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September 19, 2005	Peer review	Reviewed
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August 17, 2009	Featured article review	Demoted
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This sentence: Pneumonia believed to be due to bacteria is treated with antibiotics. should be changed to: Pneumonia believed to be due to bacteria and is treated with antibiotics. 38.105.173.1 (talk) 20:31, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Not done: The sentence is grammatically correct as is, while the requested text is grammatically incorrect. —KuyaBriBri 20:38, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

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Comorbidities

There are at least three uses of this word which could be replaced by non technical English. Is this page intended to be read only by people with medical training or is it meant to be available to everyone? The Viral section ends with "can arise as a comorbid condition" which could be changed to "can arise as a consequence" The Hospital section ends with "comorbidities are an issue" which could be changed to "accompanying disorders are an issue" The Ventilator section ends with "whichever disorders are comorbid" which could be changed to "whichever disorders are also present" — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.196.97.86 (talk) 21:20, 12 January 2018 (UTC)

94.196.97.86Thanks for flagging this. I updated the article and took some of your recommendations. Hope to see you back on Misplaced Pages! JenOttawa (talk) 02:58, 18 January 2018 (UTC)

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