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Training Day (The Office) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 28, 2013. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Training Day (The Office)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 16:09, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

• Again here, is there a production still you could use for the infobox?
• Please note all the characters' full names, as well as their actors, on first reference in the infobox.
• Also, I like the idea of grouping the "Plot" paragraphs into each subplot. As it reads right now, the plot jumps around too much and gets confusing.

• It's a bit hard to separate the little plot strands, for they are all tied together. -- NoD'ohnuts (talk) 23:06, 24 January 2013 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts

• Deangelo's name is misspelled as "deAngelo" a few times. Please make consistent.
• In the infobox, guest character "Jahmilla Jackson as Gwyneth Philbin" is noted, but not included in the prose or cited. It at least needs a reference.
• Dup links tool shows for duplicate links: Will Ferrell twice; Garage Sale (The Office); and Anchorman.
• No problems with dab links. Check links shows all external links are working. The image of Ferrell is appropriately licensed.
• You should also note Ferrell's reception for the rest of the story arc, I recall there was a lot of buzz about him appearing. Did reviews on his performance ever change?
• Were there no cultural references?
• Finally, you should note that this episode is near the end of Steve Carrell's run and why he quit the show.

Will await your responses. —Ed! 16:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

Excellent work. Passing the GA. —Ed! 03:38, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

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