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Talk:Transylvanian peasant revolt#Neutrality II
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Borsoka on 15:14, 7 February 2018 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
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Dispute overview
Rgvis says that the article Transylvanian peasant revolt is unbalanced and disputes its neutrality.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
I sought assistance from Wikiproject:Romania and from Misplaced Pages:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard. I also changed the text, taking into account suggestions from members of the latter noticeboard, but Rqvis still maintains his/her view. All my attempts to persuade him to explain his/her concerns have failed, because he/she accusses me of misconduct and refers to "other editors" who allegedly share his/her concerns. I involved Seraphim System because Rgvis accuses me of changing his/her edits.
How do you think we can help?
I do not know. I hope you will know. Thank you for your assistance.
Summary of dispute by Rgvis
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Comment on content, not contributors. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:20, 8 February 2018 (UTC) |
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The article does not keep a balanced content regarding the historical facts presented; it is heavily based on the positions of authors affiliated to the Hungarian historiography, ignoring almost completely opinions of those affiliated to the Romanian historiography. When I tried to contribute with legitimate referenced content, I was brutally reverted (against all Misplaced Pages rules) by the user:Borsoka, who basically acts like a private owner of this article. This problem has been notified by other editors, too (this can be verified by reviewing the editing history of all pages regarding this topic: article, talk, and disputes' pages). Thank you. (Rgvis (talk) 13:25, 8 February 2018 (UTC)) |
Comment in your own section. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:20, 8 February 2018 (UTC) |
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Summary of dispute by Seraphim System
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.It does look like a response was inserted in the middle of my comment, but this could have been a good faith error. It did not alter my comment. Beyond that, I don't remember much about this dispute and I was only briefly involved so I am not sure how much help I will be, but I am willing to participate if it would be helpful. Seraphim System 16:41, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the above clarification. I would be grateful if you could participate in the resolution process. Borsoka (talk) 16:56, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
Talk:Transylvanian peasant revolt#Neutrality II discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.- Volunteer note - The posting at the neutral point of view noticeboard has been closed without resolution, so that the filing here is the only current effort to resolve this dispute. The filing party has notified the other parties. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:35, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer note - Are the editors willing to have moderated discussion in which they focus on article content and not on each other? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:20, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, of course. Thank you for your moderation. Borsoka (talk) 17:29, 8 February 2018 (UTC)Borsoka (talk) 10:36, 9 February 2018 (UTC)
What part of "Are the editors willing to have moderated discussion in which they focus on article content and not on each other?" do I need to restate or rework? If there is a behavioral problem, this is not the place to discuss it. However, the discussion of content is sometimes more useful than back-and-forth discussions of conduct. Are the editors willing to comment on content and not on contributors, or does this need to go to a conduct forum, where it is likely to be closed inconclusively? Robert McClenon (talk) 18:34, 9 February 2018 (UTC) |
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- Volunteer note - Do the editors want to engage in moderated discussion of content only, without commenting on conduct or each other? Sometimes resolving the content issue, whether by mediation or otherwise, will end the conduct issues or at least permit the conduct issues to subside, but this noticeboard is only for the discussion of article content. If the editors will discuss content, a volunteer moderator will mediate. (If the editors want to talk about conduct, this is the wrong place and/or the wrong time.) Robert McClenon (talk) 14:04, 10 February 2018 (UTC)
- Yes. Borsoka (talk) 02:22, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
- Comment I would be willing to participate in the discussion as well, but it would be helpful for me also if editors agree to just focus on content and sources here. The volunteers here can not resolve conduct issues - but I think it is a good idea to at least try this discussion first and ANI may not be necessary - sometimes it is better to try to AGF and start over to work through a content dispute.Seraphim System 02:32, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer inquiry - User:Rgvis - Are you willing to take part in discussion here that is limited to article content (and perhaps civil discussion of article content can avoid the need to focus on conduct)? Robert McClenon (talk) 01:33, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- Sure, no problem (although it wouldn't be the first time, in this case), we can try again (patiently, due to time constraints). (Rgvis (talk) 08:26, 12 February 2018 (UTC))
First statement by moderator
Okay. I will try to mediate this dispute. Please read User:Robert McClenon/Mediation Rules and follow the rules. Comment on content only, and not on contributors. Be civil and concise. Take note of the rule that you are expected to reply to my requests for inputs every 48 hours. (I see a mention of time constraints. If you cannot respond within 48 hours, it may be necessary to close this case, and formal mediation, which can take months, may work better.) Will each editor please state, in one paragraph, what they think the issues are with regard to what should be in the article? (Talk only about the article, not about the process or the editors.) Robert McClenon (talk) 11:41, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- I do not know. Borsoka (talk) 16:53, 12 February 2018 (UTC)
- Let's start with the revision of the name of Vlachs to that of Romanians, in general context. (Rgvis (talk) 07:44, 14 February 2018 (UTC))
First statements by editors
Thank you for your suggestion. Why do you think, the replacement of the Vlach ethnonym is necessary? Please note that two "neutral" historians cited in the article (Joseph Held and Jean W. Sedlar) insist on the use of the Vlach ethnonym in the context. Borsoka (talk) 08:24, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Second statement by moderator
Comment in the section for statements by editors. Reply only to the moderator and not to each other.
It appears that the only real issue is whether to use the ethnonym 'Vlach' or 'Romanians'. Is that correct? If so, please justify your position on the ethnonym. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:29, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
As the moderator, I am neutral, but I need to be persuaded that it is necessary to change the ethnonym. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:29, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Second statements by editors
This is only the first issue.
Why "Romanian" instead "Vlach":
- standard recommendation, as per WP:NCET
- the historian's explanation: ,
- to avoid any confusion with the contemporary meaning of "Vlach":
As for Jean W. Sedlar, she does not insist on the use of any term ("Romanian" or "Vlach", "Hungarian" or "Magyar", etc): .
(Rgvis (talk) 09:09, 15 February 2018 (UTC))
Third statement by moderator
An editor states above, "This is only the first issue", about changing a denonym. I had asked the editors to identify the issues, not to identify one issue at a time. Will each editor please identify all of the issues that they think need to be addressed? If it is necessary to provide a long list of issues, provide a long list of issues, but, if so, I may find it necessary to refer this dispute to formal mediation, a lengthy and careful process. Please state what the issues as to article content are. Be civil, and as concise as possible. Comment on content, not contributors. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:59, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
Third statements by editors
- the introductory section is ambiguous in terms of some important aspects of the presented event (such as the ethnic component of peasants, or the location of the uprising), but, on the other hand, it abounds in some rather too detailed (and marginal) information for this part of the article;
- the "Background" section superficially treats the history of the Transylvanian Romanians (of all social classes) and almost ignores the religious aspects of the presented context;
- the "Peasant war" section does not mention essential aspects of the uprising, like the calling for the establishment and recognition of the Universitas Hungarorum et Valachorum - Estate of Hungarians and Romanians; it also selectively uses information from some referenced sources;
- the "Aftermath" section does not sufficiently emphasize on the historical consequences of the presented events in terms of social and political life of Transylvania for the next centuries;
PS: it would still be useful for the moderator to express his point of view on the first mentioned issue. (Rgvis (talk) 08:46, 17 February 2018 (UTC))
- Regarding use of "Vlach" my main objection to the term is that it is not widely known, and no arguments have been given for why the distinction is necessary. If it doesn't add anything, then I think the most widely recognizable term should be used for the benefit of readers who are not expected to be familiar with specialized terminology. Seraphim System 08:53, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
Fourth statement by moderator
We have a list of four or five issues that one of the editors think should be addressed. This noticeboard is normally for relatively simple content disputes that take one week to two weeks to resolve, not for ones that have multiple aspects that go on for weeks or months. I have several options. The first and least intrusive would be to put this case on hold and see if the editors can work collaboratively on the article talk page to improve the article. The second would be for the editors to make a list of issues that they think should be addressed, and then have a multi-part Request for Comments that will run for 30 days (after this case is closed as taken to the RFC). The third will be for the editors to agree to formal mediation. I would like to ask the editors to give three-part Yes-No answers, to whether they are willing to use each of the three options. By the way, if you say No to any of the three options, please indicate concisely why. I don't like it isn't adequate. To restate one of the original rules, you are expected to reply within 48 hours, and it would be helpful to reply in 24 to 36 hours. Which of the methods of proceeding are agreeable? Robert McClenon (talk) 16:43, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
Fourth statements by editors
(1) Yes. (2) Yes. (3) Yes. (I would prefer option 1, because the opening of new procedures could be time-consuming.) Borsoka (talk) 17:17, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
Sure, no problem (Y/Y/Y). (Rgvis (talk) 14:35, 18 February 2018 (UTC))
Fifth statement by moderator
I will suspend the rules against back-and-forth discussion and against editing the article. Discuss the article here; edit the article when consensus on any particular point is reached. Be civil and concise. Comment on content, not contributors. If this method of working together to improve the article works, good. If there is incivility, I may give one warning, or I may fail the moderation. If anyone needs a neutral comment, I will be here; otherwise, just keep working, but be civil. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:38, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Fifth space for extended discussion by editors
@Seraphim System:, my primary concern about the term "Romanian" is that it is strictly connected to a state (Romania) which came into being in 1859, centuries after the events discussed in the article. Borsoka (talk) 05:11, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
- No. The term also refers to a language which is derived from the Roman (Latin) language, and to the people who speak this language, and the term has been used for centuries. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:16, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
@Rgvis:, why do you think that 16th-century Italian authors' remarks about the Vlachs' ethnonym are relevant in connection with an article in English WP about a 15th-century event? Please also remember that Sedlar exclusively uses the term Vlach when writing about the revolt (, page 404). Taking into account that the neutrality of the article is debated, because it allegedly prefers the "Hungarian POV" (whatever it is), I think we should prefer the terminology of neutral (non-Hungarian and non-Romanian) scholars. Held and Sedlar are neutral scholars and Held dedicated a whole article to the events discussed in the article (he uses the variant Wlach). Borsoka (talk) 05:11, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
It's about ethnicity and not the nation state. Anyhow, among the English authors there is no such rule to use predominantly the word "vlach". (see above the "Second statements by editors" section). (Rgvis (talk) 08:25, 22 February 2018 (UTC))
- Sorry, I do not understand your above remark. Do you say that there are neutral authors who use the term "Romanian" in the context of the article? Who are they? Please remember that I demonstrated above that Sedlar uses exclusively this term when writing about the revolt even if she says that Romanian and Vlach could be used as a synonyms (she uses the term Vlach at least 5 times in a short text about the revolt). Held even implies that the use of the term Romanian would be anachronistic in the context of the Transylvanian peasant rebellion (He emphasizes that the Vlachs were only later called Romanians in his English monography about the revolt). Borsoka (talk) 11:13, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Robert McClenon:, I need some guidance from you. Rgvis said that he regarded the article unbalanced because it "is heavily based on the positions of authors affiliated to the Hungarian historiography". Now, we are debating a term which is not used by Hungarian scholars, but neutral authors. Moreover, he refers to 15th-century Italian scholars' view on the Vlachs' ethnonym. How could we continue the issue? Thank you in advance. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- I was not expecting to be asked repeatedly to adjudicate issues about the neutrality of terms based on old sources, in what is evidently only the first of several issues. If it will repeatedly be necessary for a neutral party to rule on the neutrality of material, you need the longer and more intensive process of formal mediation. The term Romanian to refer to a people and a language predates the Romanian nation. See Romanian language, whose name means that its people are of Roman origin and that their language is derived from Roman (Latin). Robert McClenon (talk) 02:16, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- Can the editors work this out themselves, or will it be necessary to request formal mediation? Robert McClenon (talk) 02:16, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- Sorry, if you do not have time to regularly mediate, I think we should seek assistance at an other forum. Borsoka (talk) 03:13, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- It isn't a matter of time so much as the type of mediation required. If there is only one issue, I can mediate. If, as was mentioned above, this is not the only issue, and the are others, mediation will take longer. I will comment that the views of scholars from earlier centuries (earlier than the late twentieth) are normally considered less reliable than more recent scholars except on matters of older historiography or when there is no recent historiography. Will the editors please explain their views on "Vlach" or "Romanian"? Will the editors please list all of the issues that should be mediated? If there are multiple issues, we will have to go to formal mediation. Robert McClenon (talk) 11:26, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you. I think the ethnonym is out of the scope of the neutrality issue which is the subject of this dispute. The term "Vlach" is exclusively based on works written by neutral (not Hungarian) historians, not "on the position of authors affiliated to the Hungarian historiography". Of course, it can be discussed separately, on the article's Talk page. Borsoka (talk) 13:54, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- It isn't a matter of time so much as the type of mediation required. If there is only one issue, I can mediate. If, as was mentioned above, this is not the only issue, and the are others, mediation will take longer. I will comment that the views of scholars from earlier centuries (earlier than the late twentieth) are normally considered less reliable than more recent scholars except on matters of older historiography or when there is no recent historiography. Will the editors please explain their views on "Vlach" or "Romanian"? Will the editors please list all of the issues that should be mediated? If there are multiple issues, we will have to go to formal mediation. Robert McClenon (talk) 11:26, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- Sorry, if you do not have time to regularly mediate, I think we should seek assistance at an other forum. Borsoka (talk) 03:13, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- @Robert McClenon:, I need some guidance from you. Rgvis said that he regarded the article unbalanced because it "is heavily based on the positions of authors affiliated to the Hungarian historiography". Now, we are debating a term which is not used by Hungarian scholars, but neutral authors. Moreover, he refers to 15th-century Italian scholars' view on the Vlachs' ethnonym. How could we continue the issue? Thank you in advance. Borsoka (talk) 11:23, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- Sorry, I do not understand your above remark. Do you say that there are neutral authors who use the term "Romanian" in the context of the article? Who are they? Please remember that I demonstrated above that Sedlar uses exclusively this term when writing about the revolt even if she says that Romanian and Vlach could be used as a synonyms (she uses the term Vlach at least 5 times in a short text about the revolt). Held even implies that the use of the term Romanian would be anachronistic in the context of the Transylvanian peasant rebellion (He emphasizes that the Vlachs were only later called Romanians in his English monography about the revolt). Borsoka (talk) 11:13, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
Sixth statement by moderator
We will start all over at the beginning. Will each editor please state, in bullet form, what all of the issues are that they think need to be addressed? Then we can decide whether moderated discussion here will be useful or whether another forum is needed. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:28, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
Sixth statements by editors
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Talk:Kashmir conflict#Nimitz replacement
– Discussion in progress. Filed by Kautilya3 on 11:45, 14 February 2018 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
Location of dispute
Users involved
- Kautilya3 (talk · contribs)
- Dilpa kaur (talk · contribs)
- Mar4d (talk · contribs)
- NadirAli (talk · contribs)
Dispute overview
On 9 February, I made an edit to the Kashmir conflict page with the edit summary copy edit and add sources
. In the process, I have expanded a sentence based on the information from a source, which can be seen more clearly in this redo of the edit. Dilpa kaur complained on the talk page that it fails NPOV. Then Mar4d and NadirAli reverted it, also claiming that it fails NPOV. However, nobody has explained how it fails NPOV. The additional source provided by Dilpa kaur says pretty much the same thing.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
Talk page discussion at Talk:Kashmir conflict#Nimitz replacement.
How do you think we can help?
Interrogate and resolve the claim of NPOV failure.
Summary of dispute by Dilpa kaur
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by Mar4d
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Summary of dispute by NadirAli
Kautilya3's claim that there is no contradiction between the sources is WP:MISREPRESENTATION.
Here's the Ganguly source
They also reached an informal agreement that the initial UN appointed plebiscite administrator, Adm. Chester W. Nimitz of the United States, would have to be replaced. India had taken the lead in pushing for Nimitz's removal because it had perceived a pro-Pakistani bias on the part of the United States in the Security Council debates. However, when word of this informal agreement became public, an outcry ensued against the Indian position throughout influential sections of the Pakistani press. Nehru and Bogra, to their mutual credit, nonetheless managed to limit the damage and placed the negotiations back on track.
A few things to note here. Nimitz was a UN appointee and it was India which took the lead in demanding the removal of a UN appointed plebiscite administrator. So clearly the whole problem here is India's fault as it bad to pick issues with the U.N. Yet Kautilya3's edits seek to place the blame solely on Pakistan as the reason for the stall in negotiations for a plebiscite. This is why his edit fails WP:NPOV as it misses India's role in stirring up the matter.
Now here is the contradiction. Rizvi is saying that after agreeing to India's demand Mr Bogra (Pakistani PM) backtracked from the agreement to remove Nimitz. This contradicts Ganguly who says that after the agreement to remove Nimitz was done there was an outcry in the Pakistani press but still Bogra ("to his credit") resisted it and managed to keep the negotiations with India on track. Ganguly then says the real problem started with the US announcement to send military aid to Pakistan.--NadirAli نادر علی (talk) 00:25, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
References
- Sumit Ganguly (5 January 2002). Conflict Unending: India-Pakistan Tensions Since 1947. Columbia University Press. pp. 24–. ISBN 978-0-231-50740-0.
Talk:Kashmir conflict#Nimitz replacement discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.- Volunteer note - There has been discussion on the article talk page. The filing editor has notified the other editors. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:45, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer note -Evaluating the discussion-scape.~ Winged Blades 17:07, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
- In view of my involvements with some of editors on the broader locus of the dispute, I'm recusing myself.But, I may choose to chime in, shall any relevant need arise:) Robert, best of luck!~ Winged Blades 17:01, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
First statement by moderator
I will try to act as the moderator. I don't claim to have any particular knowledge about the Kashmir conflict. I expect the editors to explain any details that are important. Please read User:Robert McClenon/Mediation Rules and follow the rules. I will remind the editors that ArbCom discretionary sanctions apply to India and Pakistan. Be civil and concise. Comment on content, not contributors. Now: Will each editor please state, in one paragraph, what they think is the issue with regard to article content? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:36, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
First statements by editors
There are two issues here causing the dispute.
1. The removal of content about India's fault in creating trouble. Ganguly tells us India took the lead in getting rid of a UN appointed plebiscite administrator. So that clearly shows India started the problem. But this edit removes the fact that India did not approve of Nimitz, thus laying the onus on Pakistan for stalling proceedings. This half-picture misrepresents actual facts.
2. Bogra agreed to India's demand that Nimitz be removed. Both the sources which are cited - Rizvi and Ganguly - agree on this point. But there is a contradiction on the second part, but Kautilya3 sees no contradiction and claims both sources say the same thing when actually they do not. The contradiction between the sources is that Rizvi says that Bogra backtracked on the agreement to remove Nimitz. But Ganguly says that Bogra did not backtrach, he in fact resisted media pressure from his country to backtrack and actually kept the negotiations with India on track. The real problem started later when the US announced its intent to give Pakistan military aid.--NadirAli نادر علی (talk) 07:13, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
References
- ^ Sumit Ganguly (5 January 2002). Conflict Unending: India-Pakistan Tensions Since 1947. Columbia University Press. pp. 25–. ISBN 978-0-231-50740-0.
It has not yet been explained what was the NPOV violation in the content that I had added. Secondly, I am not confident that "India's fault" is acceptable terminology for a Wikipedian to use. We are not here to find "faults" with countries.
In any case, moving on in the interest of finding a resolution, here are short answers to NadirAli's points:
1. Nehru was proposing a new bilateral process, which was quite different from the UN process. There was no role for the UN in Nehru's process, and certainly not for the UN-appointed plebiscite administrator. Language like "India's fault" and "creating trouble" is quite out of line.
2. The paragraph under discussion, both before and after the edit ends with the "stall in the proceedings". Did Bogra accept the Nimitz replacement before this or after? After the "stall", other things happened that soured the deal very quickly. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 23:22, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
In more detail:
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The context for the content is as follows. India took the Kashmir issue to the UN in 1948 while the war was still going on. Having achieved a cease-fire, three successive UN missions (UNCIP, Dixon and Graham missions) failed to find a solution acceptable to both the sides or to enforce their preferred solution. The world powers felt unable to do anything and encouraged India and Pakistan to discuss the issue bilaterally. A historic opportunity then presented itself in 1953. India lost the goodwill of the popular party in Kashmir. Rather than digging his heels in, Nehru (India's prime minister) was determined to resolve the dispute. Observers in both India and Pakistan expected that if a plebiscite were held in the state, India would lose it in the Kashmir Valley (the key region of the dispute). But plebiscite is exactly what Nehru proposed, i.e., he was willing to lose the Kashmir Valley. All this is explained in great detail in the Gowher Rizvi article. This was a dramatic reversal of India's earlier positions, according to Rizvi. The end of the conflict was within the arm's reach. The joint communiqué issued at the end of the Nehru-Bogra talks said that both the sides agreed to "appoint" a plebiscite administrator by April 1954. Rizvi also states that this was understood to be a "mutually acceptable" plebiscite administrator. It is important to note that theree was no mention of Admiral Nimitz (American, appointed in 1948 by the UN) anywhere. Nehru had nothing against Nimitz, but he did not want any of the Great Powers (US, Britian and Soviet Union) involved, because in his view it would again embroil Kashmir in Great Power politics. He wanted somebody from a smaller power, which was uninvolved in Asian politics, and one which would be acceptable to both the sides. 1. The idea that this amount to a "replacement of Nimitz" is the Pakistani view. The UN had failed and Nehru was finding his own direction. So, the return of a UN-appointed plebiscite administrator was out of the question. The US understood this, and it gently pressured Nimitz to resign, and resign he did. But, the Pakistani establishment was apparently uncomfortable with this. It wanted the UN back in, it wanted the US in control, which was shortly going to be its major military ally. It didn't care to have a neutral third party running the plebiscite. The magnitude of Nehru's offer was completely lost on the Pakistanis. They were "nit-picking", according ot Snedden. 2. As far as I understand the timelines, within a week of Bogra returning from talks, all hell broke lose in Pakistan. The US was worried that Bogra would lose power, and they decided that he should be visibly supported by making public the previously secret negotations regarding their military alliance. So, things moved pretty quickly after this point. While Bogra might have shown accommodation later, February 1954 is the earliest I know of, it was already too late to retrieve the situation. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 23:22, 21 February 2018 (UTC) References
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The WP:NPOV issue is the lack of WP:BALANCE complained about in my previous reply's point no.2. The first WP:NPOV problem is the WP:CHERRYPICKING of facts which ignore India's role in stalling the proceedings.
1. We are not interested in blantant WP:OR about why Nehru wanted to throw a neutral body such as the United Nations out of negotiations to achieve his ends (whatever they were). We are interested in what the sources say. I am not proposing that language such as 'India's fault' be in the content. That is a talkpost explanation of source content. What I want mentioned is that India took the lead in kicking out a UN appointed plebiscite administrator (Nimitz). If this important point is not mentioned and only Bogra's part is mentioned it amounts to WP:CHERRYPICKING which creates a false impression to the reader of Pakistani guilt and Indian innocence.
2. Your sentence sourced to Rizvi ″Having agreed to Nehru's proposal in Delhi without any qualifications, Bogra later objected to the replacement of Admiral Nimitz as the plebiscite administrator″ contradicts Ganguly who says ″They also reached an informal agreement that the initial UN appointed plebiscite administrator, Adm. Chester W. Nimitz of the United States, would have to be replaced. India had taken the lead in pushing for Nimitz's removal because it had perceived a pro-Pakistani bias on the part of the United States in the Security Council debates. However, when word of this informal agreement became public, an outcry ensued against the Indian position throughout influential sections of the Pakistani press. Nehru and Bogra, to their mutual credit, nonetheless managed to limit the damage and placed the negotiations back on track. Their success, however, was short lived. In late February 1954, the Eisenhower administration announced its intention to provide military assistance to Pakistan.″
Now in the interests of moving ahead to find a mutually acceptable resolution you will need to WP:BALANCE the sources and show us your draft for checking.
Correct information about the true history behind the whole state of affairs.
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Kautilya3 has written a wall of non-NPOV to explain the 'context', probably to sway the mediators to his side. But his context is full of WP:OR and WP:POV. So I will provide here a more accurate context, complete with sources and (copying Kautilya3's style) the quotes from the sources. India did indeed take the Kashmir conflict to the UN, which subsequently passed resolutions calling for a plebiscite/referendum in the state of J&K whereby its residents would get to choose their political future. A separate commitment to the Kashmiri people for their self determination had already been made earlier by India as a condition of accession on the provisional Instrument of Accession. However, scholars including Indian scholars such as A.G. Noorani have found that India and in particular Nehru (the first Indian PM) were never sincere in their commitment to a referendum for the Kashmiri people and wanted to wriggle their way out of the dead end they got themselves into. You will see this wriggling through the history of the mediation. So the UNSC passed resolution 29 (1948) and established the United Nations Commission for India and Pakistan (UNCIP0 whose role was to mediate between the two countries. The UNSC first asked its president General McNaughton to mediate. He proposed demilitarization and neutral administration by and on all sides. His proposals were quite popular in the council and one of the parties to the dispute, Pakistan, accepted them with minor modifications. However, India just refused and the Americans who had an important role to play as they were leading the Security Council identified India's refusal as an example of its intransigence and delaying tactics so a referendum would not happen, something Indian officials had admitted privately to their American counterparts already. The Americans saw that the Indians kept on rejecting the findings of neutral UN appointees. Anyways India ended up reluctantly agreeing to the McNaughton proposals. McNaughton's proposals were to be implemented by Sir Owen Dixon for the whole state, who was as UN mediator also going to replace the UNCIP. Sir Owen Dixon made a number of demilitarization proposals. India rejected them all. So Dixon had to criticize India quite strongly for its negative reactions. In the end Dixon abandoned the state-wide plebiscite idea, to Pakistan's displeasure, and said there only needed to be a plebiscite in the Kashmir Valley. India ended up rejecting even that, saying only its troops should be allowed to remain in Kashmir during the plebiscite even though Dixon's proposals were that both countries keep their troops out. Dixon concluded that India won't be agreeing to conditions conducive for a free and fair plebiscite. After this the Americans became more distrustful of India and decided to keep out of the Kashmir negotiations because Nehru was deliberately stirring up anti-American propaganda, alleging that they were 'pro-Pakistan'. So America is the real victim here, not India. So the Commonwealth took the matter up after the UN and made a proposal so that there would either be a joint Indo-Pakistani force or Commonwealth force in Kashmir while a plebiscite would take place. Pakistan accepted but India once again rejected. Then the UNSC asked both countries again to honour the resolutions calling for a plebiscite. UK and USA said that if the two countries could not agree bilaterally arbitration could be considered. Pakistan accepted, India once again rejected, for which it got criticized by the Chairman of UNCIP, Josef Korbel. Then India got into conflict with Sheikh Abdullah, the most popular political party in Indian held-Kashmir, who was dreaming of an independent Kashmir and India ended up imprisoning him. Around this time Nehru and the Pakistani PM got into voluntary bilateral negotiations. The UN even at this point remained relevant and had a continued role later in the 1950s. In the negotiations both 'agreed' to holding a plebiscite, though it has been argued in WP:RS that India's agreement with Pakistan was all for show to demoralize the Kashmiris seeking independence from both countries and also to avert UN attention otherwise it could increase Kashmiri unrest. Now here comes the Nimitz problem. The mainstream scholarly assessment is that Nehru was intransigent, in other words never sincere in his promise to hold a plebiscite. This is admitted by the minority of scholars like Mahesh Shankar who champion Nehru. America which had tried to solve the dispute like the UN, UK and Commonwealth was accused of being pro-Pakistan by India. That the American Adm. Nimitz, initially appointed as plebiscite administrator by the neutral UN, was being kicked out by India was because of its own perception that he would have a pro-Pakistani bias. This is not a fact, just India's perception, according to the reliable sources. The common thread you see in all this history is that India constantly dodged a plebiscite under one excuse or the other. Even the minority pro-Nehru scholars agree that India laid obstructions to a plebiscite although they think the obstructions were for nobler reasons. Now why should we worry about India/Nehru's perceptions about bilateral/multilateral? All that matters is the history, the common thread that runs through the historical events and the mainstream scholarly interpretation of the events.--NadirAli نادر علی (talk) 05:00, 22 February 2018 (UTC) References
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Second statement by moderator
It appears that the issue has to do with the wording of the statement about the issue about the plebiscite administrator. Will each editor please propose their one-paragraph text of how they think the article should read about that, and tell where in the article it should go?
If there are any issues other than this wording, please tell what they are, and we may have to discuss them separately. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:26, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
Second statements by editors
The old content already has these two sentences:
Other than demanding that the plebiscite administrator not be from one of the major powers, he placed no other conditions... ... According to Schofield, Pakistan's reluctance to consider an arbitrator other than Admiral Nimitz, and India's lack of approval of Nimitz, led to a stall in proceedings.
I am opposed to the phrase "India's lack of approval of Nimitz", because it suggests that India had something against Nimitz. Rather, this "lack of approval" followed from the principle that the plebiscite administrator not be from one of the major powers. As far as we know, Bogra agreed with the principle.
So, I would suggest something like:
Other than demanding that the plebiscite administrator not be from one of the major powers, he placed no other conditions.... ... Nehru's demand that the plebiscite administrator should not be from one of the major powers meant that the previously appointed UN administrator, Admiral Nimitz from the United States, needed to be replaced. Pakistan was reluctat to consider an administrator other than Nimitz. This led to a stall in proceedings.
It seems best not drag in Bogra here, because his own predilections seem to have been quite favourable. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 20:35, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
References
- ^ Raghavan, War and Peace in Modern India 2010, p. 225 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFRaghavan,_War_and_Peace_in_Modern_India2010 (help); Rizvi, India, Pakistan and the Kashmir Problem 1992, pp. 57–59; Ishaq Khan, Kashmiri Muslims: Social and Identity Consciousness 1996, pp. 34, 38 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFIshaq_Khan,_Kashmiri_Muslims:_Social_and_Identity_Consciousness1996 (help); Schaffer, The Limits of Influence 2009, pp. 42–44 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFSchaffer,_The_Limits_of_Influence2009 (help); Shankar, Nehru's Legacy in Kashmir 2016, pp. 6–7 harvnb error: no target: CITEREFShankar,_Nehru's_Legacy_in_Kashmir2016 (help)
- ^ Schofield, Kashmir in Conflict 2003, p. 83-86. sfn error: no target: CITEREFSchofield,_Kashmir_in_Conflict2003 (help)
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India did indeed have something against Nimitz. Thats why it took the lead in demanding his removal. It perceived a pro-Pakistani bias on America's part (which we know from reading other sources is an Indian self-made perception and not a fact). So India's lack of approval for Nimitz or something that shows India's opposition to Nimitz is key here. India's wanting to keep out major powers was just another one of its games, it did not want the UN or anyone involved because it wanted to force the Kashmiris quiet after their leader Sheikh Abdullah was arrested for toying with independence. Keeping the Kashmiris quiet was the goal of the drama behind the so-called 'plebiscite offer' according to scholars including Indian ones such as Noorani.--NadirAli نادر علی (talk) 05:19, 24 February 2018 (UTC) References
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Talk:2018 Hong Kong bus accident#Condolences
– This request has been open for some time and must be reviewed. Filed by 223.89.144.195 on 06:27, 15 February 2018 (UTC).Have you discussed this on a talk page?
Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.
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The dispute is quite simple which is to whether to remove the the "Mainland Chinese government" section in the article 2018_Hong_Kong_bus_accident (see one of the disputed edits). The other user "Citobun" insists that the content of this section is "inconsequential" and "propagandistic" and should thus be removed. Whilst I believe that that section should be kept.
Have you tried to resolve this previously?
I have tried to discuss this isuue with the other user in the talkpage. Unfortunately we two simply cannot reach a consensus and still adhere to our own views.
How do you think we can help?
Give us a third-party and neutral opinion so that we can resolve it.
Summary of dispute by Citobun
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.This Beijing IP (as well as 223.104.19.131, using a dynamic IP I guess) is an WP:SPA going about pushing the viewpoint of the Chinese government here and there. When I originally wrote the "reactions" section I purposely left out inconsequential reactions, like token politician condolences, because many officials and governments expressed such sentiments, and I don't think it's useful to fill up the article with this sort of cruft, especially from parties who are not involved with the incident. Upon removing the section I was promptly accused of being "anti-China". It is apparent from IP's editing behavior and attitude that the purpose of adding this section is simply to assert Chinese sovereignty over Hong Kong. Secondly, by "propagandistic" I refer to the melodramatic tone of the original content. It wasn't a quotation either. The version I revised (before deleting it entirely) is better but still odd and still ultimately kind of pointless to include.
I am pretty sure the above two IPs are related to 171.10.177.144?? I suspect sock puppetry, or collusion among Chinese political agenda editors, through some outside means of communications, who are edit warring on the same few articles.
I also want to add that we already got a third opinion at the talk page. And lastly, it makes no sense to call me "anti-China" for this considering I was the one who originally added the responses from Carrie Lam (the most prominent pro-China figure in Hong Kong) as well as the pro-Beijing Federation of Trade Unions. The difference is that Lam and the FTU's comments had actual implications, whereas the comments from the mainland government were just inconsequential token formalities. Citobun (talk) 11:56, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
Summary of dispute by 223.89.144.195
Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Talk:2018 Hong Kong bus accident#Condolences discussion
Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.Just one thing I would like to point out, the original content of this section was not added by me, but by NYKTNE (talk · contribs) through this edit.--223.89.144.195 (talk) 09:20, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer note - The filing editor is advised that if they want to engage in dispute resolution, they will be better off to register an account. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:49, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer note - If the only issue is whether to keep or remove a section, a Request for Comments may be appropriate. The purpose of discussion here would be to decide whether to compromise, such as by abridging the section. Do the editors want assistance in compromise, or do they want a yes/no answer? Robert McClenon (talk) 23:15, 15 February 2018 (UTC)
- To me, any assistance in compromise is better. --223.89.144.195 (talk) 02:06, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
- Volunteer note - If the editors want a yes/no answer, they may ask for a Third Opinion. This noticeboard doesn't decide who is right. If the editors want to engage in moderated discussion here, I would suggest that the unregistered editor register an account. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:22, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
Talk:Near-death experience
– General close. See comments for reasoning.All socks have been properly dusted.Nothing more to indulge in:)~ Winged Blades 16:58, 22 February 2018 (UTC) |
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Filed by Perky28 on 20:25, 20 February 2018 (UTC). Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved Dispute overview About a month ago, I was shocked to see the total disappearance of S. L. Thaler’s research from the WP page on near-death experience, along with all its supporting references. Knowing that for years this article has included his work, and then reading the personal attacks on its talk page, I was especially motivated to reintroduce his research. Then, after two reversions involving Jytdog, I attempted a compromise, simply adding references to the article so that readers would have the option to dig deeper into this highly relevant research. However, even that minor edit was rejected by Jytdog, who seems steadfastly resistant to any mention whatsoever of Thaler in this article. The irony is that the page cites the Journal of Near-Death Studies three times, as a primary sources for other researchers, but for some reason Thaler's peer-reviewed papers in this same journal are disallowed by Jytdog. Also, an article by a staff reporter for Scientific American serves as a secondary source in this article. However, for Thaler, a similar article doesn't even qualify as valid. Jytdog also disqualifies Thaler's peer-reviewed, secondary and primary sources out of Elsevier. I would think the papers' merit and relevance had already been determined prior to their publication by experts in the field. Other editors, such as Skeptical Brit, dismisses (with prejudice) a published article in Elsevier's most selective neural network journal, Neural Networks, simply calling it weird, and then deleting it. Jytdog, the SciAm article was published in the cellulose magazine, with another following in 1995, not just in archival html. Obviously there are different perspectives on the topic of NDE, and if one camp wants to dominate, they purposely leave out contradictory work. Besides, the Atlantic article was incomplete, possibly to widen the article's appeal among its non-mathematical readership. In the meantime, more thorough authors have repeatedly mentioned Thaler's work. The point is that the Thaler model is agnostic to brain anatomy, and discusses the phenomenon from first principles, namely non-linear switching elements (i.e., neurons) and synaptic integration. The argument typically goes over the head of the general public, but hardly a reason to obliterate all Thaler content and references. And with all DUE respect, the merit of his work has already been determined by peer review by some very reputable journals. Perky28 (talk) 21:56, 20 February 2018 (UTC) Have you tried to resolve this previously? I've tried, without success, to engage Jytdog on the article's talk page to seek a resolution. How do you think we can help? Neutral parties are needed to judge the validity of the references used in what was once the long-standing Computational Psychology section of this article. Summary of dispute by JytdogPlease keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.I think we need to get clarity on where everybody is coming from before we can turn and address content. I am still awaiting a response to this. Jytdog (talk) 20:59, 20 February 2018 (UTC) On the content issue, Perky keeps citing primary sources by Thaler, and an editorial rebutting Thaler. There was a hm! report in scientific american back in 1993 (see JSTOR 24941474 but if you look at sources providing authoritative overviews of NDE (say PMID 25357254, called "Almost 40 years investigating near-death experiences: an overview of mainstream scientific journals.", nor in the recent book ISBN 978-0-06-177725-7, or to grab something easy, this popular summary in the Atlantic) this "AI as a model for NDE" stuff isn't mentioned. Perky has been nonresponsive on this essential point. What that means is that this is UNDUE. I of course remain open to seeing sources about NDE generally that discuss this so that we can see that it is given WEIGHT by people in the field. This is the typical problem we have conflicted or advocacy editors - wanting to give UNDUE emphasis to pet theories (their own or those of others), but I haven't been able to have that discussion as the OP is not engaging. Jytdog (talk) 21:15, 20 February 2018 (UTC) Summary of dispute by Skeptical BritPlease keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.Talk:Near-death experience discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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Slowly whitewashing Kulala page with false references
– General close. See comments for reasoning.The parties have not had any extensive discussion of the issue on a talk page, which is a mandatory prerequisite to mediated-dispute-resolution.
For what it's worth, there's no dispute that the currently written content is accurately reflected from a very-reliable source and the sole bone of contention has been already explicitly laid-out by Sitush on the talk-page. Still, if anybody wishes, I can provide an OCR-grab of the G-books text at the t/p. I will also advise the filing editor to kindly disclose the previous accounts he/she may have used in Misplaced Pages and read about our strong prohibition upon any attempts to right great wrongs. Thankfully,~ Winged Blades 15:03, 23 February 2018 (UTC) |
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Filed by Swati salian on 14:42, 23 February 2018 (UTC). Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute Users involved
Dispute overview This is a page where false reference book is given to the contents as reliable source and original page given by author is whitewashed. Now even page is blocked from editing. Below is the reference book References
Have you tried to resolve this previously? I tried to talk on this matter .Many different users tried to solve the dispute but still not rectified. Please revert the kulala page back to original. How do you think we can help? Please revert the kulala page back to original. Or else remove the disputed contents from the page which is false. Summary of dispute by situshAdding disruptive information in the article ------"This has historically meant that they were the lowest-ranked of the Shudra castes in the Hindu varna system". Summary of dispute by neilnBlocking the article and users even if they try to talk in well behaved manner. Summary of dispute by justmangalorelack of patience on the matter Kulala discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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Norristown State Hospital
– General close. See comments for reasoning. Filed by HerbiePocket on 18:57, 24 February 2018 (UTC).Closed, after changing its name to Norristown State Hospital, which is the subject article, for multiple reasons. First, there has been no discussion on the article talk page, which is a precondition to any discussion here. Discussion on a user's talk page, while useful, is not a substitute for discussion on the article talk page. Second, the dispute, which has to do with copyright violation, is not the sort of dispute for which this noticeboard is designed. Copyright violation is a legal matter that Misplaced Pages takes seriously (even if few other web sites do). Third, although I have not reviewed the dispute in depth, it appears that administrator User:Diannaa is completely correct, especially if the filing party first copied the information to the hospital's web site, thus placing it under their copyright. Fourth, the filing editor should consider simply rewording the questioned material and editing the Misplaced Pages article cleanly. If the filing editor wants to pursue this further, they should first discuss it on the article talk page, and should be aware that editors who fail to heed warnings about copyright violation are usually blocked, because Misplaced Pages takes copyright very seriously. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:35, 24 February 2018 (UTC) |
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Have you discussed this on a talk page? Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already. Location of dispute
Users involved Dispute overview I have been attempting to resolve some of the issues with the article for Norristown State Hospital. This Administrator lays claims the the entirity of my edits have been pulled from an outside source, Asylum Projects (where I composed a separate article). In doing so she reverted the article to its prior form. I have made the request from her to remove all the portions of the article that she feels are problematic, but to keep those sections that are not. She wrongly claims that the whole of the article is taken from an outside source, and refuses to make the restoration of any text. This can be easily determined with a cursory glance, as the article in question has several sections that have no parallel on Asylum Projects. Have you tried to resolve this previously? This issue was discussed with Diannaa, but she remains firm in her decision to remove the page and freeze its content. How do you think we can help? I would like to see some arbitration take place, or at the very least, a second opinion regarding the nature of this dispute. The content in question seems ipse dixit. Ultimately, I would like the non-disputed material restored, as I had originally requested. Summary of dispute by DiannaaPlease keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.User talk:Diannaa discussionPlease keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
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