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Revision as of 22:01, 6 October 2011 by Jezhotwells (talk | contribs) (failed GA nomination)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)Revolution Software was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (October 6, 2011, reviewed version). There are suggestions below for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
Importance
This Article should be Highly Important, because Revolution Software made one of the most successful Adventure Classics of All Time! Plus - it was found by a Legendof the Gaming Industry: Charles Cecil! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 7arazred (talk • contribs) 12:42, 17 September 2011
- Per the Importance scale for WikiProject Video games, companies are ranked Top-importance (article forms the basis of all information) if they are highly influential companies, particularly the major Japanese, American, and European companies involved in video game production, e.g. Blizzard Entertainment, Capcom, Nintendo; they are ranked High-importance (article covers a general area of knowledge) if they are top developers and publishers, e.g. Epic Games, Neversoft; they are ranked Mid-importance (article fills in general knowledge of specialized topics) if they are most other well-known companies in the industry, e.g. IGN, Gamestop, Naughty Dog; and Low-importance otherwise. Personally I'm reluctant to go even as high as Mid-importance, because no evidence has been provided of this company being well-known, so I think that Low-importance is justified. --Redrose64 (talk) 14:00, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
References
I have added many References, because there weren't enough of them. :D --7arazred (talk) 17:11, 19 September 2011 (UTC)
GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Revolution Software/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 21:39, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: One found and fixed. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:44, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Linkrot: None found. Jezhotwells (talk) 21:44, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- The lead does not adequately summarise the article, see WP:LEAD
- There is an undue use of promotional and POV language.
- The is a mixture of inline hyperlinks and citations.
- The prose is not very good, not "reasonably well written".
- Not well organised, information needs to be presented logically. Please read WP:MoS and subpages.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- What makes GameFAQs and Revfans reliable sources?
- Most of the sources are WP:Primary sources. This needs good third party sources.
- Misplaced Pages can not be used as a source.
- There is no sourcing for game releases in the Games section.
- Sources used for citations are also present in the external links section which is not permitted, see WP:EL
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- No mention of sales figures; no real indication of whether this company meets the WP:CORP guidelines.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Appears overly promotional
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- stable
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- The specific source of the image needs to be provided.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Shoddily put together, please read the good article criteria and make sure that this article meetrs them before renominating. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: