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Jim Kilburn is currently a Language and literature good article nominee. Nominated by Sarastro1 (talk) at 23:32, 20 January 2013 (UTC) An editor has placed this article on hold to allow improvements to be made to satisfy the good article criteria. Recommendations have been left on the review page, and editors have seven days to address these issues. Improvements made in this period will influence the reviewer's decision whether or not to list the article as a good article.

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jim Kilburn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)

Comments –

• Use ndashes (–) instead of hyphens (-) in dates' ranges.

• Well spotted: bad mistake! Fixed now. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

• "He bowled fast-paced off spin." needs a ref.

• The ref was at the end of the next sentence. I've linked them to make it clear. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

• You may link Barnsley Chronicle and the Yorkshire Post.

• Latter one done now, but I'd prefer to leave the Barnsley Chronicle as there is no article and I don't see the purpose of a red link for a borderline-notability article. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

• "Kilburn's writings on the Yorkshire players of the 1930s and 1940s made them well-known to the public as personalities and he wrote several pieces for the Yorkshire Post which became well-known." comma after personalities

• Done. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

• You may link England team and Australia.

• Did the first; the second is not the team, and linking the country would be overlinking. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

• Don't you think the Bibliography section needs a ref?

• For a bibliography section, the books serve as their own reference, as I understand it. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

Overall good work, very well-written. I really enjoyed it. Zia Khan 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)

I'm busy right now, will take a look later today. Zia Khan 17:50, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

Final assessment

GA review (see Misplaced Pages:Good article criteria and WP:GACN)

1. Well written.

   a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Misplaced Pages:No original research):

3. Broad in its coverage.

   a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):

4. Neutral .

   Fair representation, no bias:

5. Stable.

   No edit wars nor disputed contents:

6. Illustrated appropriately by images.

   a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

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