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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 23:18, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

• Hi, I'll review this article! MathewTownsend (talk) 23:18, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

review

Just a few comments:

• I made some edits that you are free to change.
  • Make a slight tweak to one as Baja California is a state in MX as well as a peninsula. YE 17:29, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
• "developed from a tropical disturbance offshore the coast of Africa. After developing on August 13," - kind of repetitious
  • Removed the first part as it was not true AFAIK. YE 17:29, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
• San Carlos needs disambiguation
  •  Done. YE 17:29, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
• "making Doreen the wettest tropical cyclone for the state of Nevada." - as of that date?
  • Yea, but the record has not been broken since. YE 17:29, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• • but you don't know when a view is reading this article. Perhaps they're read it a year from now, and that statement may not be true then. It's a rule somewhere in MoS not to use uncertain dates. I've changed it. MathewTownsend (talk) 17:50, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
    • If that rule is not in the layout or lead guidelines, then, it should not hold an article back from promotion, BTW. YE 17:55, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Otherwise the article looks fine. Will put on hold. MathewTownsend (talk) 17:02, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

• • Thanks for the review. YE 17:29, 12 July 2012 (UTC)