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Feedback from Garrison
• Excellent job so far! Very coherent structure, neutral writing style, and comprehensive content. Good job with linking and citations. I like the map you have provided and think the article could benefit from more visual content.
• Additional editing needed for grammatical errors, such as extra comma in “Greenland Sea, Barents, Sea, Kara Sea…” and in “Another plentiful resource is the arctic is located underwater; fish” should be a colon, not a semicolon.
• I would be interested in learning more about how China and other nations are trying to get involved, add more info here if you can.
• The Climate Refugees section needs some work, there are no citations and it needs to be copy edited.
• Please add categories to your article.
• Good job linking to other articles but try to add more links to from other articles to yours. — Preceding unsigned comment added by California1990 (talk • contribs) 01:44, 3 April 2017 (UTC)
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