIRST PARAGRAPH. Actually BEFORE the CRA. The 13th Amendment, which constitutionally ended slavery, is also discussed and wikilinked in the third paragraph of the section.Mosedschurte (talk) 03:43, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

You skipped 188 years of human rights in the United States in order to whitewash the history. This is not acceptable. Viriditas (talk) 04:17, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Neutrality in lead section

Yachtsman1, your recent edits to the lead section do not adhere to NPOV, introduce unsourced material, and remove criticism that is integral to a balanced lead. Please defend this edit. Unsourced material can be removed immediately, and the lead section is not the place to for purple prose or non-neutral summaries. I think you are trying to bait me into an edit war, because there is no justification for your edits. So I will ask you to self-revert at this time. The lead should follow WP:LEAD and your recent edits do not. Viriditas (talk) 23:04, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for your thoughts. The lead section already has one critique of US human rights policy outside of the United States, so I got rid of the other as undue weight. Indeed, the entire portion on US human rights violations outside of its borders counters the topic at hand. The source on the ICC does not show an "undermining" by the US of the ICC, but instead opposition to it, and refusal to sign the document, and therefore violated POV, and was changed to "opposed". The prior opeing, which acts as a summary, also lacked citations (and none are really needed in an opening anyway), so I find your present stance mystifying in this respect. I will also remind you that you do not own this article, and that you must assume good faith. If you choose to engage in an edit war, that's your choice. I would suggest you refrain from doing so. I would also direct your attention to the article Human rights in the United Kingdom for an article that serves as my template. This article is constructed correctly, covers the subject at hand, and has the rhyme and reason so missing from the jumbled mess of an article we are discussing. Thank you again.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:15, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Every article must be treated on its merits alone, and the decision to use Human rights in the United Kingdom as a "template" for this article, is a discussion you failed to have on this talk page. Unilateral editing, especially on articles that have a long history of controversy and dispute, only makes the problems worse, and could result in a block if you continue. Your comments above show an inability to engage in direct discussion, and your POV of "I'm right and everyone else is wrong" is not going to work here. Your edits seem to consist of adding kindling to a wildfire I and others are trying to put out. Please do not edit unilaterlally in the future, and do not add unsourced material to the article, and please do not change the lead section to match your POV rather than the focus of the article. The lead needs to reflect the article, not your personal opinion. Viriditas (talk) 23:23, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you. This article is being treated on its "merits", which I find less than meritorious indeed, as do a number of other editors. The article I linked simply has rhyme and reason, is neutral, and shines above the jumbled mess we have here, so as a template, it works. I also dislike being threatened, so please stop doing so in the future. This is itself a violation of WP:CIV. I also find your points that I cannot "engage in a direct discussion" when I have addressed your posts point for point throughout this process to be wildly inaccurate. The lead reflects the article, it just does so "neutrally". If you find it does not, kindly provide specific examples and we will try to reach a consensus on this subject. Thank you again for your thoughts.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:29, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

You have not addressed any of my points in any discussion. Instead, you continue push your POV and boast about not having to follow any guideline or policy. Again, this is not a unilateral process. You need to be able to discuss your edits and defend them. Viriditas (talk) 23:31, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your personal attack. I will let my comments speak for themselves. Again, thank you so very much.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:43, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Your comments have not addressed my questions or points. Do you understand? Viriditas (talk) 23:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

My comments have perfectly addressed your questions and points. Other editors have also answered your questions and points. We have spent days addressing your questions and points. You are the only person who has raised them, and they have been addressed repeatedly. You have responded instead with a stream of insults, personal attacks and requests for clarification that I am now going to ignore in the hopes of making actual progress to bring this article into compliance with neutrality requirements as they are actually written by Misplaced Pages with the other editors who have reached a consensus that this article is not only neutralk, but what steps are required to improve it. Do you understand? Thank you again.Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:07, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

You have not addressed my questions or my points, and you continue to waste my time by adding unsourced content to the article, disrupting the talk page, and generally being a nuisance. If you had addressed my questions and points, we would not be talking about your refusal to do so, now, would we? Viriditas (talk) 00:09, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

See supra. Thanks again.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:54, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I propose deleting the section on international human rights

The article's subject is about Human Rights in the United States. It might be better to simply link the reader with a blurb and links to the relevant articles on these subjects. Can we reach a consensus on this? Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:22, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Please expand upon your argument with actual reasons. What exactly is it you are saying? Are you arguing for a section split, a more condensed version, removal of the entire section, or what? Please also give examples that do not pertain to human rights in the United States. In other words, why should the section be deleted? You've proposed deletion, but I don't see any reason. Viriditas (talk) 23:37, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so very much for your thoughts. The "actual reasons" are stated above. The article's title is Human rights in the United States. The subject, therefore, is Human rights in the United States. It is not Human rights of the United States, nor is it Human rights outside of the United States. The materials proposed for deletion are matters that are outside of the stated topic of the article, they are irrelevant, immaterial and inapplicable to the topic at hand. They are a content fork, and should be removed, with links provided for each separate article on the subject. Thank you again for your thoughts.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:40, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

That's not an adequate reason nor are you being clear. Are you arguing for a split or not? Do you even know what that means? I'm sure the section can use some work, but international human rights is part of U.S. foreign policy. Please visit Bureau of Democracy, Human Rights, and Labor to get some idea of this topic. Human rights in U.S. policy is one aspect of this article. Viriditas (talk) 23:56, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

It's a particularly adequate reason, and I am being perfectly clear. I am advocating deleting it, which is why the section is entitled "I propose deleting the section on international human rights". Can anything be more clear? If you contend keeping this material in this article when it addresses issues not germaine to it, kindly list your reasons. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:01, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

That's not a reason, that's a proposal. Now prepare a reason. This isn't that hard, you know? Viriditas (talk) 00:03, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Let me repeat: The article's title is Human rights in the United States. The subject, therefore, is Human rights in the United States. It is not Human rights of the United States, nor is it Human rights outside of the United States. The materials proposed for deletion are matters that are outside of the stated topic of the article, they are irrelevant, immaterial and inapplicable to the topic at hand. They are a content fork, and should be removed, with links provided for each separate article on the subject. If you contend that this material is germaine to the topic, please provide "reasons" for your position. If you contend that these items should not be removed, please provide "reasons" for your position. Thank you again for your thoughts.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:10, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Reasons require evidence. Please provide it. You made a claim without evidence. I gave you a link to the Bureau of Democracy, Human Rights, and Labor. That's one organization that is in the U.S. and is focused on promoting U.S. human rights around the world. I can give you a reference to a book, American Exceptionalism and Human Rights (2005) that discusses the topic in relation to human rights policies at home and abroad. To put this another way, international human rights policy is part of this article, but it doesn't require the amount of material at present. This is where a "split" comes in. So on the one hand, you are arguing that the material in't relevant, but you haven't supported your claim other than to say it is a "content fork", which is somewhat circular since you already said that about the title. So, why doesn't this material have anything to do with human rights in the United States? That's the question you need to answer. Because it is a content fork, isn't a reason. It's your opinion. Now give a reason. Viriditas (talk) 00:20, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

In a civil matter in a Court of Law, the Plaintiff provides "evidence", something I know all about. This is not a Court of Law. Misplaced Pages has guidelines that must be followed, including the fact that an article's content relate to the article's subject. The section on international human rights ss inapplicable to the topic of the article, and should be deleted. One editor disagrees, and has provided a link to another Misplaced Pages article for support. Does anyone else want to chime in here? --Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:51, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

You are mistaken. Every policy and guideline on Misplaced Pages recommends presenting evidence to support claims. If you need further help understanding how Misplaced Pages works, please consult an administrator who will explain it to you. Viriditas (talk) 04:16, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

• I completely oppose deletion of this section, the international human rights conventions mentioned are extemely important and central to the issue at hand. Pexise (talk) 13:53, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Sections not "in the United States"

Some sections fairly clearly deal with actions not "in the United States" and are outside the scope of the article by its very title.

A few easy sections that are not within the scope of the article as their events do not occur "in the United States":

• Abu Ghraib prison abuse - obviously. It is in Baghdad Central Prison is in Abu Ghraib, an Iraqi city 32 km (20 mi) west of Baghdad.]] This is not located "in the United States"
• Guantánamo Bay - is in Cuba (only leased property), which is the reason for the choosing of its location. Again, clearly not "in the United States".Mosedschurte (talk) 00:57, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I concur. Do you think we should delete these sections?--Yachtsman1 (talk) 00:59, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Definitely, and these are just the easy ones -- clearly outside the U.S., so there is not really any question. Way outside the article's scope.

The other issues you raised above on the entire "International" section raise issues that also deal with "in the United States" issues.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:09, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Here's a novel suggestion

How about we just rename the article Human rights and the United States so there can be more wikilawyering. Soxwon (talk) 01:00, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Definitely not. Then we'd have to include every allegation re every war, war crimes tribunal, etc. The article would be huge.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:04, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

No, that's the whole problem with this jumbled mess of an article, Sox. Too long, and too much information. I suggest we kick this part, and link to the pages where these stories are actually covered. This is a simple resolution to the problem.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 01:07, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

No I think that the article isn't too long, what I think is the problem is that it goes into too much detail. I don't think these extreme cuts are really necessary or really productive. Discuss first, I propose this move as inclusive and really the cutting as unecessary. Soxwon (talk) 01:10, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Right now, the cuts are just the obvious ones outside the very scope of the article per its title re "in the United States". The same thing would be true of a section on the dropping of the bomb at Hiroshima -- outside the scope.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:15, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

They wouldn't be necessary if you would listen and actually take into consideration the change. Soxwon (talk) 01:18, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Please stop WP:Edit Warring with continued insertion of 8,000+ bytes of material clearly not "in the United States". If you want to change the scope of the article to include all U.S. international actions in its history (which would, by the way, make it grossly WP:Too Long -- it's already over 9.5K prose text), then suggest that instead. Don't add huge swaths of material outside the scope.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:22, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Moved, and btw your suggestion is ridiculous as Human Rights and United States redirected here anyways. A seperate article would be more ridiculous than keeping it. Plz stop rmving material. Soxwon (talk) 01:23, 23 May 2009 (UTC)Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).

BEYOND RIDICULOUS, your unilateral move. It has been moved back to the same concept as before.

I simply cannot believe that you unilaterally simply changed the article title to change its entire scope because you did not wish to discuss a potential scope change -- WITH TWO EDITORS ABOVE ALREADY TELLING YOU THE HORRIBLE IDEA OF SUCH A SCOPE CHANGE. Mosedschurte (talk) 01:28, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually beyond ridiculous would be your POV and editing style (other words apply but we don't use them in polite company. That is YOUR interpretation of the scope, and as such it is not automatically law, though I'm sure in your own little world it may be. And as for two editors, HEY THAT'S HOW MANY VIRITIDAS AND I ARE IMAGINE THAT, DON'T START MASS DELETING OK? Soxwon (talk) 01:41, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

(Outdent)It's not "my interpretation". The article's ACTUAL NAME was "Human Rights in the United States". All I did was delete material outside the United States (by the way just two clearly NOT "in the United States" subsections in an article that has roughly FORTY sections and subsections.

In addition, were we to change the scope of the article to actually cover International events regarding the United States in its history and human rights, the section on World War II alone would be huge, including the the leadership and activities at the Nuremberg Trials, the Hiroshima Bomb, the Fire Bombing of Dresden in World War II, the controverial Rheinwiesenlager camps holding German prisoners the Fire Bombing of Tokyo, the Bombing of Kobe in World War II, Nagasaki_bomb, etc. All of these absolutely dwarf in every regard tiny cases such as Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse and the Guantanamo Bay detention camp. And that's just one 2 year period (1944-45). Mosedschurte (talk) 01:54, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Repeating yourself verbatim doesn't help. If you'd looked Human Rights and the United States redirected here too. Guess that throws your interpretation out the window. And again, cutting out details does acutally happen and things can be cut to a manageable size. The article can be edited w/o mass deletions I swear (you probably think I'm crazy but it IS possible). Soxwon (talk) 01:57, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

If it helps to cover the topics mentioned in the article, naming it "Human Rights and the United States" would be appropriate. In any case: Since when doesn't Guantanamo Bay belong to the United States? Additionally one could argue, that what happens in US bases around the world that are under the authority of the US counts as "in the US". Larkusix (talk) 02:17, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

"Since when doesn't Guantanamo Bay belong to the United States?"

Since forever. It's in Cuba and the US has a perpetual lease. This is why the various regulatory bodies located the detention facility there -- it's not in the U.S. to attempt to avoid various statutes. This is why it is such an issue moving inmates now if they would be relocated to prisons inside the United States (see news articles today on the issue on the closing funding/alternative dispute).

And expanding this article to include the some 200+ years of international actions relevant to human rights would be a terrible idea. They would grossly dwarf everything in the article now, and the article now is already 9.6K prose text. Mosedschurte (talk) 02:35, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Mosedschurte, I've been reviewing your edits and the sources you have used. Do any of them actually discuss "human rights"? To set my mind at ease, could you point me to just one source that does? From what I can tell, your edits gloss over most of the history of the human rights in the U.S. What exactly is it that you think this article is supposed to be about? Viriditas (talk) 14:53, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

UNREAL -- Unilateral move of article

Soxwon engaged in an WP:Edit War, wanted to change the scope of the article to include international events and unliaterally moved the article to ""Human Rights and the United States" -- a grossly larger scoped article. He did so with no discussion of such a change in article scope. He had asked about a change in article scope, BOTH EDITORS that responded disagreed entirely with the idea (the scope of the article would be gargantuan including all historical international issues and it is already too long). He simply changed the title unilaterally anyway.

After this outrageous unilateral scope of article change, I actually had to move it back to "Human Rights inside the United States" to return it to its original scope (Human Rights in the United States).Mosedschurte (talk) 01:28, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

First of all it was "Human Rights in the United States." Second the article I moved it to already redirected here. Instead of being a complete anal case, how about actually thinking and realizing that this article was meant to cover Human rights and the United States. By your definition this entire article should be deleted based upon the fact we are using international standards since they didn't originate in the United States. Soxwon (talk) 01:36, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Next time, when you suggest changing the entire scope of the article to something massive, and BOTH EDITORS that respond disagree, try not to go about the unilateral change of the article name anyway. That was beyond ridiculous.

If this article was to actually cover All International events regarding the United States in its history, the section on World War II alone would be huge, including the the leadership and activities at the Nuremberg Trials, the Hiroshima Bomb, the Fire Bombing of Dresden in World War II, the controverial Rheinwiesenlager camps holding German prisoners the Fire Bombing of Tokyo, the Bombing of Kobe in World War II, Nagasaki_bomb, etc. All of these absolutely dwarf in every regard tiny cases such as Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse and the Guantanamo Bay detention camp. And that's just one 2 year period (1944-45). Mosedschurte (talk) 01:45, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Here's a tip, think before you type. It really helps, I swear. Mentioning all of that in a world war two section could be done fairly easily and painlessly. There's a lot of detail here that is unecessary. Instead of doing mass deletions and being anal about reading the title, use a little common sense. It really does help I swear. And I agree, they would, but they still deserve mention and deleting them is POV for an article covering Human Rights and the United States. Soxwon (talk) 01:50, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

You've got to be kidding. That was just two years of World War II issues alone I raised that dwarfed issues like Abu Ghraib torture and prisoner abuse and the Guantánamo Bay (which humorously had like EIGHT PARAGRAPHS of material -- re weight matching magnitude the Dresden bombings would have to have probabloy 800). I did so only to illustrate the ridiculousness of attempting to expand the article to include international human rights issues with which the United States has had in its history only to show how huge and different the article would become. If you add in the rest of WWII, Korea, Vietnam, etc. it would be even more gargantuan. It is already 9.5K prose, at the very upper limit of the guidelines, and too long as it is.

Re: "By your definition this entire article should be deleted based upon the fact we are using international standards since they didn't originate in the United States."

Absolutely not, and this is poorly manufactured straw man. The only two things deleted from the entire article were the obvious ones -- activities that occurred OUTSIDE THE UNITED STATES. I did not delete the "International" section, nor any treaties with other countries (which might also cover activities in the United States) or international standards.Mosedschurte (talk) 02:01, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

As I mentioned above, I would agree naming the article "Human rights and the United States" if it helps, but I oppose naming it "Human rights inside the United States". In any case, territories permanently or temporarily under the control of the United States count as "in the US" in my eyes. Larkusix (talk) 02:22, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

There is no consensus to move the article to any title at this time. The fact that Mosedschurte chose to move the article to his preferred version in order to exclude content from this article is a sign of someone who does not understand how Misplaced Pages operates. Viriditas (talk) 04:15, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any consensus to move the page. I've moved it back. It is locked for a month, so you have time to (dis)agree. I'm off camping for a bit, so if you disagree enough and care, you'll have to find another admin William M. Connolley (talk) 13:41, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

• I've been editing and keeping an eye on this article for a long while now, and this type of thing tends to happen periodically - some people take a personal objection to it and try to make sweeping changes, mainly involving deletions. This often smacks of attempts to censor the article.
• If I remember rightly, this article was at one point called "Human Rights and the United States", hence the re-direct from that title. I would have no objection to changing the name of the article back to "Human Rights and the United States".
• I would certainly object to changing the name to "Human rights inside the United States". There is no rationale for changing the title thus, in fact, it seems that the suggestion may even be an indirect attempt to carry out the type of censorship I mention above.
• Regardless, I agree that the scope of the article needs to be clearly defined. As I see it, in order to be encyclopaedic, the article takes, as its theoretical framework, human rights as defined by the Universal Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR) and the subsequent UN treaties, conventions and declarations etc. This is one of the reasons for objections to certain sections. Some people don't realise that the UDHR includes socio-economic rights as well as civil-political rights - the sections on hurrican Katrina, universal health care etc, refer to socio-economic rights - for example, Article 25, section 1 of the declaration says:

Everyone has the right to a standard of living adequate for the health and well-being of himself and of his family, including food, clothing, housing and medical care and necessary social services, and the right to security in the event of unemployment, sickness, disability, widowhood, old age or other lack of livelihood in circumstances beyond his control.

• If anyone has an alternative theoretical framework for the article, I would be open to suggestions, although I believe that the UDHR is generally considered to be the accepted mainstream definition of what Human Rights are.

• I also agree that it is necessary to define the geographic scope of the article, as well as the way we deal with the issue of agency. At present, the article deals with human rights issues relating to agents of the US state (police, military, CIA etc) as and where they operate. As has been pointed out, the US has an expansive foreign policy, and as such, agents of the US operate in many foreign countries. I see no reason not to include US activities in other countries, and have heard no plausible reason to restrict the article in this way.
• At the moment, we are only dealing with direct actions of the US and US agents, and have not included indirect support for or sponsorship of human rights violations. While this subject matter is of relevance to the article, its inclusion could indeed lead to the article becoming too long, and as such, a separate article should probably be created. However, if others thought that the scope of the article should be broadened to include US support for human rights violations, perhaps a summary section could be created with a link to a longer article. Pexise (talk) 14:32, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Too Long

The article is currently over 120K, and over 9.5K prose text. This is already at the upper end of the 6K to 10K prose text article suggested top size.Mosedschurte (talk) 01:33, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

With Larkusix's additions, it is now up to nearly 9.7K prose text -- at the very upper end of the too large guideline.Mosedschurte (talk) 03:15, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Please walk away from this article. Your disruptive actions in the last 24 hours have violated just about every policy on guideline we have on Misplaced Pages. Further behavior will result in multiple reports on administrator noticeboards. Viriditas (talk) 04:14, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Yet another threat in violation of Misplaced Pages policy along with a demand to "Please walk away from this article".Mosedschurte (talk) 04:18, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Not a threat. You made five reverts today, including a page move against consensus and naming conventions, in addition to which, you added synthesized, non-neutral content based on sources that do not discuss human rights, while at the same time falsely tagging sourced sections and wikilawyering on the talk page. Here's your chance to redeem yourself: Please revert to the last version before you began editing and ask an administrator to move this article back to it's correct name. If you do not, I will file a total of six noticeboard reports against you. Thanks for your attention in this matter. Viriditas (talk) 05:37, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Other issues

In addition to issues discussed here, another editor here, issues regarding the article BEING TOO LONG (almost 9,700 KB prose text now) here, other editor comments here and here, there are other issues on specific sections:

• Hurricane Katrina - as discussed by many above, this section is Off Topic, and is grossly exhibits Undue Weight for an entire section that is 4.8 KB devoted to the rescue efforts for one storm that hit in 2005 in an article on "Human Rights inside/in the United States."
• Justice System - this section is particularly Unbalanced with virtually no mention of the United States huge leadership in criminal justice protections and the various protections therein. Instead, it essentially contains a panoply of WP:Undue Weight complaints that are not put in their structural Context of the overall system.
• Death Penalty - this section is written like an Editorial piece, almost entirely containing the arguments of just those opposing the death penalty. In addition, this one subsection alone is a massive 8.1 KB and badly needs to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form.
• Police Brutality - this section is written like an Editorial, conveying only negative sources on the issue, put together to form a negative POV in Sythesis form.
• Universal Health Care Debate - this is a huge 7.3KB section that currently is given WP:Undue Weight, includes a long block quotes from a Case Western textbook (and Michael J. Hurd) and badly needs to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form. It is also written like an editorial section.
• International Human Rights - this section badly needs Context as it includes virtually none of the international human rights leadership of the United States. Also the section is far too large, taking up a massive 45 KB itself, and needs to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form.
• The U.S. and the International Criminal Court - this section is far too long, taking up 4.3KB, needs to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form and is severely Unbalanced as it almost entirely takes one side of the debate about the ICC.
• Abu Ghraib prison abuse - this section is clearly well Off Topic in an article on Human Rights inside/in the United States. Moreover, even were this article to be expanded to include U.S. actions abroad, it would then likely have to be reduced to one sentence given its tiny magnitude when compared to the massive other U.S. actions abroad that would have to be covered of literally thousands of times the magnitude.
• Guantánamo Bay - this section is clearly well Off Topic in an article on Human Rights inside/in the United States, as Guantanamo Bay was chosen for the facility specifically because it was OUTSIDE THE UNITED STATES (Cuban land on which the U.S. has a perpetual lease). Even were the article scope changed to include all U.S. historical actions abroad over the also 200+ years, this section on events on one prison in 2003 alone is also a whopping 5.4KB and badly needs to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form. Mosedschurte (talk) 04:20, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
• "Enhanced interrogation" and waterboarding - this section mostly covers actions done outside the United States (Off Topic), is grossly overlength at a whopping 8.1KB badly needing to be put in Misplaced Pages summary form and is written in an Unbalanced regard, taking the side that the enhanced interrogation techniques were human rights violations.

(Finally, regarding response to the above, please stay within Misplaced Pages policy and do not edit the above comments by placing comments between the above paragraphs -- I've noticed one editor doing this repeatedly on this talk page).(Mosedschurte (talk) 04:27, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Hi MS, I've removed the tags as they're very disfiguring. It's better to improve the article, even if it takes time, than leaving it with so many tags on it. I've left the NPOV tag in place, as I don't know the status of that one. Cheers, SlimVirgin 05:40, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Hi, went ahead and replaced a few of the more obvious tags and too long (see sections above). Agree with the improvement point. I actually improved three of the sections yesterday with some fairly extensive sourcing, repairing contextual issues, etc. Obviously, looking at all of the many issues raised by many editors on this article, it requires extensive work on many more sections that will take much longer than one day.Mosedschurte (talk) 06:14, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

As that was your sixth revert in less than six hours, I reported you at WP:AN3. Viriditas (talk) 11:57, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Mosedschurte, you are engaging in civil POV pushing again. Most of these bullet points have already been addressed, yet you continue to bring them up again as if they had not. This is disruptive. You also seem to be making things up and ignoring the sources in the article. Your use of tagging is not accurate, and the sources you've added to the article do not appear to have anything to do with human rights. Finally, your deletion of abolitionist Anthony Benezet, one of the people responsible for creating the first human rights organization in the U.S.and ignoring 188 years of human rights history is either blatant trolling or displays an incredible amount of ignorance of the topic. Replacing Benezet with a photograph of LBJ is quite possibly the silliest thing I've ever seen on Misplaced Pages. I'm going to have to ask you to either engage in discussion or stop editing here. You were asked to defend your edits here and you have completely ignored the discussion. Instead, you keep acting unilaterally as if nobody has questioned your edits. Except, looking up above this thread, I see four editors who disagree with you, and you have not addressed their points. There are currently two open ANI reports on your disruptive behavior, and I expect to open three more in the next 24 hours. Please do not continue to act disruptively in this article. Your edits have been questioned, your sources have been questioned, and your edit warring and page move warring against consensus has to stop. This is the exact same disruptive behavior that your predecessor User:Raggz engaged in, and I have to wonder if there is any connection between you and him and others. Your insistence on "Off Topic" and "Undue Weight" and "Unbalanced" is exactly how Raggz used to discuss here, until enough editors figured out he was disrupting the article and he was asked to leave. Isn't that an interesting coincidence? Furthermore, I find it interesting that your tag-team partner, User:Yachtsman1, created his user account just days before Raggz disappeared. What are the odds of three different editors engaging in the same exact disruptive tactics on the same article? Interesting, don't you think? Of course Raggz got off easy, since when he was confronted with these questions, he said he was suffering from brain damage (he actually said that) and disappeared, never to be heard from again. Viriditas (talk)

Inside/outside the United States

I saw the AN threads asking for outside editors' input. Looking at what seems to be the issue, I think this deletion rationale e.g. was inappropriate. The events in Guantánamo Bay are still reflective of how human rights are dealt with in the United States, as the decision-makers determining what happens in Guantánamo Bay clearly sit "inside" the United States. The United States controls far more territories abroad than a country like, say, Luxembourg. It is probably the most internationally active nation today. When prisoners are "rendered" from US custody to other countries with laxer views on human rights for questioning, these are decisions that are made in the United States. To claim that anything that happens outside the 50 States has nothing to do with "human rights in the United States" strikes me as ill-advised, and I would not be in favour of restricting the scope of this article in this manner. JN466 12:10, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

• Sorry, but I have to disagree. The way to go is to create two articles: (1) "Human rights in the United States", and (2) "Human rights violations by the United states". Everything outside the international borders of US (like Guantánamo Bay) belong to second article. Let me give you an example. Would you include everything from Soviet war crimes into Human rights in the Soviet Union? No.Biophys (talk) 18:30, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
  • If these war crimes were being committed as we speak, or within the last 2, 5 or 10 years, then yes, I would include them. JN466 18:33, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Soviet war crimes have been committed during the existence of the Soviet Union. Who said that timing is relevant? Would you include crimes by Russian Army in Georgia to article Human rights in Russia? Ask users who edit those articles.Biophys (talk) 18:43, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you will be able to change my mind. For example, present-day UN human rights reports on Israel comment on alleged human rights abuses in Gaza, the West Bank, and Syria. Our article Human rights in Israel includes a section on the 2006 Lebanon war. Our article on Human rights in Rwanda mentions that the Rwandan government supplies child soldiers to the conflict in the Democratic Republic of the Congo. And if this were the early 1940s, it is inconceivable that an article on "Human rights in Germany" would exclude reports of the mass murder of Jews taking place in occupied Poland, or the mass rape of Russian women by German troops, based on the reasoning that these crimes were not taking place on German soil. JN466 19:50, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Also please note that the "2008 Human Rights Report: Russia" by the US Bureau of Democracy, Human Rights, and Labor includes a prominent mention of human rights abuses perpetrated by Russian troops in the course of the South Ossetian war, on Georgian soil. I think our readers would expect our series of articles covering the human rights situation in various countries to be scoped according to the same principles applied there. JN466 20:15, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

It is fine to mention Soviet war crimes in article Human rights in the Soviet Union, but such things should be kept separately, at least for the reason of readability. Do not you see this article is too big? The best logical solution is to divide domestic and foreign issues.Biophys (talk) 21:29, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

No. If the article is too big, you spin out articles and include a shorter summary here. You do not change the scope. JN466 21:47, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

And please do not take comfort from my use of the word "mention". The US human rights report on Russia goes into a fair amount of detail on Russian actions in Georgia. JN466 21:55, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

• I would refer you to the article Human Rights in the People's Republic of China which features sections on Tibet and Darfur. I would also point out the fact that, as mentioned in earlier discussions, the USA is particularly expansive in its foreign policy at present, hence more mention of international issues. Pexise (talk) 19:15, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Tibet is fine, because that is an internationally recognized part of China, just like Chechnya (a part of Russia) belongs to "Human rights in Russia". Darfur is not. Perhaps we need a separate article about the US and human rights issues at the international arena.Biophys (talk) 19:26, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

• I could be open to the idea of a separate article on US human rights issues internationally - that could also include US support and indirect involvement in human rights abuses (as in the Darfur example in the China article). However, whatever decisions are taken, the status of ratifications of international human rights documents should stay here as these documents relate to domestic policy as well as international policy. Pexise (talk) 21:44, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Sexual orientation section

Why is this in this article? The problem I have with it is:

• Sexual orientation is not a human right in and of itself;
• Recognition of marriage between homosexuals is not a human right;
• The section on the 14th Amendment is uncited and totally incorrect;
• The section on what "might" be recognized in the future is crystal balling, a prediction based on opinion of what "might" happen in the future, not facts.

I would suggest either getting cites to support this section as a matter of human rights, eliminating "predictions" or possible recognition, or eliminating it all together. Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 23:44, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes, this section is hardly relevant and should be removed.Biophys (talk) 03:37, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Same with "Natural disasters". This is classic Misplaced Pages:Coatrack and undue weight.Biophys (talk) 03:52, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

I disagree, and I would ask that you explain your reasoning in the dedicated section, Talk:Human_rights_in_the_United_States#Katrina, so I can address it in detail. Thanks. Viriditas (talk) 07:13, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

There are also many POV forks in this article, especially in the "international" sections.Biophys (talk) 03:55, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps see UN declaration on sexual orientation and gender identity. -- Banjeboi 04:32, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

The United States is not a signatory to this declaration, even if it applied, and the total number of signatories equals 66 out of 192 countries. Hardly persuasive in this context. Thank you.Yachtsman1 (talk) 04:48, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

It seems they actually are - U.S. Joins Call to End Discrimination Based on Sexual Orientation. -- Banjeboi 05:02, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

They have not yet joined this agreement. Even if applicable, can you tell me how what is written in the proposed deleted portion applies to the agreement? Have we seen an example of people being "prosecuted" or sent to jail in the United States for being a homosexual, which is what the declaration applies to? What is the point of its inclusion?--Yachtsman1 (talk) 05:32, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

AI USA on human rights, Yogyakarta Principles on LGBT human rights, AI 'Stonewalled' report on 4 US cities, human rights factsheet on LGBT, Washington-based LGBT HRC, SPLC report on HR abuses of transgender people, AI report on policing of trangender in NY, AI report on policing of transgender in Chicago. Sexual orientation is not in itself a human right, but the abuse of people's human rights on the basis of their sexual or gender identity is a human rights issue, regarded as identity-based persecution; issues of discrimination, unequal treatment, etc., these are human rights issues, regardless of sexual or gender identity - where these are practiced because of peoples' sexual or gender identities, then they become human rights issues on that basis. Mish (talk) 05:47, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Yet none of these allegations are included. Instead, we have crystal balling prediciting that one day, sexual orientation might be viewed under the equal protection clause. We also have a discussion concerning the 14th Amendment that is wildly inaccurate from a legal standpoint, and is totally unreferenced with talk of recognition of gay marriage. What does this have to do with human rights?--Yachtsman1 (talk) 05:52, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

I agree the section needs more work, for example to cover the rights of LGBT generally, civil unions, employment, freedom from arbitrary arrest and detention, harassment, privacy, safety in private and public spaces, etc. all needs spelling out more as how these relate to which human rights and to the constitution specifically. I would look at the work that needs doing, but I have no understanding of US constitutional affairs, and I do not want to have more understanding right now. What does it have to do with human rights? LGBT people are human beings, so to deny on the basis of their sexual or gender identity any human rights accorded to other human beings is to deny them their human rights. Mish (talk) 06:12, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

No rights are denied, none are listed, instead we are asked to interject a thought they might be rejected as they are unmentioned. The issue of gay marriage is one of "recognition". No law in the United States "bars" gay people from being married, and there are certainly lots of religious organizations that may choose to perform such a marriage. Instead, the issue is reserved to the states under the Constitution and the state either chooses to "recognize" that union as "marriage" or not. There are specific laws (unmentioned, what a shock) that make it a crime to harass and/or discriminate against gay people that exist on the state and federal levels. This is not included, most likely because it would cast the United States in a positive light and that they might actually have laws and policies that support human rights. In any event, the section on Constitutional law is woefully, almost laughably, deficient. The crystal ball predictions are specious, and Misplaced Pages does not advocate crystal ball predictions of "what might" occur in the future. I would argue that LGBT issues ARE an element of human rights, but that this section does not address it properly, and should simply be deleted, or heavily edited. The problem you have is that because the United Sattes is a federal democracy, you will have to link to laws, codes, policies, USC and regulations to answer the point. In other words, this is an article that can exist wholly on its own. Rederence to a separate page may be more appropriate.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 07:38, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

I think you are probably correct, that this topic needs to be dealt with in its own right, with a short section in here that links to that article and has a brief paragraph describing the situation. Having just read the US Constitution (for the first time since studying Political Science at University 30 years ago), then it seems that a right to marry is not specifically addressed, so lesbian/gay civil unions would not be addressed either. Amendment 14 includes equality in relation to the law; it appears that the argument for extending the civil registration of unions beyond a man and woman is that failing to do so restricts that equality under law. Some states have legislated to extend this right to LGBT people by extending a legal process - civil union - beyond one group of US citizens to all US citizens (by including LGBT people). I might misunderstand this, but that is how it appears to an outsider with only a limited understanding of these issues. The US Bill of Rights does not appear exhaustive account of human rights, and is primarily about civil rights, although pretty fundamental rights. The freedom of consulting adults to engage in civil union (or marriage) is seen as a fundamental human right in human rights discourse, and it is now argued that this human right includes LGBT people (sources already provided). If this is a human right that is contested, and is subject to rights discourse in the USA, then it makes no sense not to include some mention of that discussion here - especially if sources are available that describe the matter. I agree that the section is deficient, and it does deserve more serious attention by somebody who is competent to do so - particularly (as you say) ways in which human rights have been recognized and attended to, as well as where they are seen as lacking. Mish (talk) 08:19, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

I've inserted a link to the main LGBT rights in USA article into the sexual orientation section. Mish (talk) 12:39, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

• If we look at the human rights reports the US draw up on other countries, the treatment of homosexuals is part of the report's scope. Example: That surely makes sense, so the topic should not be excluded from this article's scope either. If this present article is too long, section summaries can be shortened to the essential points. At any rate, there should always be a pointer to the main article on that specific subtopic. JN466 14:44, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

• comment - unlike clearly shoehorned in sections, such as Hurricane Katrina and the international oddities (in an article about "Human rights in the United States), sexual orientation is at least arguably one that should be included on "Human rights in the United States". But, again, like much of the article, very little Context is provided. Also, given that there is serious dispute on whether it should be addressed in the context of human rights, it should also not be given WP:Undue Weight, though it is actually not large now compared with some of the other somewhat humorously bloated Editorial style sections (addressed above).Mosedschurte (talk) 01:14, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Ongoing Katrina discussion

Please seeTalk:Human_rights_in_the_United_States#Katrina for full discussion.

Outline

Several editors have been very outspoken about what this article should not include. However, I have made two previous requests for an explanation of what this article should cover, with no response to my queries. So, I will ask again: What is the scope of this article? Please keep replies brief and to the point so we can move quickly on this and come to an agreement. Viriditas (talk) 17:02, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

There appears to be confusion with my simple question. Several editors have answered my question with, "The scope of the article is Human rights in the United States". That is not an appropriate response. For some insight on what a response would look like, please see comments by Jayen4666. We already know the name of the article, so please do not use that as a response. Please also briefly describe what this article will cover, such as an outline of topics and what types of sources are to be used. Recent edits by Mosedschurte indicate that he does not understand that sources have to be directly related to human rights in order to be included. Viriditas (talk) 17:56, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Comment by Jayen466

The scope should be that which is normal in international human rights reporting. As per examples given above, this includes both internal issues and external issues such as war crimes. Basically, everything that would be covered in a UN human rights country report, a human rights country report drawn up by the State Department, etc. JN466 17:10, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Comment by Mosedschurte

This repetition of this point for probably the 10th time is needless. Numerous editors have already responded that the article should cover what the title states - Human rights issues "IN THE UNITED STATES".Mosedschurte (talk) 17:26, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Comment by Yachtsman1

I will answer this again because I have already responded to it at least twice. The scope of the article is "Human rights in the United States". The article should be about "Human rights in the United States"., Anything about human rights outside of the United States should therefore not be covered, because it is not reflective of "Human rights in the United States". Thank you.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 17:46, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Objection to unilateral editing

Mosedschurte, you were recently blocked for edit warring in this article. Now that you have returned, you have stepped right back into the same disruptive behavior as before with your latest edits. Could you please explain these edits? Viriditas (talk) 17:42, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

I too object to the wholesale removal of sections without consensus. As I have stated before, the scope of the article should be equivalent to that of any country-specific human rights report by the UN, or the US State Department, etc. I think the question that readers expect any "Human rights in ..." article to answer is this: What is the human rights record of this country? It seems rather inappropriate to exclude Abu Ghraib or Guantanamo Bay on the basis of these locales not being "in" the United States. JN466 17:55, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

My basic problem is that Mosedschurte was aware that his edits were previously disputed by several editors and he went ahead and made them anyway. This kind of editing behavior does not contribute to a collegial or collaborative atmosphere. Viriditas (talk) 17:59, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

I agree completely. Note also that this present article is the target of numerous redirects, including Human rights and the United States. JN466 18:00, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

• There has been consistent consensus that items concerning human rights outside of the United States be removed from this article. I will gladly refer you to the talk page items if you would like to review them. This is not "unilateral" by any stretch.--Yachtsman1 (talk) 18:01, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Please take a moment to familiarize yourself with this talk page and its archives. There is no such consensus. Viriditas (talk) 18:05, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
    • I amy quite familiar with this talk page. The issue was raised numerous times, consensus exists. --Yachtsman1 (talk) 18:09, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
      • To be honest, it is readily apparent to anyone blundering in here that this talk page does not give the impression of consensus on much of anything. ;) JN466 18:10, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
      • Now, when our readers go to an article called "Human rights in ..." they clearly expect to learn something about the country's human rights record. Human rights record of turkey redirects to Human rights in Turkey. Human rights in Morocco begins with the words, "Morocco’s human rights record is mixed." The article Human rights in Syria begins with the words, "The human rights record of the Syrian Arab Republic has been evaluated by a number of different sources." This is what these articles are about, countries' human rights records. As far as I am concerned, Human Rights Record of the United States should redirect here as well, or vice versa, rather than lead to an article about a document drawn up by the People's Republic of China. At any rate, it is impossible to have a credible discussion of the United States human rights record that excludes Abu Ghraib, Guantánamo Bay, the rendering of political prisoners, and so forth, on the basis that the alleged human rights violations involved did not happen on US soil. JN466 18:16, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

RfC

I think it is clear that editors are divided and are unlikely to come to an agreement soon. I propose we file an RfC on the scope this article should have. JN466 18:27, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Not a bad idea. It might bring civility back to these discussions, which has been sorely missing for the past few days. Anyone else?--Yachtsman1 (talk) 18:34, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Please do and make sure you notify the primary WikiProject. Hopefully, such an RfC will demand a bit more honesty from some of the editors here. When asked to define this scope, some of them said, "the article should cover what the title states - Human rights issues "IN THE UNITED STATES" and "the article should be about "Human rights in the United States", yet when issues like Katrina are raised, they suddenly move the goalposts and declare it "off-topic". Viriditas (talk) 18:59, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

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