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Reverts by Dicklyon
Dicklyon has said in other remarks that the feedback amplifier is a form of feedback control. However, contrary to Dicklyon's own expressed view, in this massive revert Dicklyon removed material that supports and sources this claim. This removed material outlines the key difference between this type of control and the more elaborate methods identified by the sources. The deleted explanation is as follows:
- When a system, sometimes called a load or a plant, is characterized by a simple input/output model, it can be controlled by a single variable like the output of a negative feedback amplifier. Then the negative feedback amplifier can be used as a type of feedback control, maintaining a stable control signal for the load or plant. Such a controller is more rudimentary than those that employ measurements of the internal variables governing the plant, the so called full-state feedback or state-space approach.
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- Boris Lurie, Paul Enright (2000). Classical feedback control with MATLAB. CRC Press. p. xiii. ISBN 9780824703707.
- A simple example from Lurie & Enright cited below (their Figure 1.5 a) is the case where the 'plant' presents itself as a load resistor and the input signal to the amplifier is a voltage. The feedback amplifier then serves as an interface between the input signal source and the load that tends to keep the voltage across the load constant (presumed to be a 'plant' requirement). If the feedback amplifier were not present the voltage across the load would vary with changes in either the load resistance or in the output impedance of the signal source because they would constitute a simple voltage divider.
- Boris Lurie, Paul Enright (2000). Classical feedback control with MATLAB. CRC Press. p. xiii. ISBN 9780824703707.
- Shimon Y. Nof (2009). "§4.7: The emergence of modern control theory". Springer handbook of automation. Springer Science & Business Media. pp. 63 ff. ISBN 9783540788317.
- D Roy Choudhury (2005). "Chapter 11: State-variable formulation". Modern control engineering. PHI Learning Pvt. Ltd. pp. 522 ff. ISBN 9788120321960.
Dicklyon has removed this material with the one-line Edit Summary: Tangential bloat, not supported by the cited sources. It is obvious that the material is sourced and is hardly tangential. At a minimum, Talk-page explanation of this peremptory action is needed. Brews ohare (talk) 18:30, 30 November 2014 (UTC)
Dicklyon's further reversions
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In this massive revert Dicklyon removed many different topics raised in the section Negative feedback amplifier with no Talk page discussion but only the erroneous one-line Edit Summary: Tangential bloat, not supported by the cited sources. Before these reverts the original subsection contained the observation:
CommentsDicklyon claims that this material is not supported by the cited sources. I find that claim invalid. Dicklyon also claims this material is "tangential bloat", again an unsupportable contention. Brews ohare (talk) 18:30, 30 November 2014 (UTC)
In these edits that I reverted, Brews has introduced the state-space approach, apparently because he thinks it supports his thesis that amplifiers are somehow fundamentally different in concept from control uses of negative feedback. The logic of twisted interferences from sources is so bizarre and flawed that I can't begin to point out its errors. Reverting was the only easy way to contineu to protect the article from the abuse it gets from Brews when I go away for a while. Dicklyon (talk) 03:58, 1 December 2014 (UTC)
ConclusionThere being no attempt here to support the idea that placing the negative feedback amplifier in the context of modern control theory is "tangential bloat", and it being perfectly obvious that all statements in the material reverted by Dicklyon are supported by reputable sources, I propose to revert Dicklyon's action. Any objections, or perhaps, suggested reformulations? Brews ohare (talk) 13:53, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
Brews, you better find someone who supports your analysis to explain it better, as I'm still not getting it. Everything you say seems wrong to me. I have no desire to "squelch all mention of differences between feedback controllers", though it's not clear to me what kind of differences might be relevant to this article. Maybe someone else can point out differences that you're finding that would be relevant to the article on negative feedback. Dicklyon (talk) 19:29, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
The point here is not who is an expert here, but what the sources say. I am the only one here using sources. Some of you want to say the quotes I have used to express the content of these sources are defective, but none of you has provided a source-based alternative. All you have is some fuzzy conceptions of your own, that you are unwilling to support with links to sourced text. Maybe you all have persuaded yourselves that something is amiss here, but it appears to be a case of groupthink, detached from published material. Brews ohare (talk) 22:30, 3 December 2014 (UTC) It seems to me that if you read this reverted text and the notes accompanying it you will find it is a nearly verbatim version of what these sources say. Assuming that is the case, the only question is whether it is pertinent. I'd say setting the negative feedback amplifier in its use as a controller in the context of full-state and state-variable control is entirely pertinent and that is all that is done here. So far no-one has addressed this matter directly. Brews ohare (talk) 22:57, 3 December 2014 (UTC) If you read this second block of reverted text it consists of Rashid's formula for the error signal he defines for the negative feedback amplifier, and the observation that A, β and the external signal I are external variables (which no-one can dispute) while the full-state and state-variable approach involves internal variables, as stated explicitly by the three cited sources. There is no dispute about these matters, and they separate the negative feedback amplifier from the so-called "modern" state-space approach. Dicklyon has raised questions about the limitations of Rashid's analysis when fluctuations are present, and these are dealt with by the introduction of the disturbance D in the Negative feedback amplifier section. They do not impact Rashid's formulation in the present context of separating "classical" from "modern" feedback control. This entire brouhaha is due to failure to concentrate upon what is being said and failure to directly address what the sources have to say. That problem would be avoided if critics would stick to sources, not using proxy summaries about personal concepts of what the sources say, but actually using the explicit text from sources to support their assertions. If this were done, it would soon evolve that any issues here are actually over other matters not raised in these two reverted contributions. Brews ohare (talk) 23:30, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
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How do you separate an application of negative feedback from an approach that could be applied to it?
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This question posed by Dicklyon about the distinction between the negative feedback amplifier and state-space control is followed by this remark: The meaning and logic there escape me; no source supports these conclusions. The confusion here is born of impatience interfering with understanding. The logic of Dicklyon's remark is that "modern" control theory could be applied to the negative feedback amplifier, so how can it be a separate matter? That seems to be so. But the meaning of my remark, which is perhaps badly expressed in this one sentence, is very clear from what is said in the material Dicklyon reverted: the meaning is that the negative feedback amplifier belongs to the "classical" approach that ignores the internal variables determining the state of the controlled object, while the "modern" approach to control employs these variables. This division is remarked upon by all three of the state-space sources. To quote two of them:
I think with this in mind it is clear that what I am trying to express is that the negative feedback amplifier, in its focus entirely upon single-variable external control of its controlled object, is to be distinguished from state-variable control that uses information about the internal state of the controlled object. That claim is supported by both these sources, and is obvious. Brews ohare (talk) 15:04, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
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Dicklyon says above:
This remark is confusing. It claims synthesis, interpretation and conclusions using absolutely no supporting diffs or comparisons with sources. So it is difficult to know what exactly is being labeled as unsourced synthesis, unsourced interpretation, and unsourced conclusion. What adds to the confusion is that it says while everybody disagrees with this unspecified material, "this discussion is all about what sources say, which none of us disagree with". And yet in reverting this material and this material the only sources discussed are those cited in the reverted material, and the only editor discussing these sources is myself. No editor on this page has presented anything from these or other sources to support Dicklyon's claims either that all assembled agree with these sources, or that I have misconstrued them in some unfathomable manner. This remark by Dicklyon is just one more example of venting, and has no relation to understanding the sources or presenting them properly. I recommend that in place of such attacks, the sources be addressed. For example, here you will find the comment:
Perhaps Dicklyon can express whether he agrees with these sources, and can express what should be changed in this or this reverted presentation that would reflect these sources more accurately? I suspect that the only objection that can be rasied is that the negative feedback amplifier is not mentioned explicitly in these quotes. If there is any real doubt that the negative feedback amplifier is included in what is referred to as "classical" control systems or the "transfer function approach" or that it is limited to control of simple input/output objects, that objection can be rapidly dispelled by further quotes from these sources, which apparently Dicklyon has yet to comprehend. In fact, this objection has been met in exactly this manner already in this thread. Brews ohare (talk) 21:11, 5 December 2014 (UTC)
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Failure on all sides
Binksternet has now filed an edit war protest asking for Adminstrator blockage of further discussion here by Brews ohare. My removal of annoying hatting to conceal my arguments on the Talk page is not, of course, about actual content, but about editors' aggressive activities to suppress even the discussion of content. I had hoped that direct discussion of sources and verbatim quotes from them might occur, but that has not happened despite Google book links directly to these quotes and my request for input upon their presentation and context. Although WP is supposed to present what sources say, and Talk pages are supposed to discuss sources and their presentation directly, the editors here have avoided this activity in favor of others. An unfortunate choice, and it leaves me disappointed, not so much for this topic, but for the depressing lack of interest in collaboration.
It seems I have not succeeded in raising any curiosity among the editors here, or any enthusiasm for writing a better article. In the face of the idées fixe assembled here, I can't do more to generate interest in a fuller presentation of this topic and the vast literature surrounding it, so I'll leave things as they are. Brews ohare (talk) 16:09, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
Removal of link
If you'll stay out of the way, interest in working on the article is likely to return gradually. There are still plenty of things to work on, starting by clearing out distracting bloat, like I did here. Dicklyon (talk) 22:52, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
- Unending amazement, Dick. Here you are lamenting that Rashid's idealizations have shortcomings, and then deleting the most often referred to shortcoming of employing unilateral elements that ignore the complexities of all real feedback systems. Congrats. Brews ohare (talk) 03:37, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
- The text I removed said "This circuit uses ideal unilateral elements," which was self-evident to those who know what it means, and cryptic to the general reader; and the cited source did not support or explain the assertion. It would not hurt to explain the unilateral model, and the limitation of its accuracy, but throwing it out in a figure caption this way was not helpful, nor was the citation. Dicklyon (talk) 04:28, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
- The removed link leads to:
- "The forward path may not be strictly unilateral, the feedback path is bilateral, and the input and output coupling networks are often complicated. Thus the ideal feedback model is not an adequate representation of a practical amplifier."
- "We shall develop Bode's feedback theory, which is applicable to the general feedback configuration and avoids the necessity of identifying the transfer functions μ(s) and β(s)."
- The removed link leads to:
- Seems pertinent and not to support a view that the "cited source did not support or explain the assertion". Brews ohare (talk)