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- Edit article using less one sided and subjective language. Article is worded from a bias pro-life point of view with use of such phrases as "expulsion from the uterus of a fetus/embryo, resulting in or caused by its death" (embryo's death;conveying the idea of an embryo's death is extremely subjective language and point of view)
Expand leadProperly source the majority of information under "Forms of abortion" and "Health effects."- Create more balanced sub-section on abortion and mental health to better describe scope of controversy in both science and politics.
- Source and write a sub-section on compulsory abortion for "Social issues" (see To-Do Items for a draft).
- Add statistics on national abortion rates. Rework the table for "Incidence" (see To-Do Items for a work-in-progress version)
- Discuss creation of "Historical perspectives" topic under "Abortion debate."
- Discuss potential summary section of Religion and abortion article.
- Discuss potential creation of "Abortion in art, literature, and film" section.
- Streamline article per WP:SIZE. Copyedit to simplify prose and discuss content which could be reduced or removed.