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The Veronicas discography

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Nominator(s): Till 10:11, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I have worked on it all day, fixed the lead, charts, sections, tables and references, and think it meets the WP:FLC. Till 10:11, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

Resolved comments from Statυs (talk) 00:36, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
Comments from Status: Press releases, from record labels, are not reliable sources for sales. Labels often inflate them. Which one is the press release? Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC) The one from Business Wire. Statυs (talk) 23:48, 19 December 2012 (UTC) Removed. Till 00:11, 20 December 2012 (UTC) The Veronicas: Mtv.com Live EP is missing. Added. Till 00:11, 20 December 2012 (UTC) Charts should match up in the albums and singles sections. I'm not sure what you mean here, sorry. Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC) For album positions, you have: AUS, BEL FL, FRA, IRE, MEX, NLD, NZ, SWI, UK and US. For singles, you have: AUS, AUT, CAN, GER, IRE, NLD, NZ, SWI, UK, US. The same countries should be used throughout the article. Statυs (talk) 23:48, 19 December 2012 (UTC) Removed Belgium, France and Mexico. Till 23:59, 19 December 2012 (UTC) Missing sources for "Other appearances" and "Songwriting credits" section. They are also not present in the infobox. Also, I'm unsure on what songwriting credits have to do with their discography - a discography being an artist's releases. Removed and added to infobox. Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC) Everything's sourced now. Till 00:05, 20 December 2012 (UTC) Statυs (talk) 14:00, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

Resolved comments from Statυs (talk) 00:36, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

Comments from Status:

Press releases, from record labels, are not reliable sources for sales. Labels often inflate them.
- Which one is the press release? Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
  - The one from Business Wire. Statυs (talk) 23:48, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
    - Removed. Till 00:11, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
The Veronicas: Mtv.com Live EP is missing.
- Added. Till 00:11, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Charts should match up in the albums and singles sections.
- I'm not sure what you mean here, sorry. Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
  - For album positions, you have: AUS, BEL FL, FRA, IRE, MEX, NLD, NZ, SWI, UK and US. For singles, you have: AUS, AUT, CAN, GER, IRE, NLD, NZ, SWI, UK, US. The same countries should be used throughout the article. Statυs (talk) 23:48, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
    - Removed Belgium, France and Mexico. Till 23:59, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
Missing sources for "Other appearances" and "Songwriting credits" section. They are also not present in the infobox. Also, I'm unsure on what songwriting credits have to do with their discography - a discography being an artist's releases.
- Removed and added to infobox. Till 22:57, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
  - Everything's sourced now. Till 00:05, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

Statυs (talk) 14:00, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

Comments

"The Veronicas, 2009" change comma to "in" perhaps
- Done. Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
"The Secret Life of... was" add a comma just before "was"
- Done. Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
"including "Everything I'm Not" and "When It All Falls Apart"; both reached" check your grammar at the end, would suggest adding a "they" just after the semi-colon
- Fixed. Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
The table in the other appearances section does not meet WP:DTT, add table captions to ensure it does
- I don't know what that is, sorry. Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
The table in the other appearances section does not meet WP:ACCESS, add scope cols and rows to ensure it does
- I don't think I know how to do that. Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)
Any external links, with WP:ELNO in mind?

Otherwise seems very good. TBr and ley 01:46, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! Till 02:00, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

Comments

My perennial question, where are release dates for albums and associated release territories referenced?
What does "2ca" mean in the infobox?
- No idea. It was there before I began editing the article. I've corrected it. Till 01:03, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"the album experienced success in Australia," why not "the album was successful in..."?
- Changed. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"certified quadriple Platinum" I guess you mean quadruple, and I suggest you link "certified" appropriately.
- Linked and corrected spelling. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"a top twenty hit in " I imagine some hyphens missing here, e.g. "top-twenty"
- A reviewer from FAC told me that hyphens are invasive and should not be used. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
"was released two years following the release of The Secret Life of...." why not just say what year it was released?
- Corrected. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
The intro stops coverage of the band's discog in 2007, what happened next?
- Added release of "Lolita". Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Our article has a capital O in The Secret Life Of..., why not here?
- MOS:CT clearly states that the first and last words in a title are always capitalized.
Where is "The Veronicas: Mtv.com Live EP" referenced?
Where is non-charting "Popular" referenced?
- Added a source. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
Avoid double full stops in refs e.g. refs 20, 21 etc...
- Fixed. Till 00:40, 23 December 2012 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 21:40, 22 December 2012 (UTC)